2D 3D-Daz Trying stuff love to have some feedback

[kuntzz]

So i am trying new character for my game so i am thinking of making her MC best friend sister who just came back from Paris and i am trying some new render setting i really love to know what you guys think about the character and the render.

 

[BigIrishLug]

The render looks good. But the overall character does nothing really for me. I think it's the hair that is throwing me off, but as always, that is just an opinion.

 

[kuntzz]

The render looks good. But the overall character does nothing really for me. I think it's the hair that is throwing me off, but as always, that is just an opinion.

I appreciate your opinion and it really helps me to improve. thanks for your feedback

 

[darkbasic]

Ok to look at. My opinion on how to improve:
- get a better hdri
- find a better skin material... this one looks too flat or maybe its the wrong light setting
- add a spotlight to make some shadows

 

[Aeh2Zeh]

I'm shocked and pleased to not see over exaggerated tits & ass so that's a plus in my book. I agree with BigIrishLug, the hair seems off. Maybe something a bit more straight and shoulder length? (just a suggestion) and dem legs though, lookin' tasty! overall solid render.

 

[kuntzz]

Ok to look at. My opinion on how to improve:
- get a better hdri
- find a better skin material... this one looks too flat or maybe its the wrong light setting
- add a spotlight to make some shadows

Thanks for the feedback mate and I am trying to learn more about lighting and how to properly implement it in a scene but it's very helpful you pointed out those things. Thank You

 

[kuntzz]

I'm shocked and pleased to not see over exaggerated tits & ass so that's a plus in my book. I agree with BigIrishLug, the hair seems off. Maybe something a bit more straight and shoulder length? (just a suggestion) and dem legs though, lookin' tasty! overall solid render.

thank you for the compliment man and yeah i will sure take look into her hair and try out your suggested style.