VN - Ren'Py - Tomboy Supremacy [v0.9b Full] [Abere Lucifer]

This game makes me feel torn. Like it has potential, but it undermines itself every step of the way.

Let's break down the more objective aspects of the game before I get into my opinions.

Renders: Actually pretty solid overall. There is some weirdness (the hands look weird in several renders) you run into but nothing that made me go "WTF" or brought me out of the experience.

Animations: There are animations... but they're so bad it'd actually be better if there weren't.

Plot/writing: Technically sound writing on a fairly cliche, basic plot line. Not inherently a bad thing, I actually prefer basic stories. When the writing is good it can carry a basic plot line a long way. This is just an objective observation. I'll get more into the positive and negative points of the story later as it's what drove me to make this review.

Models: This is honestly what drew me in, I'm a bit tired of the same-ol'-big-titty-same-face-same-models over and over. They're not little kids and they're not titty monsters. Just attractive women.

Alright with the things that can be relatively objectively evaluated out of the way, lets get into the more subjective.

The writing, while technically sound, is asinine. The dev seems to have confused random and extreme with humor. Yes, randomness can be funny if it's used appropriately and in small doses, but when that's all you have going for you, it loses appeal very quickly. The story consists of several mentally unstable characters doing insane things for no reason other than in an attempt to be funny for the reader. For instance, half the dialogue in the game is absurd dialogue between a mentally ill person and her teddy bear. If this approach had been taken much more lightly and sprinkled on top of good dialogue it would have added a lot of hilarity. However, the games writing is propped up almost entirely by poor shock value and juvenile 4chan-esque humor.

Normally I would have just moved on from this and not looked back but I'm just so disappointed because despite me not liking the writing, it was technically written really well. It's such a juxtaposition. The writing has a lot of potential if they just reel it in a bit and grow their characters instead of leaning on shallow personality traits. This game is polarizing because of the writing, but it didn't need to be. It could have used the same kind of humor and been much more well received if it just toned it down a bit.

Overall I'm giving this a 1/5 when it could have easily been a 4/5. There's simply no saving those animations lol.

Story: Put on auto and watch some youtube on the other screen.
Originality: Sisters horny for MC, big wow.
Renders: This might be the only reason to get 2/5 over 1/5. Some of the renders are not bad, but not all of them.
Animations: Really, really stiff.
Amount of content: 4 scenes, but it does say it's in alpha so I'm sure there's more to come based on the replay screen.

If all the teddy bear scenes get cut, it would help get to the real scenes of the game. Might be a 2.5 then if the Dev would focus on some lewd content over whatever is going on in the story.

Review for Tomboy Supremacy v0.6b:

Overall: 3.5/5 - I mostly liked it and it gave me a few good laughs. There's a lot of raunchy dialogue and a shitload of lewd incest content. However, both the renders and animations are dated.

Story: 3/5 - Seems like it's heading in the direction of the ultimate incest/halfcest/stepcest fuckfest where every girl also gets pregnant. Every girl in the story so far wants to fuck the MC.

Writing: 4.5/5 - English is good. This is a bit of a surprise. I expected it to be either typical "Engrish" or an attempt to imitate the slang and dialect of people from southern/central Missouri, which could also be bad. I thought most of the humor was funny although I wonder if typical players also feel that way.

Renders: 3/5, the quality is mostly good, but the renders look dated and the models are too similar-looking. Almost all of the women in the game have short hair and small breasts. Even the pregnant girl's breasts are small. Maybe this is supposed to fit with the "Tomboy" theme, but so far, I haven't seen the connection between the title and the story, so I'm not sure.

Animations: 2/5 - Some of the animations are passable, but some are pretty weird-looking and turn an erotic scene into a WTF. The game needs work here.

Content: 4/5 - The amount of content started out really low (for the amount of development time), but has really improved over time. The quality of the lewd scenes themselves aren't really that hot, though.

Gameplay: 4.5/5 - There are very few choices and that's how I prefer it. I like the walkthrough mode, too. I would rate this a 5 if the choices that are currently in the game were removed, because honestly, there are so few and they have such a small impact, I don't know why they even exist. Maybe that'll change later.

Other feedback: Most of the dialogues are on-point for the region, but either the dev is European or chose a lot of European assets. I happen to have grown up in west central Missouri and also lived for years in Europe. Here's some shit that's out of place:

• Some light switches, door handles/locks, electrical outlets from Europe/UK.
• Freestanding wardrobes in bedrooms (houses have structural closets).
• Euro-modern kitchens and furniture.
• More than one girl in a room that's over 18 and has small tits (or more accurately, more than one girl in a room that's over 18 and isn't obese ).

First of all, I will point out that the game is great for people who are looking for insane humor.
This is not a standard F95 fapping game, so if you are looking for pure fapping material, look elsewhere.
The Dev, Doc5252 is known for insane story's that go far beyond the edge.
But if you have a good (and weird) sense of humor, you should find this game to be a lot of fun.
Tomboy Supremacy is still relatively new, so it is still being fleshed out, but based on Doc's other work, it will be one mind altering and hilarious ride.

I really love this game, it's funny, sexy and awfully good renders. I so love the colours. And did I say it's funny?

The MC is a guy that's likeable but no pushover. He takes what he wants but he has a good heart.

The girls, oh yes the girls, the are so lovely even if they all are different. So, if you want variety you get it here. So, not a game were the girls look different but act the same.

I also love the renders here, they are so colourful and you have a lot to look at. The look of the people are the same as their moods. So not the same face for happy, angry, confussed or horny. That I like a lot.

The lewd scenes are the only thing could get better (nut they are there), still not a one-choice choice you have to click for the scenes to move forward (don't we hate that!). The girls are sexy enough but the animations could be better. No more complaining and all the other good stuff make me give it 5* anyway.

So if you want a funny story with a lot of sexy girls it's a game for you. Thanks Dev for this!

I could say many a thing about this, but I don't want to be too negative.

Scenery: 4/5 (fitting but not memorable. Changed a fair bit)

Models: 3/5 (they were all very different, but I found none overly attractive)

Story: 1/5

Sex: 1/5
The sex scenes were technically animated. They really shouldn't have been. Imagination is powerful. Let it work.

Lewd frequency: 2/5
Needed way more lewd visuals or actions per... overly done pointless dialogue... hmm.

Dialogue: 2/5
It was english. And the grammar was fine.
It just... was a lot of blabbing on about nothing.
Held skip, missed nothing.

Enjoyment: 2/5


Recommend?
No. Sorry

What to say about this game, I'm feeling my brain melting after this...
I can say for sure that this is the worst story plot I have ever seen. It's a ramble of ideas from a deranged mind, shocking even for the internet. The attempts at jokes are a joke in themselves, not funny at all. At best, it's elementary school level. The author also tries to make some jabs at political issues, but it's just cringe-worthy.
Nothing makes sense. There are three sisters, one of whom is clearly schizophrenic and going through a psychotic event. She's constantly talking to a teddy bear, and it's also hinted that they have sexual relations. She also has sex with everyone.
The other two sisters are also bizarre characters. One is a mentally challenged gun nut, and the other seems a bit more normal but has feelings for her brother, the MC, and don't know how to express it.
It's very hard to describe the MC. He has absolutely no personality and is completely bland.
My advice is to skip this one for your own good. It doesn't seem that this project was created with the intent of being good or cohesive. A porn movie has more depth to its plot than this. But if you do try, my advice is to skip through the dialogue. You won't be missing anything. Go straight to the hot scenes; there's no build-up to them. Also, the female bodies are really weird.

I'm honestly not sure if it deserves the five star YET, so take everything I have to say as someone who's only played an early version, but...

It has potential, and considering Doc's other games, that's really saying something. This is a VN creator who explores a lot of themes (especially less savory ones) that not a lot of people do, and I appreciate that, but it's clear they're trying to do a lot of things at once in other projects. This one? It feels like a single, coherent narrative for once, and I think it's going to stand out from their other stuff in a big way.

I reserve the right to change my mind when we see where it goes.

Nice new offering from Doc5252. Anyone familiar with his prior efforts will be a little taken aback by this one - for me, it's in a good way. It isn't as madcap as his earliest offerings, but still has a bit of that feel to it - it's what his writing style lends itself to.

The characters introduced so far are pretty damn cute and have their own definite personalities. Some games use cookie-cutter dull, GG breasted bimbos, but Doc doesn't do that unless the specific character calls for it - it's the exception, not the norm. And, while I truly love all of the LIs to this point, I've gotta say, my favorite character is probably Cozmo - he thinks many of the things the player is already thinking, and has some inspired ideas that I hope are actually foreshadowing.

If I had one suggestion: I like the way other Devs used italics or brackets to indicate a character's inner dialogue rather than stating "Thinking: ...". I don't think I've seen Doc use this approach before and it caught me off guard. But, other than some uncaught spelling and grammar (no, I don't mean the "dialectic" stuff), it's my only real nit to pick. Looking forward to the future development of this AVN.

One truly unique thing about this AVN: it finally inspired me to write my first review!

Weird story so far, but in a good way. It's certainly original. The visuals were fine, and the models didn't seem to be the usual Daz templates.

The dialog was a little disjointed at times, and one suggestion I have for the dev is if you have a conversation between two people where they take turns saying a single line, you don't need to switch scenes to whose speaking each time. It makes it look like a Marvel action scene with a cut every second.

Anyways, I'm looking forward to seeing how this develops. Best of luck with the game!

While it is in alpha game, the game has a good protentional to be a good game in the near future. The story is very simple but it can be even better. the environment is rough around edges but it can be fix. Looking for the future updates.

Mediocre waste of time. The writing is choppy and bland, the renders are nothing special. Which really sums up the entire "demo". Nothing exceptional, or even good beyond the renders of the one red-head. The demo wisecrackingly says "Yep, we blue balled you on purpose"...but in order for there to be blue balls, one would need to be aroused. 5 minutes of content isn't going to do that. If you want to build a subscriber base, you need to put in far more effort and energy into your product than what you've demonstrated with this release.