v0.1
From the start, the game makes a direct link between masculinity and domination, and femininity and submission. It's the usual misconception in many games; that masculine characters cannot be submissive.
It also seems to mix up submission with sissification and cuckolding, so there's no way to check the submissive content without getting sissy/NTR stuff.
The text could use some spacing - paragraphs run on and on, making the experience less enjoyable, and the pages a bit of an eyesore. Spacing is also needed between text, pictures, and the "next" button/link. There's also spacing issues after colons on the notebook.
Quotation marks or italics could also help to differentiate the character's thoughts from the rest of the text.
Spacing aside, the writing is good: varied vocabulary, descriptive enough without getting tedious, and a few spelling mistakes: "libary", "feminem". My main qualm is the inclusion of stats and gameplay elements - I don't need to be told that having breakfast with someone increased my charisma; just increase it and describe the breakfast scene instead.
The AI art is good, although it could use some post-editing to polish the rougher edges: there's a picture of a castle and there's a floating island or something on the background, which is never mentioned on the story, so I assume it's just a fuckup by the AI. Similar things can be found in other pictures: a girl missing one leg, another girl with the mouth on the side of her face, or the eyes of the redhead changing colors between scenes.
Unfortunately, there's non-AI pictures (or animations, rather) mixed in, which detract from the otherwise enjoyable art of the game.
That Patreon logo being the only picture on the side menu is also a bad choice - a portrait of the character would look much better.
There's a notebook that gives you hints on how to proceed on different storylines, which is appreciated. I'd recommend adding it as a side menu item/option, so we don't need to return home anytime we want a clue.
Right now there's little content, multiple dead ends, and some broken passages, but that's perfectly fine for a 0.1
I'm giving it 4 stars for now because I can see that the dev is putting effort into this. I'll update the review later on depending on what this evolves into.