[Review for v0.03]
It's pretty good, I find the art style and the premise equally appealing, the sex scenes are nice, and the themes are erotic. But the pacing is a bit too fast; things are poorly explained or not at all; and I feel like the game needs more than just standing in the store day after day.
Most importantly, the game desperately needs a dedicated translator and editor--the grammar's all over the place, but it goes beyond that, about a third of the game is entirely incomprehensible to me.
Overall, it's a pretty good game that's worth the download, but I'm taking away 2 stars because I find legibility to be one of the most important factors in visual novels.
It's pretty good, I find the art style and the premise equally appealing, the sex scenes are nice, and the themes are erotic. But the pacing is a bit too fast; things are poorly explained or not at all; and I feel like the game needs more than just standing in the store day after day.
Most importantly, the game desperately needs a dedicated translator and editor--the grammar's all over the place, but it goes beyond that, about a third of the game is entirely incomprehensible to me.
Overall, it's a pretty good game that's worth the download, but I'm taking away 2 stars because I find legibility to be one of the most important factors in visual novels.