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Didn't they have a queue in place, with about 200 on it? He must have "worked" his way through quite a few of them by now.More. Counted 5 on the gorgon path alone.
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Not enough souls for that. I just did a nose count of young gorgons in the epilogue scene.
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Interesting. I had guessed that, but haven't seen that before.
Back when chatrooms were a relatively new thing, my friends and family agreed that putting something in brackets {} denoted that it was sarcasm.
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seen it few times. i use /end sarcasm if bother and post isn't obviously sarcastic.
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new elf to hornypussy: https://attachments.f95zone.to/2024/09/4082626_1726966097829.png
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So I played through the current build. Great game so far. The writing and story are really good, even though the central narrative seems to meander a little. But thats just a matter of taste that does not reflect on the overall quality.
My only real suggestion is to add a prologue or intro that explains the setting / world and provides some of the MCs history and relationships. I know that much of this is revealed piecemeal over time, but the narrative becomes confusing at times because, due to the lack of worldbuilding, the reader lacks context and must make assumptions about things. Respectfully, some introductory materials may fix many of these problems.
My only real suggestion is to add a prologue or intro that explains the setting / world and provides some of the MCs history and relationships. I know that much of this is revealed piecemeal over time, but the narrative becomes confusing at times because, due to the lack of worldbuilding, the reader lacks context and must make assumptions about things. Respectfully, some introductory materials may fix many of these problems.
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Hello all!
A busy week ahead of me. I have three scenes left to render, and all of them are relatively long. But that isn't surprising as text wise this is the longest of the updates so far. Plus some personal stuff distracting over the weekend didn't really help, but it will be there. Might take a day or two longer than normally but it will be done. I have a feeling I said that with the last update though...
Writing of 0.28.0 is in okay shape, it is in a state that I know what to write just need to get it on paper so to say. I'm mostly content with it really. Just spinning how I will do 29 and 30, but that I'll sort when I get there.
Unfortunately, what I render at the moment has two issues: major spoilers and not exactly suitable for public posts. So this is a purely something conceptual. The curse of the creative mind... something I've said before. Ideas comes and they need to get out of the head somehow. Some are stuck in a limbo until there are parts that I can use to make them. That's one of the good things when you can draw, it is easier to manifest them. With 3d unless you can make the models from scratch not so much. So how about this one? Now I know there will be riots, albeit minor ones, but right now I have no idea do I have need of her. But such is life at times, maybe idea comes later for her... Although, might need to alter the visual of the wings to indicate that they are more temporary than permanent feature... hmm. Something to think about. That and kind of wanted to test the environment as well, which was more important really...
Anyway, short break and back to rendering and writing I shall go...
For some reason I can't play this game on my phone because it keeps closing right after I tap on it.
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