VN - Ren'Py - Completed - TLOL [v1.0] [AlexZeroOne]

Sadly not good.

The game is very short, vanilla sex between joel and ally.

The animations are kinda boring here.

The character look not good, I hate joel face.

The dialogue is very awful, on the same level as real life porn.

Great game! The animations are amazing! The game is short but very satisfying and the animations are very good! Wish the stills before the scenes reflected that. However great animation and story line good job!

The game was good. The animations were fantastic. Though it was a parody game liked the characters and how the developer tried to give depth to the character. I would definitely recommend the games to others. Best of luck to the developers.

wtf why LOL but yes i played it...

Pros:
Quality. - animations, main menue, effects/light are great

Cons:
the rest which means:

- characters doesn't look like their alias
- dev can't decide if he wants to go mature or pre-mature (i would have far more liked the mature version...)
- guy doesn't look old enough + totally different
- girls way too thin
- 95% is russian....


for me the game only deserves 3 stars cause of the render quality and animations the rest would be lower

Excellent! I really, really enjoyed this unashamedly brief yet diamond bright gem of an experience.

I've no idea what TLOL means (surely not The Language of Love?), but I think I would have chosen TLOC: The Language of Consent, for this is what I truly liked about what I consider, rightly or wrongly, to be the underlying theme of this tale.

I really enjoyed the many subtle touches on the different influences affecting both Joel and Ellie. How Joel felt his age gave him a sense of fatherhood towards Ellie with the powerful sense of caring and protection it clearly brought and which caused him to feel so confused and compromised both in admitting, and surrendering to, the innate desire of a man for a woman, a young woman.

I liked the bravery in trust exhibited by Ellie (though, on reflection, perhaps bolstered somewhat by the power of lust) in admitting to Joel that despite her predilection for women over men, she nevertheless had also desired him (or rather, perhaps, his body) for a long time.

I also was impressed by how finely balanced the trust between them was shown to be in the alternate ending offered, where, when Joel's desire ultimately swept away his senses, he forsook the respect and principles he had hitherto shown towards Ellie throughout their union and, I regretfully believe, reverted to type, forcing himself upon her and, in so doing, destroying the happiness that is shared between them in the other ending and paying the ultimate and clearly, for him, unthinkable price.

None of the aspects of the story; language, style etc not liked by the other reviewers diminished in the slightest my great enjoyment and appreciation of the skill and effort put in by the Dev. To my mind and eyes, all aspects blended perfectly into a wonderful experience that I enjoyed very much and that I do so hope many subsequent viewers will also have and take the opportunity to savor.

Thanks AlexZeroOne for the honor and the pleasure. I appreciate it and, as I just said, I hope many more will too.

First, I hope to see more from this dev, this was some good stuff for sure! There were a few translation mistakes but that's easy to fix. The renders were pretty good too, a little cartoony in a few elements (like the fire) but overall very nice. Also some issues with collisions with that rug.

And OH the animations. I agree that I don't think I've ever seen animations this good in an H scene ever. The characters were animated, their eyes were blinking, their hair was moving, there was stuff moving in the background too. Top notch!

The only tiny thing that I noticed was that the animations seemed like they might actually go longer than expected and maybe there would be a way to put an indicator that it is still playing (i.e. not just looping).

I hope this didn't take six months to create because I want more!

Similar to AlexZeroOne's previous games, this one does not excel in terms of story and dialogue. In fact, both are pretty bad. I never played the original game, so I can't compare the two, but I think it's safe to say that story writing isn't the dev's biggest talent.

However, the characters, the renders and especially the animations more than make up for that! These are some of the best animations I've seen in a porn game and they make the sex scenes incredibly hot. I hope the dev will stick to creating these short games where the main focus is on the sex scenes rather than the story.

The game fulfil the promise.

It doesn't matter that it is short, render, animations, and assets are very well designed.

I personally like more elaborated sex scenes, where there are more assets dedicated to it. This sex scene, even if it nicely designed, looks too swift and hurried.

The story is almost inexistent but it is ok for this game!

Well done dev.