VN - Ren'Py - Completed - TRIBU [Ch. 6] [Eris Servant]

This short visual novel was not my cup of the tea. The graphics looks sometimes good and sometimes really bad. Also the renders are inconsistent. The characters could be much more attractive. The story is also bad. Worst of all is the choice of the fetishes (Play this game only if you are into scat and fatties).

Meh... The ladies were well rendered and the sex was hot however there were two things that really dragged this title down IMHO; one, scat content... it's just nasty; two was the nearly unintelligible English grammar, wrong words, misspelled words, sentence fragments posing as sentences, awful sentence structure... I could go on but you get the idea. This was one of the worst written English dialogue scripts I have read to date and I have played many hundreds of AVN titles. The terrible grammar made what could've and should've been a fascinating story into garbled gunk. Between the rancid grammar and what seemed to be large chunks of the story skipped over or just left out made this one intensely difficult to follow. The dev should seriously consider getting a qualified editor that is able to assist with story creation as well for any future efforts.

One other item that really frustrated me was calling an obvious trans-girl "he, him, his, boy, man" instead of addressing her as a woman. That is just rude and insensitive! I'm not a fan of all the "new speak", PC jargon but I do respect folks enough to address them as they prefer to be addressed. Trans-girls generally prefer female pronouns and should be afforded that courtesy.

I seriously struggled with how to rate this title. I love the renders and the H-scenes are extremely hot. But, the story is rather difficult to follow due to the lousy grammar and poor scene assembly. The missed opportunity to show proper respect to a transgendered person and forcing me to see the girls poop made a total of three strikes so I had little else to go on and gave this one only two stars as a result. All of these problems could be overcome by a thorough edit of the dialogue. If the dev decides to have a native English speaker edit this game then I would consider playing it again to reevaluate my rating but as it is, two stars is the most I can muster which is really sad. This title could've and should've been much better. Meh...

Adventure ever on, Phat

Naked women and futas roam around a beach, speaking nonsense and having sex. No strive for anything, no motivation or anything. Bodies are disproportionate, even ugly. Facial expressions are the same, no matter what. Imagine a monstrous ass woman, as if she comes from heavy lifting competition for women, but her upper part of the body is half the size of the lower one. Hips are ultra wide and could only be possible if the woman can lift 200kg dead lift. Feet are large and manly. I find this.. visuals totally unsexy and ugly.

Mostly some very hot looking women here, some nice tits, nice tanlines. Some nice........errrrrrr............there was some sex I think, not really sure after ages reading inane, mind-numbingly boring dialogue my eyes glazed over and I became mildly catatonic. Honestly these women could bore for their country at the International tedium games. Just awful and whoever wrote their words needs to go out and have real sex with a real woman. Shit innit, quite literally lol.

Story has too many plot points. Futa is there for porn's sake. Scat is there so be wary.
Even after muting the sounds I can hear awkward sloshing sounds and moans.

Meh. Play it if you have braincells and spermcells to kill.

No offence to the creator.

It's not a game at all. I could never wrap my head around why someone makes a nice collection/album and then walks the extra mile just to make it into a ren'py stuff so you can't choose which pics you want to look at and you can ONLY see the stuff in a specific order with a goddamn lot of spam between actually interesting stuff. As a collection, it would be easy 5 star

Not into scat, but i gave this a try because of the futa/trans tag. If the extent of the scat stuff is showing some people pooping, not a huge deal. That aside this KN has larger problems. The dev needs a native English speaker to edit/translate his work. What is here is a step up from MTL and in a game with a simple narrative that wasn't trying to do anything complicated that wouldn't be an issue. The issue is that the dev is trying to do something more complex narratively and the plot isn't your run of the mill AVN plot. That works against the Dev here because the writing while understandable for the most part doesn't hit the way it should. Visuals and animations are okay, though the renders look a bit washed out. If the dev fixes his translation i could probably reccomend this for people who like lesbian and futa content and who can deal with or enjoy scat content

How this train wreck has a 4.5 star rating I will never know. I wish I could rate it zero stars but I cant.

So whats good about it?

The renders.

Whats bad about it?

EVERYTHING ELSE!!

The first indication that this is not going to be anything but a mess is right from the start. You are given absolutely no backstory or anything of any kind to tell you what is going on. All you know is that 6 people are at some kind of beach where they "appear" to be roughing it. They have no contact with the outside world. Do we know why they are there? Nope! Do we know what has brought them together? Nope! Do we know what the place is for or what is is "disguised as"? Nope! They are just there and they appear to be stuck there for 7 days and they chose to be there.

The story doesn't get any better from there. Everyone loses their clothes for some unknown reason. Everyone is horny and doesnt know why. The host acts as if she is just as in the dark as the others. It isnt until chapter 4 that you begin to at least get some semblence of a picture of whats going on but guess what? You still have no idea whats going on other than the hostess is now trying to kill everyone. You still have no idea why or what they are there for or want. Oh did I mention that all of the characters have bodies like Arnold Schwarzenegger? When you finally see and actual guy, all of the women are bigger than he is. OMG. it just never ends.

Folks I am telling you. You will enjoy reading recipes out of a Betty Crocker Cookbook more than you will enjoy trying to figure this mess out. Don't waste your time.

There's a lot of potential here. I like a lot of the little details and ideas but it does feel a little disjointed. I do wish more attention was given to the model's armpits because personally I like attractive armpits and it goes well with the whole feet appeal. Currently from what I've seen they look out of place from the relatively high quality of everything else. I also like the sexual appeal of the game but the beach setting seems kinda a mismatch to the type of sexual content. And in general, the models seem to excel at the finer level and the broader idea/concept but lacking in the more mid low polygon shapes/forms. It feels similar with the dialogue where some specific scenes/dialogue are good and I like some of the scene ideas but it's like in that middle area of pacing, placement, progression of how those scenes fit in with each other where it seems to be lacking. Definitely an interesting project and has some things unique to offer from other games. I also think the sounds are nice and add to the experience.

This is a SCAT review. If you don't like it don't read it:

Well, the models look good but the proportions could be a bit natural. The story seems decent but it lacks continuity. Needs a bit more dialogue in my opinion. And finally a good scat game. Just wish the poop wouldn't magically disappear into the sand and maybe use different textures for the turds instead of just one. Just hope this won't get abandoned like most other scat games.

I really like the renders and the animations they are very good, it has music and some sound in the sex scenes I hope they can be improved on but for me, something in the sex scenes for sound is better than nothing. I saw a few spelling errors but no biggie. As for the scat I am not a fan of it but it was just the woman pooing and it disappeared into the sand so for me not so bad, it's not like some of the scat I have seen in some games the male MC has to eat it etc. I hope at some point we will be given choices. So far it's a story without choices. I really hope there will be an anal tag I didn't see that listed as a future fetish. Also, I don't know if it will be an option but I would love to see some Transgender on Transgender sex as well or even Transgender on Male as well. But I won't hold my breath. GL with the game I will keep an eye on this one.

The game starts with a somewhat unforseen situation and quickly evolves into a silly mess. Loud, constant, spamming smack sounds are heard throughout the game when .. I don't even know, when things are being said, when stuff happens, it just keeps playing this sound every other line of dialogue.. With no real reason for it. The story is.. Silly, like sillysilly, even for a porngame, first time in a while i actually just skipped the first few minutes of reading becaus i got bored almost instantly. Unfortunately the writing itself isn't that good either. Lots of sentences that.. don't really make sense or sound, i don't know, funny? Wrong?

The visuals/renders/scenes are not bad at all, could use some work, but not bad - They look engaging and feature girls with dicks, what more is there to say?

There's a catch tho, one i didn't get myself while checking the tags.
The game's dirty. And i don't mean that in a good way. (at least for me) - The first scene with a futa and a female is a blowjob scene, hot enough.. But they only keep talking about "smelly/stinking cream" (this is how they adress cum over the coruse of the game...) and about that the futa didn't clean herself after taking a piss and that the female loves that taste ... That was where i stopped. I checked some other scenes with the gallery-mod but i've seen a lot of.. This. This grossed me out to a point where i couldn't keep on playing.

Apparently some of said infos are hidden in a spoiler but i think this should be written for everyone to see in tags, where people usually look for stuff they like or not.

This is a great game! The MC and other character dynamics are good with amazing graphics and animations. The story is fairly short so far however I'm really enjoying the newer direction this game is headed. The story is definitely interesting leaving much to be seen/expected.

Only thing I recommend for the DEV to do is ensure the game has the applicable tags. I lowkey enjoy abnormal fetishes, but others may not be expecting to see someone take a dump on a beach, and find it hot however, the game is great and i'm loving what the DEV is doing so far. Perhaps the DEV can add the option of players to enable/disable certain content.

This is just so people who don't like certain things to be able to choose to turn it off and still enjoy the wonderful story. I see alot of reviews of people angered they were forced to see something without the option to disable content that may be offensive. This is why TAGS are so important. Keep up the good work! P.S I love the content but others may not so perhaps you can implement that in the next update.

Extremely promising game.

Art is really fantastic, among the best around. You not only get great renders with extremely hot girls (tanned, muscled, with big ass and big tits) but the animations are also incredible.

Gameplay is quite straightforward so far and I hope it keeps this way since the game has such great art.

Really looking forward for the next releases.

The initial release has been great (the renders are actually great), but if the dev actually does implement what he plans for the game as mentioned in the Dev Notes, that would be great. Looking forward to the next updates.