VN - Ren'Py - Tomboy Supremacy [v0.8a] [Abere Lucifer]

boring romp with no story, character development or redeeming qualities

so many words but nothing said, sex scenes are few and far between but when they finally happen, its a non-event that the character barely acknowledge and changes nothing in the world

author avoids valid critism by citing it as woke, as if anyone is really offended by his 14 year old edgy humor from 4chan 2009

Boregasm. Mostly reading a gang of inane text about nothing sexy. Most of the VERY RARE sex is vanilla and seems like an afterthought and not the goal of this game posted in a SEX GAME forum.
The writing is mostly infused with lame humor and tries too hard to have an edge to it every character is busy being the same sassy opiniated person that the models don't really need names, there's far too much dialog Vs sex and none of the dialog is sexy or stimulating or build up to anything sexy or stimulating .
The art is pretty good and most of the girls are cute but most of what happens with them is unsatisfying.

I love your games!
I came for the fap and stayed because of your humor, Cozmo is awesome and Mary Sue the squirrelhunter is great. In my mind all the characters are likeable and funny.
I hope moreanaösex will be available like in the new update
Keep up your good work!
Sorry for my bad english, it´s not my first language.

The story of this visual novel is still not entirely clear to me. I'm not sure if it has a defined plot line yet, although perhaps that could change in future updates?. While we encounter various unique characters like the main character's pregnant girlfriend, his sister Luna, his mom, and other family members, it seems to lack a deep narrative. It mainly portrays a slice of life of a family in Southern Missouri, which is perfectly fine with me. I'm not passing judgment, just observing that there isn't a strong plot or suspense.
One thing this AVN definitely doesn't lack is humor – there's plenty of absurd humor that I found amusing at times, although Luna's lengthy conversations with her teddy bear Cozmo can be a bit tiresome.

Visually, the game is decent, especially Marie Sue's character design. The sex scenes are alright, but it's unfortunate that the animations are not as polished – the robotic loops with minimal frames per second can be off-putting. Additionally, the absence of music is notable.

While there are areas for improvement in this adult visual novel, my overall experience was not negative. I would recommend it to anyone curious about the taboo theme it explores.

The girls are okay looking but the sex scenes are uninspired.
Scenes last forever since the bad writing has the characters just droning on and on.
Game tries way too hard to be funny, especially with the overuse of the annoying, talking bear. So annoying, in fact, that it is ultimate why I stopped playing game.

The renders and overall character design are good, which is why I'm giving two stars instead of one. The rest is just not worth your time. Sex scenes are bland. Dialogue is boring and serves little to no point. The humor, like many VNs that try to be funny all the time, just falls flat far too often and only serves to pad out a story that doesn't seem to have any real direction. I think the dev would be better off creating models for other people's VNs.

Hard to rate.

On the one hand:
+ The models are adorable. I want more of them.
+ Humorous. And jokes are funny.

On the other hand:
- Sex with these great models is... not really sexy. Badly designed scenes.
- Jokes are unending. And they don't lead to any build-up.

Nothing leads to anything.

If I were to advise the author, I'd say to treat your story as a Dark Souls level.
You design a hot sex scene. And then build everything that leads to this sex scene in a particular way - so it would make the culminating sex scene hotter.
Every. Little. Thing.

Hilarious and the girls are sexy Mary sue and Luna ae my favs. The choices are minimal so the story moves easily. My only critique would be instead of a single animation in the sex scenes you put more positions in static renders.

This fucking game.

I gave up after two or three hours of hoping something interesting or tittilating would happen. Mostly what's here is, talking. So much talking. Every character goes ON and ON and ON, and they all have the same barely veiled authorial voice, so it's like this guy is in your ear every second.

And it might be more tolerable if what he was saying was genuinely funny or interesting or drove some sort of plot forward, but no, that's not happening here. It's like every time a character opens his or her mouth, it's an excuse for an edgy transgressive teenager to be edgy and transgressive for no real purpose other than to be edgy and transgressive. I wish this guy were even half as clever as he seems to think he is, that might make it worth sticking around for the few-and-far-between sex scenes.

And yeah there are a couple of sex scenes. They're mostly uninspired affairs. The renders are fine? I guess? tbh I can't even remember if there's any animation, I'm guessing it was instantly forgettable if there was. But even when they're boning these characters CANNOT SHUT THE FUCK UP FOR ONE GODDAMN SECOND. No, when they're not literally fellating the tall blonde chiseled-good-looks dev stand-in, they're rhetorically fellating him, because everyone loves him, everyone wants to fuck him, everyone wants to have his baby, and when they're not lavishing Herculean amounts of praise on this dude and comparing notes on how they want to have all his babies, they're standing around saying stupid edgy culture war shit to each other. The MC is everybody's hero but if you ask me the real hero is anybody who manages to sustain an erection through all this. If you inexplicably get it up and anything remotely sexy comes along, better take the opportunity to rub one out immediately, because it'll be at least half an hour before you get another chance.

Post says "IF YOU USE WORDS SUCH AS 'NAZI, FASCIST, OR ANY KIND OF -IST or -PHOBE' TO DESCRIBE FOLKS YOU DON'T AGREE WITH PLEASE STAY AWAY". Okay but I'll do you one better. If you use words like 'boring, long winded, exhausting, and tedious as fuck' to describe games where nothing happens except for every character saying the same insipid edgy things in the same indistinguishable teenage-edgelord voice, on and on while you pray that maybe the next click will bring you to something sexy or at least an end to this interminable scene but it doesn't, of course it doesn't, because the game is mostly just a collection of halfway attractive renders as backdrop for this guy getting a chance to say all the edgy insipid things that no one in real life will stand still long enough to listen to him say... [takes deep breath] shit, where was that sentence going... oh right. If all that nonsense does not sound like your idea of fun sexytimes: PLEASE STAY AWAY.

One star for halfway attractive renders, none for anything else. Plenty of other games on this site will waste less of your time, or at least waste it in more entertaining or less irritating ways. Please enjoy those games instead.

The game is just silly, it belongs to that category, but the games in that category are usually bad, with a couple of exceptions that dont pretend to be something and just deliver content. This one doesn't.

you will see a lot of masturbation, but there are only 2 characters available in the present or near future. A game like this that have like 10 different charcters, and you can only get 2 of them, cant say it has a bright future.

also scenes seem to just happen with little connective tissue, at some point It hink you need to copy the dialogues in a notebook and make a quick script of the scenes to understand what is going on.
Can't recommend this one where there are projects of this nature that are far better.
For a game called The tomboy supremacy, the 2 available characters dont look exactly like tomboys, I dont see the supremacy if those Tomboy characters dont procreate.
Whatever, not worth it

Story 3/5
I was so split on this one, after the first 5 mins i thought for sure i would hate it since im just not into forced LIs and like to build and pick the girls i want to fuck and in this one you start out by fucking your sister, on top of that you already have a GF whos pregnant, so game feels like a mindless fuckfest but even though i normaly hate those kind of games with a passion, something still kept me reading on....and for some weird reason MC never really fucks anyone even though theres plenty of girls around him that wants him hes only fucking 2 of them which is a bit of a let down.

I mean story is pretty much a full blown redneck incest story where girls are ment to breed one kid after the other, add some crazy girls with some real mental issues like talking to a teddybear constantly and people asking her what it said, it did add some fun dialogs and i enjoyed it for the most part, then theres a girl that loves hunting squirrels with machineguns....it really couldent be more redneck if it tried, so if you arent into the redneck mindset of characters dont play this one.

And dont take this game seriously its pretty much just trying to be funny none stop and theres no real red tread to follow or any real main story, you pretty much just get trown around to watch diffrent members of a redneck family going on with their normal redneck every day lives.

Theres no relationship build-up or anything like that, everyone seems to be in love with MC and want to have hes kids, its a bit boring but i guess for a pure simple porngame it fits.

I wasent a fan of all the anal its just not my thing and when there so much of it and not a choice it becomes a turn-off.

Girls 4/5
I liked most of them and its refreshing with builds that are normal and even small tits compared to the normal big tittet bimbo games you see constantly.

Animations 2/5
They just arent good and needs alot of improvements and alot better cam views.

Music 0/5
Silent which makes for a more boring game.

Choices 2/5
There arent really any choices other then creampie or not, take pills or not, when it comes to LIs i dont know if it will ever have any choices since there arent really much going on in the relationship area yet.

For now i cant really give this more then 3 stars and in some ways i feel like thats being nice, it could become better but need alot more sex scenes with diffrent girls and better animations, music would be nice as well, but its still prett early in the game really so ill revisit this one at some point.

This game makes me feel torn. Like it has potential, but it undermines itself every step of the way.

Let's break down the more objective aspects of the game before I get into my opinions.

Renders: Actually pretty solid overall. There is some weirdness (the hands look weird in several renders) you run into but nothing that made me go "WTF" or brought me out of the experience.

Animations: There are animations... but they're so bad it'd actually be better if there weren't.

Plot/writing: Technically sound writing on a fairly cliche, basic plot line. Not inherently a bad thing, I actually prefer basic stories. When the writing is good it can carry a basic plot line a long way. This is just an objective observation. I'll get more into the positive and negative points of the story later as it's what drove me to make this review.

Models: This is honestly what drew me in, I'm a bit tired of the same-ol'-big-titty-same-face-same-models over and over. They're not little kids and they're not titty monsters. Just attractive women.

Alright with the things that can be relatively objectively evaluated out of the way, lets get into the more subjective.

The writing, while technically sound, is asinine. The dev seems to have confused random and extreme with humor. Yes, randomness can be funny if it's used appropriately and in small doses, but when that's all you have going for you, it loses appeal very quickly. The story consists of several mentally unstable characters doing insane things for no reason other than in an attempt to be funny for the reader. For instance, half the dialogue in the game is absurd dialogue between a mentally ill person and her teddy bear. If this approach had been taken much more lightly and sprinkled on top of good dialogue it would have added a lot of hilarity. However, the games writing is propped up almost entirely by poor shock value and juvenile 4chan-esque humor.

Normally I would have just moved on from this and not looked back but I'm just so disappointed because despite me not liking the writing, it was technically written really well. It's such a juxtaposition. The writing has a lot of potential if they just reel it in a bit and grow their characters instead of leaning on shallow personality traits. This game is polarizing because of the writing, but it didn't need to be. It could have used the same kind of humor and been much more well received if it just toned it down a bit.

Overall I'm giving this a 1/5 when it could have easily been a 4/5. There's simply no saving those animations lol.

Story: Put on auto and watch some youtube on the other screen.
Originality: Sisters horny for MC, big wow.
Renders: This might be the only reason to get 2/5 over 1/5. Some of the renders are not bad, but not all of them.
Animations: Really, really stiff.
Amount of content: 4 scenes, but it does say it's in alpha so I'm sure there's more to come based on the replay screen.

If all the teddy bear scenes get cut, it would help get to the real scenes of the game. Might be a 2.5 then if the Dev would focus on some lewd content over whatever is going on in the story.

Review for Tomboy Supremacy v0.6b:

Overall: 3.5/5 - I mostly liked it and it gave me a few good laughs. There's a lot of raunchy dialogue and a shitload of lewd incest content. However, both the renders and animations are dated.

Story: 3/5 - Seems like it's heading in the direction of the ultimate incest/halfcest/stepcest fuckfest where every girl also gets pregnant. Every girl in the story so far wants to fuck the MC.

Writing: 4.5/5 - English is good. This is a bit of a surprise. I expected it to be either typical "Engrish" or an attempt to imitate the slang and dialect of people from southern/central Missouri, which could also be bad. I thought most of the humor was funny although I wonder if typical players also feel that way.

Renders: 3/5, the quality is mostly good, but the renders look dated and the models are too similar-looking. Almost all of the women in the game have short hair and small breasts. Even the pregnant girl's breasts are small. Maybe this is supposed to fit with the "Tomboy" theme, but so far, I haven't seen the connection between the title and the story, so I'm not sure.

Animations: 2/5 - Some of the animations are passable, but some are pretty weird-looking and turn an erotic scene into a WTF. The game needs work here.

Content: 4/5 - The amount of content started out really low (for the amount of development time), but has really improved over time. The quality of the lewd scenes themselves aren't really that hot, though.

Gameplay: 4.5/5 - There are very few choices and that's how I prefer it. I like the walkthrough mode, too. I would rate this a 5 if the choices that are currently in the game were removed, because honestly, there are so few and they have such a small impact, I don't know why they even exist. Maybe that'll change later.

Other feedback: Most of the dialogues are on-point for the region, but either the dev is European or chose a lot of European assets. I happen to have grown up in west central Missouri and also lived for years in Europe. Here's some shit that's out of place:

• Some light switches, door handles/locks, electrical outlets from Europe/UK.
• Freestanding wardrobes in bedrooms (houses have structural closets).
• Euro-modern kitchens and furniture.
• More than one girl in a room that's over 18 and has small tits (or more accurately, more than one girl in a room that's over 18 and isn't obese ).

First of all, I will point out that the game is great for people who are looking for insane humor.
This is not a standard F95 fapping game, so if you are looking for pure fapping material, look elsewhere.
The Dev, Doc5252 is known for insane story's that go far beyond the edge.
But if you have a good (and weird) sense of humor, you should find this game to be a lot of fun.
Tomboy Supremacy is still relatively new, so it is still being fleshed out, but based on Doc's other work, it will be one mind altering and hilarious ride.

I really love this game, it's funny, sexy and awfully good renders. I so love the colours. And did I say it's funny?

The MC is a guy that's likeable but no pushover. He takes what he wants but he has a good heart.

The girls, oh yes the girls, the are so lovely even if they all are different. So, if you want variety you get it here. So, not a game were the girls look different but act the same.

I also love the renders here, they are so colourful and you have a lot to look at. The look of the people are the same as their moods. So not the same face for happy, angry, confussed or horny. That I like a lot.

The lewd scenes are the only thing could get better (nut they are there), still not a one-choice choice you have to click for the scenes to move forward (don't we hate that!). The girls are sexy enough but the animations could be better. No more complaining and all the other good stuff make me give it 5* anyway.

So if you want a funny story with a lot of sexy girls it's a game for you. Thanks Dev for this!

I could say many a thing about this, but I don't want to be too negative.

Scenery: 4/5 (fitting but not memorable. Changed a fair bit)

Models: 3/5 (they were all very different, but I found none overly attractive)

Story: 1/5

Sex: 1/5
The sex scenes were technically animated. They really shouldn't have been. Imagination is powerful. Let it work.

Lewd frequency: 2/5
Needed way more lewd visuals or actions per... overly done pointless dialogue... hmm.

Dialogue: 2/5
It was english. And the grammar was fine.
It just... was a lot of blabbing on about nothing.
Held skip, missed nothing.

Enjoyment: 2/5


Recommend?
No. Sorry

What to say about this game, I'm feeling my brain melting after this...
I can say for sure that this is the worst story plot I have ever seen. It's a ramble of ideas from a deranged mind, shocking even for the internet. The attempts at jokes are a joke in themselves, not funny at all. At best, it's elementary school level. The author also tries to make some jabs at political issues, but it's just cringe-worthy.
Nothing makes sense. There are three sisters, one of whom is clearly schizophrenic and going through a psychotic event. She's constantly talking to a teddy bear, and it's also hinted that they have sexual relations. She also has sex with everyone.
The other two sisters are also bizarre characters. One is a mentally challenged gun nut, and the other seems a bit more normal but has feelings for her brother, the MC, and don't know how to express it.
It's very hard to describe the MC. He has absolutely no personality and is completely bland.
My advice is to skip this one for your own good. It doesn't seem that this project was created with the intent of being good or cohesive. A porn movie has more depth to its plot than this. But if you do try, my advice is to skip through the dialogue. You won't be missing anything. Go straight to the hot scenes; there's no build-up to them. Also, the female bodies are really weird.

I'm honestly not sure if it deserves the five star YET, so take everything I have to say as someone who's only played an early version, but...

It has potential, and considering Doc's other games, that's really saying something. This is a VN creator who explores a lot of themes (especially less savory ones) that not a lot of people do, and I appreciate that, but it's clear they're trying to do a lot of things at once in other projects. This one? It feels like a single, coherent narrative for once, and I think it's going to stand out from their other stuff in a big way.

I reserve the right to change my mind when we see where it goes.

Nice new offering from Doc5252. Anyone familiar with his prior efforts will be a little taken aback by this one - for me, it's in a good way. It isn't as madcap as his earliest offerings, but still has a bit of that feel to it - it's what his writing style lends itself to.

The characters introduced so far are pretty damn cute and have their own definite personalities. Some games use cookie-cutter dull, GG breasted bimbos, but Doc doesn't do that unless the specific character calls for it - it's the exception, not the norm. And, while I truly love all of the LIs to this point, I've gotta say, my favorite character is probably Cozmo - he thinks many of the things the player is already thinking, and has some inspired ideas that I hope are actually foreshadowing.

If I had one suggestion: I like the way other Devs used italics or brackets to indicate a character's inner dialogue rather than stating "Thinking: ...". I don't think I've seen Doc use this approach before and it caught me off guard. But, other than some uncaught spelling and grammar (no, I don't mean the "dialectic" stuff), it's my only real nit to pick. Looking forward to the future development of this AVN.

One truly unique thing about this AVN: it finally inspired me to write my first review!