VN - Ren'Py - Tune in to the Show [Ep. 9] [RobertDeadth]

REVIEW Episode 2 Part 2
i really like this game because you can put any different girls come from especially from asian korean and japanese, not really much game can give an asian character, so its really good.

1. its not really problem actually but yes the first impresion from every single character in starter the teks and the face is so different

2. need more interaction with player its mean with multiple choise when in dialog or plot twist or MC need decision when doing something or MC need more action or not when in some situation or anything, for example when MC and Maya in the libary and Maya has falling from the stair, maybe you can improve with interaction with player (1) hold Maya foot, (2) hold the stair for Maya (3) doing nothing or anything, i think you know what i mean. so the game is not flat.

im usually check some game is worth it to play and read in every single dialog or not with SKIP Unseen Text, because i got very bad experience when im read every single text and i got no one interaction with player. its like wasting my time, i called it SKIP GAME.

3. The MC figure 25 y.o looks old, MC more look older than me in 29 y.o, MC look like 45 year old. 25 y.o with status retire and have stable income i think must be have more cooller style.

so with the beatifull Graphic render, story telling is good, music bg is oke, animation its optional when sex scene or anything for aditional for more better (if you can make it), more important is MORE INTERACTION with Game Player.

and where you come from ? how did you know this plot and story ?

becuase i think familiar with asian dating show from Japanese or Korean or China with samiliar plot but in different story and without "sex" , in 1 month with 6 man vs 5 women find the love or in different show find love or money, maybe you find the show is Heart Signal from korean and China (reality show only find for love or couple in 1 month), Love Catcher from korean and China (reality show find love or money or diamon ring in 1 month, if love card x love card you get your partner as "love" and if love card x money card so where's choise money card they will be get money and love card didnt get anything, and money card x money card you didnt get anything), Somebody S1 S2 from korean (plot in all dancer and find in dancer partner in last show and love in 1 month), Terrace house from Japanese (reality show find an love but its so diffierent because the participant can request to out from the show and the show i think running for 3 month for 1 season, im forget it for this one because the show has ben stopped when the participant going to suicide when show still running)

All in all a very promising VN that I hope to see more of in the future.

Pros:

• Good renders
• Quality and novel story
• Doesn't take itself too seriously while at the same time the humor doesn't feel forced
• Diverse and (up to this point) adequatly well fleshed out LIs
• LIs look and feel very diverse
• Cute readhead

Cons:

• No animations
• Still kinda short (but already some lewd scenes)
• MC a little too passive for my taste, feels like every scene, lewd or not, is controlled by one of the girls - Personal Preference tho
• A little too much internal dialogue for my taste - Again Personal Preference
• Feels like the dev could have incorporated choices way more often

I've been playing AVN for a long while but I've never seen this kind of plot used before (a reality show), if you think about it is obviously a good setting for AVN. You probably won't find a trepidant story but if you want a well written slow-life story this is for you.
Being a reality show that is about meeting new people and finding love, the strong point of this AVN are the girls. I find all of the really cute with well distinguished personalities. Plus what can I tell you I'm a harem lover and the developer confirmed this game to be a harem soooooo big plus.
I really can't wait to play more and I totally recommend this one!

So far, so good! I'm looking forward to new updates.

I'm a big fan of the visuals. The girls are unique and all very pretty.

Each person in the house has an established personality, as well as obvious thought put into their back story.

The plot seems basic, but works well enough... until the realization that something else may be going on. But that additional mystery seems proportional to the game itself (in many other games that take on a mystery twist, the stakes, and twist itself, just don't feel like they fit. No such problem here, thus far).

It almost feels like a slow burn, until you realize how much time ACTUALLY has passed by the time you finish the current version. In all honesty, I'm quite the fan of how the dev is pacing things.

With the exception of the first (and unavoidable) sex scene in the very beginning (which is either there for titillation to draw us in, doing it's job better than the dream scenes too many games use, or part of the slowly developing mystery plot, or both) scenes neither feel too rushed, nor out of place.

My biggest issue is likely me just over thinking things: you're told sex is good for TV, so try to hook up with the girls. Now, I'm sure the girls realize that interpersonal drama and sex between contestants is good for reality TV ratings, but we aren't told... for the viewer, what do they see? Implications that people are having sex while editing cutaways show little? The sex itself, just edited or censored? Or full access to everything that is happening? Because not one of the girls seems like the type who would want a sex tape floating around.
I mean, a teacher, a CEO, and a just-turned-18 girl who is all bubbly, sweet innocence, all seem like the type who would find their lives too easily hurt or destroyed by countless hidden cameras capturing them in sexual moments, and broadcast for the world to see.
Maybe we should handwave this away to adult-game logic. Maybe I'm overthinking it. Maybe they were told (even if the game doesn't tell us so) that while the audience has to be fed enough to tune in, modesty would be protected?
I don't know. I wanted to voice my view on this bit, but in all honesty, it seems to effect the story and characters so little, at this time, that my gripe aside, I don't think this should count against the game. The reality TV setup works... gotta give a reason for all the sex to happen, right?

In the end, I'm happy to leave a review, even this early in the game's development, and say that I think we have a real gem in the works here, and I'd certainly recommend people give it a try.

Beautiful renders, awesome girls with unique personalities. The story is very original and was introduced in a well-paced way. I am looking forward to more updates. Diana is my favorite so far, but the dialogue with Vivian balanced my preferences (she is a cutie, despite her athletic body).

Fun plot, with a subtle hint that there is more to it than what it lets on. Exciting to see where it goes. The girls are lovely. Each with a unique personality and interests and goals. And each look very attractive. Very promising start. No animations but thats not a negative at all. Sounds are limited to background music, nothing to advanced or detailed wit SFX or anything. MC kind of looks generic but at least hes not grotesque looking.

This is the VN to go to if your looking for an enjoyable story with ROMANCE a possible-plenty..
Set in a 'BIG BROTHER' (the reality tv show NOT the annoyingly repeated and sequeled VN series) type setting, The mc is both likeable and a nice guy for once.. While it may not be everyones taste to have such a thing, for those looking to read and get engrossed in a story that has some elements of mystery as well as a welcomed love story harem game then this is for you..
If your looking for something with ntr or anything along those lines then this isn't for you.. If you like games like Sunshine Love.. then you might take a liking to this..
Story is currently at Day2 as of this review so i'm looking forward to seeing what comes in the future.. set over a 30 day gameshow/reality tv show setting, there is still plenty of days in the game schedule to fill with more of the laughs, romance and fun that has already been on show.. pun intended..

Review as of v0.25 (Episode 2 Part 2)

I like it, looking forward to more. The first part was quite linear with very few choices of consequence. Episode 2 seemed to have more choices so I'd chalk it up to the first part being more of an intro. It's very rare I am interested in the world/story of an adult game but I'm intrigued by the premise here. I hope there is some more mystery to it as is hinted.

The girls are all good although I wouldn't necessarily say great at this point. We haven't really got to know them that well yet. I would also say they are just a little on the "samey" side. They aren't super distinctive from one another in my opinion (especially visually). Not to the point of needing to be fixed, just could have been a touch better. But I'm definitely looking forward to spending more time with all of them so overall a definite positive.

The dialog could be a bit snappier. There were a few spots where I found myself thinking "you've made this point already". Overall the pace in Episode 2 was much improved in my opinion so I don't want to be too harsh.


The sex scenes seem to be getting better with each one. Honestly the first one I had forgotten about until writing the review. It's sort of out of the blue and right near the beginning, not with any of the main love interests (at least not one of the ones in the house). The second is sort of short but very sweet and the third is quite good.

In conclusion, I'd recommend this for someone looking for an interesting story and likable girls to romance (not so much if you're looking for super kinky/dirty/explicit sex scenes, just my 2 cents). I would also consider it early in development as of this review (v0.25) so not tons of content; not many answers about the story and not a ton of interaction with most of the girls yet but there is a lot to look forward to.

Never thought I would get to play the adult game version of the reality dating shows I used to watch which were my guilty pleasure lol. But seriously talking this game is nothing like those as it's just the setup and the concept that's the same. It needs way more drama and crazy contestants for that lol. Well what can I say, the story is really good so far(kind of a slow burner) and character models are incredibly beautiful. There is only one sex scene rn as it doesn't have that much content but it sure has some great potential.

Version played: Ep 2, Part 1

Firstly, beautiful and crystal clear render (just how I like them) and the story is realistically different. I have played many other games but so far this 1 is the only 1 with a different premise .

Secondly, the girls are very pretty and since I am from SEA region, I want to thank the dev for including the Korean and japan female characters. Although Evelyn is my favorite for now since my taste is the mature woman type.

Thirdly, the reason I give only 4 stars for now is because I hope the sex scenes can be more polished in the future. The scenes available rite now kinda mundane - like just a few different renders and a few sentences and its over. Perhaps the dev can include like a gif-ish motion for the renders and some screen effects or sfx when a character climax?

Overall I think the dev did a great job for the start and I am likely to check this out again in the future.

Great game fr.

I love it, rendering is outstanding and HD. Model is also great, Evelyn is my fav. Story? It's amazing, could use more genre if possible. I'll add this game to one of my favorite and waiting for another update. Great job to the developer

quite intriguing story, great renders and of course a variety of awesome females ... each one of them unique in they own way. With the harem tag it´s already in my top games to be watched.
I enjoyed very much to play this game and I looking forward for the next update.

9.5/10 from my side

Good start. Good renders and model. Story plot seems interesting. Liked all the models they are gorgeous. Dev you did a good work creating Evelyn she seems aged and elegant at the same time. There is a lot to read. Well if you are for a quick fap. You will feel disappointed. This version is basically a intro. Introducing all the characters and gave little information about their back ground. There is some lewd scene in the game. Writing is good too.

Overall I enjoyed the game. Keep up the good work dev. Looking forward to next updates

2.5 points for the renders and the characters that look above good, and 0.5 roundup for the writing that gives enough info but being concise. (still not perfect but I encountered outrageus things as of late)

As for the rest of aspects in this Ep1:
The complimentary lewd scene at the begining is decent, but it could be better if you are picky, I sure am.
The chosen partner for the first day is the redhead but the sex partner (out of nowhere) the dev asigned for this update is with the old lady, which in my opinion is the one that looks worst of all the girls. I rejected her.
Update ends there, the game is way too short.
The characters are imposible to rate, there are 3 so far and not much to say about them apart from their looks (clothed looks).

PRO:
- Very nice game and studied in graphics, few choices to make that still lead to the scenes

CONS:
- too many dialogues, too long and too short scenes (between one sex scene and another almost 1800 texts pass and then the scene lasts yes and no 100 texts with 10-12 different images between them too few sex images and too many the images of the dialogues)
- few pictures of the details of the sex scene

Having said that, I hope that he will continue modifying these aspects that would otherwise make him lose points

What a great game. I really like it.
Great models and a story that is neither rushed nor boring.

No implausible manufactured drama and conflict that so often ruins a good tale.

Congratulations Dev, a game to be proud of. Please don't be tempted to change anything about it.

Really Enjoyed this game. I really hope some fun things happen with Maya as she is so cute.

I really enjoyed how the story flows. I do wonder what is going to happen with all the woman

Can't wait for an update

A very professional product. Beautiful renders and well written dialogue. Music is soft and unimposing and especially when kept at low volume it so far accentuates the light and playful atmosphere.

Note: This game is for readers. So, relax and take your time.

Tune in to the Show is the second work from RobertDeadth following his short proof of concept game A Date with Emily.

This latest game looks to have a much larger context with many characters. The girls at play are beautifully rendered and have well defined pleasingly individual personalities. The writing is near perfect English. It flows well and has numerous witty moments.

The reading experience is novelesque. There is a lot of granularity and detail in the narrative. Also in the renders. A single tip of the head may be given a separate render. That's a lot of rendering. The dialogue is fullsome and natural. Unlike the often shorthand form dialogue in many games which is kept as brief as possible in order to move to a new scene. In this game the narrative flow(both external dialogue and thoughts) is not rushed, yet not overly slow either.

If the player plays the game with a relaxed mindset, reading the game like a novel without haste then the experience will be maximized.

Try it out. May not suit all your kinks, but it's pretty sexy and I found it an enjoyable journey. Good luck to the dev.

Ep.1 (about 1 hour)
The premise is, that MC joins a Big Brother type TV show with 1 other male and 6 females. He is encouraged to bed all the ladies. Right off the bat, the premise suffers from gigantic loopholes because the writer immediately clarifies that the other male isn't capable of interfering sexually in multiple (somewhat laughably disarming) ways. However, somehow the show runner can sexually test MC and would be able to replace him quickly, but somehow the same wasn't true for the other male, nullifying the logic of the start of the premise immediately.

There aren't really any choices in the game, it is pretty much a kinetic novel. There is a small round of guessing someone's lie during introductions and an opportunity to forego the sex scene, but no real "choices". Speaking of sex scenes, there are currently 2 scenes in the game, unanimated vanilla (1 bj, 1 sex).

Light stock lounge background music is present. The models look nice in my opinion.

MC is very bland, with no flaws. Too much Gary Stu for my taste. Every girl immediately fancies him, he is a good-looking, young stud, but also financially independent and acts mostly like a white knight in shining armor. Was rolling my eyes a bit reading through his dialogue and thought's. Not only very unrealistic, but also just... dull?

This brings me to my biggest gripe with the game: the writing style. It is painfully boring and repetitive. The writer of this game has an absolute OBSESSION with constantly mentioning that someone is smiling. Basically, every conversation ends up being a variation of something like this:

MC: "How are you doing, character?"
She smiles at me.
Girl: "Oh you came.. bla"
I chuckle
MC: "Indeed"
She nods and laughs
Girl: "So about that X.."
I shrug and smile at her.
We both chuckle at each other.
[repeat]

The writer mentions that someone is laughing/smiling/chuckling over 340 times in just 1 episode. Reads absolutely obsessive. To the dev: You don't need to constantly describe that someone is smiling. You can simply SHOW it by having the model smile. There is a reason why "Show, don't tell" is an established core rule of writing. It just felt like the writer didn't know what to write about and just kept repeating the same sentence over and over again in different variations.

For now, I will give this an average rating, but the writing style in particular stood out in such a negative light that I can barely even justify that, considering it's a rather kinetic novel.

+ Models
Ø plot, music
- no relevant choices (yet?)
-- MC and writing style