VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - Troubled Existence [v0.2] [MYLF3D]

Critique - v0.2

It's not clear what the objective of the game is, as of yet only one choice and not a lot of content.

Renders are high quality but the body proportions are a bit crazy.

Animations are decent, hope they add sound at some point.

Plot is flaccid and very very boring.

For a demo aren't you meant to be able to tell the point of the game, all I can tell at the moment is the women are cock hungry...

Bahaha I absolutely loved playing this game I was laughing so hard throughout it! Graphics are great and the character dynamic and interaction can be cliché with a lot of stereotypes, but it's done in a humorous and entertaining way. This was definitely a hidden gem and I was a bit disappointed when the game was over great job dev! Keep up the good work highly recommend this one.

Content - About 2 minutes

Renders - Meh. Not good or bad, just fine.

Sex Scenes - It's rushing right into them but they honestly just suck. A full blowjob took place in like 3 renders. No time went into making it actually hot. No animations, no different angles, expressions, nothing. Just bing bang boom, done. The penetration scene is the same. The pumps in and out were shown by 2 different renders, one in, one out, and just swapping between those same ones. With nothing else on the screen changing. Back and forth 3 times and it's over, everyone's cumming.

Gameplay - There is none, it's a kinetic novel, fully linear, zero choices. Just jumping from scene to scene. That could be fine (if a bit boring) under normal circumstances but here, it just feeds into my next point.

This is like one of those short porn comics you'd find on 8muses or somewhere. But not one of the good ones. One of the bare minimum effort ones. Speech bubbles showing about 4 lines of dialogue, Ooh I'm so horny, oh you're so big, clothes come off, in, out, in, out, over. Each render is like a page of one of those comics.

Now imagine someone took several of those types of comics and slapped them together into a renpy format, started calling it a "game" to try and make money off it. But without any adjustments at all, without adding anything that makes it entertaining and enjoyable to play through, without anything that makes the characters or scenes feel alive. It doesn't translate well to this new delivery system. That's what we have here.

Scrapped their 2 minute demo just to spend 5 months making a different 2 minute demo with an inferior premise and still zero content. Wasted months of dev time (somehow it took that long), didn't add any momentum to their project at all. All to swap from a more general corruption theme which could be enjoyed by many, to a male pov for those who just specifically wanna be cucked I guess, to appease their 5 patrons that wanted that lol.
R.I.P.

It was an easy 4 to 4.5 when it had the woman as the MC. I was genuinely looking forward to seeing it grow.

Since then it's took a total 180 and buckled under a few vocal complaints and shifted a really shitty male MC and it's just not enjoyable anymore.

It's a damn shame because it had a ton of potential but the is not only easily bullied into completely changing their games content, they completely shit on fans of the original concept and went in a direction far worse and squandered a lot of that potential.

So a great game turned mediocre and devs that cater to anyone loud enough. Not sure how well it's going to do now.

This rating is related on both realeas: Prrevious one was good one to see Female Protagonist, I Was hoping to see more about her delevelopment, how she gonna use that dildo how she behave in future release. it wass damn good I hoped to see her turinging out to become full flached succubus, if that was initial purpouse.

Bad decision:
Right now I lost interest to see sadden change from female to male MC. I loste my interest. It would be greatest game I never played if you keep stuck on female protagonist but I got disaponted and lost my whole interest to keep playing it.

very very short demo but nonetheless here is my rating (hopefully still in development? )

pros:
+ great great quality
+ female mc
+ very hot curves and very sexy face!
+ good english
+ interesting start with potential for lots of kinks
+ funny demon (no choice ? even i would chose sex ofc)

cons:
- nearly no content atm
- no real choices at the moment

thats pretty much it with the cons - except that i am a bit unsure but hopeful that we will see lots of monster and old men sex (please at least one very very old and smal man please)

keep it going and take care

Wow! Great game I can't wait to play more the premise of the story is great! The models of the MC is absolutely amazing only input I can give is to perhaps include some animated portions that would make it even better than it already is! A++ keep up the good work dev!

This is already shaping up to be an impressive game. The story is already intriguing but the thing that makes the developer stand out in this case is the focus on quality renderings. The lighting and set up is perfect, and the quality of the renderings is some of the best in this genre so far.

Fair warning--"demo" is still a generous term for what this is. It's not even half of a scene. That said--that milf looks damn good to me! High quality renders. Hoping this author carries this game into some sort of workable version 1.