[Review about True Husband v1.2]
Look, I love some oyakodon. Both kinds. I truly do.
But hear me out. There's some serious problems with the start of this game.
I downloaded this game a few months ago together with a bunch of other games, so I had totally forgotten about it. I found it recently in my Downloads folder and didn't even remember what it was about. So I decided to try it.
Here's the first half an hour into the game. I don't think this counts as a spoiler since it happens right away and half of it it's in the game's description.
He marries this hot woman. Two weeks after moving into a new house, a random girl appears in front of his door claiming that she's the daughter of his wife.
First problem. His wife never told him she had a daughter.
And she acted like she didn't even know how to contact her daughter all these years because the father didn't let her (let's not dive into how this is legally bs in most countries of the world). But her daughter not only knows where she lived (the wife just recently changed residences, after all) but also that she was married (again, a very recent thing). So the only conclusion to have here is that the wife is still keeping contact with her ex-husband. Quite frequently even, and with lots of details, if he knew such recent information about her. That's quite suspicious.
Second problem, the first thought that the MC had was "My wife has some serious explaining to do": perfectly reasonable and very smart of him. Then immediately after he goes "Oh, stepdaughter, let me take your luggage to YOUR room", that's not even 5 minutes after she enters the house. And then he let them catch up and go to his office to work. Then they eat, he goes back to his room and his wife is evidently working harder than ever to please him in bed which he notices it's probably because she felt guilty for lying to him but he just let it be and decides to wait until tomorrow to have his answers.
Next day. He wakes up, his wife makes them breakfast and have to leave in a hurry for work in another city, without even touching her own food. Leaving the MC and the stepdaughter alone at home. Later, she contacted her daughter (not him, for some reason) and said she can't come back because it's "raining heavily".
First, one more day without any explanation about why she lied about having a daughter. And second, this is a modern day world setting, mind you.
How freaking heavy is this rain that people can't even go back to their home? And I'm sure we've all seen some pretty crazy downpours. Even if the other city is a place with bad engineering that any heavy rain causes a flood, you're telling me not only she left the house without seeing the weather news, but also didn't know about the rain until it started? She supposedly travels a lot due to work and she made such an amateur mistake? That's not suspect at all.
At this point I had to open the game's page and recheck the tags. I could swear this was a netorare game. A doormat MC who can't keep his own boundaries in place and a lying wife keeping secrets.
But I guess this was all the author's excuse to give MC and the stepdaughter a dinner date. Badly executed, if you ask me.
Now comes the third problem. The MC is a 42 (43?) years old guy barely out of honeymoon period with a stupidly hot woman. He himself said they were going at it like rabbits until just a while ago. Then he takes a look at the stepdaughter's exposed skin and he acts like a teenager at the height of puberty who just saw his first pair of tits. You even have an option to openly jerk off right behind her while she's playing a game. Granted that option leads to a game over. Nevertheless.
This is a problem with so many erotic games nowadays. It's already tiring enough when it's a college guy acting like a dog in heat, but when you have a grown ass man old enough to already be a grandfather acting the same way without any logical reason, there's some problem with the story's setting.
With all of this, when the MC finally puts his foot down on the third day and reject a "fun time" with his wife to have the serious talk, it feels kinda silly, even though it's kind of a sad (even if it's till bs) story.
And come on? I agree the stepdaughter is hot and nubile and taste is completely subjective. But the wife was not even designed in a way the player would think: "Yeah, the daughter is totally the younger and better version" like how it usually goes with this kind of story. The way the MC thinks to himself "I hope [Wife]'s body can keep my mind off [Stepdaughter]" is just ridiculous.
A few suggestions:
- Remove all the "Me horny" lines from the MC. This makes no sense at all. It's not like he was a virgin until he met [Wife], right? Let the stepdaughter explore her feelings herself (which she starts doing very quickly anyway) without the MC showing any interest in her besides that of a guardian. And when she come to him, the MC can choose to accept or not (if this is not a linear story).
- Move the third day's conversation with the wife back to the first day. You can't leave a serious talk for tomorrow (or after, in this case) just because "I just emptied my balls and want to sleep".
- Do some rewording work. Just some small rewording here and there is enough and it'd do a whole world of difference on this horrendous start.
Up to this point, I can't say this is at the "Average" level yet so I'm giving it a 2-star rating. I'll try to play a bit more and see how their relationship develops. The idea of the story is totally up my alley, but if it keeps this pace, I probably won't be able to play it until the end.