VN - Ren'Py - Tomboy Supremacy [v0.8b Full] [Abere Lucifer]

I'm honestly not sure if it deserves the five star YET, so take everything I have to say as someone who's only played an early version, but...

It has potential, and considering Doc's other games, that's really saying something. This is a VN creator who explores a lot of themes (especially less savory ones) that not a lot of people do, and I appreciate that, but it's clear they're trying to do a lot of things at once in other projects. This one? It feels like a single, coherent narrative for once, and I think it's going to stand out from their other stuff in a big way.

I reserve the right to change my mind when we see where it goes.

Nice new offering from Doc5252. Anyone familiar with his prior efforts will be a little taken aback by this one - for me, it's in a good way. It isn't as madcap as his earliest offerings, but still has a bit of that feel to it - it's what his writing style lends itself to.

The characters introduced so far are pretty damn cute and have their own definite personalities. Some games use cookie-cutter dull, GG breasted bimbos, but Doc doesn't do that unless the specific character calls for it - it's the exception, not the norm. And, while I truly love all of the LIs to this point, I've gotta say, my favorite character is probably Cozmo - he thinks many of the things the player is already thinking, and has some inspired ideas that I hope are actually foreshadowing.

If I had one suggestion: I like the way other Devs used italics or brackets to indicate a character's inner dialogue rather than stating "Thinking: ...". I don't think I've seen Doc use this approach before and it caught me off guard. But, other than some uncaught spelling and grammar (no, I don't mean the "dialectic" stuff), it's my only real nit to pick. Looking forward to the future development of this AVN.

One truly unique thing about this AVN: it finally inspired me to write my first review!

Weird story so far, but in a good way. It's certainly original. The visuals were fine, and the models didn't seem to be the usual Daz templates.

The dialog was a little disjointed at times, and one suggestion I have for the dev is if you have a conversation between two people where they take turns saying a single line, you don't need to switch scenes to whose speaking each time. It makes it look like a Marvel action scene with a cut every second.

Anyways, I'm looking forward to seeing how this develops. Best of luck with the game!

While it is in alpha game, the game has a good protentional to be a good game in the near future. The story is very simple but it can be even better. the environment is rough around edges but it can be fix. Looking for the future updates.

Mediocre waste of time. The writing is choppy and bland, the renders are nothing special. Which really sums up the entire "demo". Nothing exceptional, or even good beyond the renders of the one red-head. The demo wisecrackingly says "Yep, we blue balled you on purpose"...but in order for there to be blue balls, one would need to be aroused. 5 minutes of content isn't going to do that. If you want to build a subscriber base, you need to put in far more effort and energy into your product than what you've demonstrated with this release.