VN - Ren'Py - Twisted Memories [v0.9b] [BaiBai]

Theres things that wont appeal to everybody, like incest, or the MC being a degenerate, or unrealistic proportions, but if you don't mind any of those this VN is as good as they come really. The writing is good and articulated. The girls are pretty and they have their own problems and they are not just there to be fucked by MC. I'm looking forward to the completed version!

Where do I even begin? This game is an absolute masterpiece, a shining example of creativity, passion, and innovation in the world of hentai gaming. From its charming art style to its captivating writing, every aspect of this game is a testament to the incredible talent and dedication of its developer.

The writing isn't bad for this VN. The problem comes in with the models.

You play as the MC who looks maybe 4 feet tall and hasn't hit puberty yet which is disturbing. His penis is longer than his leg which is ridiculous.

The girls are all pretty much copy/paste, if you've seen one then you pretty much have seen them all. They all have super sized boobs and butts. The VN is in serious need of variety, badly. It's like the Dev just used the same template for all of them.

If you like models with real world proportions this isn't for you. Too bad, it's a waste of a decent story line.

Very good renders and animations.
Intriguing story that doesn't make you just skip through all the big text walls. Also very good writing by the dev ( a couple of spelling mistakes aside (improved in latest update)). Explaining the thought process of mcs decisions and reasoning which adds a little serious note to the game and not just nonsense decisions / events that just look silly and destroy the immersion in the story and characters. Same goes for the main and side characters, unique personalities and stories.
Great and fitting choice of music.
A lot of content. Many mini scenes (animations) that don't count towards main scenes in gallery.
Underrated game / dev.

[v0.8]

Great graphics, the story is very well developed and the music envolves you with the situation you are seeing.
It has 2 paths for each primary character (seduction or corruption) and both are interesting and well written, each one with his own scenes
The game will for sure not disappoint you

Damn, I really like the story so far. It has great characters, so I am going to play it till the end. The character designs are good. like the scenes so far. It's great that all of the characters have different emotions. Every character has a unique story to tell. Humor and story is very good in it.

This is one of the best games on the site. I think the story is far better crafted then most witch is why it stands out and makes it more interesting. the character design is good. I like that you can avoid seeing the little sister story by clicking that option in settings it make it so i can stand the protagonist. i like the twist on the classic porn game setting it feels groundhog day/Christmas carol. overall this game is near the top of this sites catalog.

Twisted Memories [v0.7d] [BaiBai]

Hey! This shit is good!! Mhm! As a dude said before me, this novel has a soul. Identity! it's pretty well written too, I wasn't bored and my attention wasn't slipping whole time I was reading/"playing". (and that's rarity on this site or everywhere basically)
I wasn't expecting much, but this is helluva nice surprise. Nice looking models, decent and enjoyable story, good and cohesive writing with few orthographic and other little mistakes (nothing much, among of what I spotted), sympathetic characters with distinct "harem" personalities. Everything is very good, with few thinks here and there.

You really should check this one out. Oh, and don't forget too follow/support dev, if you liked it. (ofc, if your IRL situation lets you)

You know how some games feel soulless? Like the creator is just making this because he knows these tropes are popular but doesn't really "get it"? This ain't one of those games. This game truly feels like a man sat down, looked deep within himself, and then gave it to the world so they could masturbate. Great stuff, the translation is shoddy at times but it gets the job done—still a 10/10.

Review of version 0.7d.

The good: if you like wide hips and large breasts (almost comically so), they're in spades here. The writing overall is good, the story is interesting, the jokes are funny.

The bad: if you don't like wide hips and large breasts then there's literally no characters for you here (even the "lollies" have thighs thicker than waists). While the writing in the first half (until about 6h in) is solid, it definitely falls off later on, with many typos and grammar mistakes (mistaking "him" for "her" or even using "her" for "it"). Which in erotic scenes is rather distracting.

While I like it, the game is a real slow burn, with the first sex scene (defined as "girl cumming") is something like 5h in, so your mileage may vary.

overall: if not for lack of copy editing later in it would be a solid 5/5 game for me.

S-TIER GAME I LOVE IT AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

- writing is legit, all the main girls have a fleshed out backstory and sometimes makes me feel like i'm reading a novel. sometimes it even makes me reflect on my own life a bit tbh which ive never had in a porn game there's still some porn logic ofc but its competently done, usually in a funny self-aware way so who gives a fuck. build up to the sex scenes feels good, not too abrupt but you dont have to play 500000 hours to see a girl's nipple for the first time either.
- girls r cute and sexy as fuck, renders r nice.
- titties are absurd, i prefer more realistic proportions but you get used to it fast and the rest of the game more than makes up for it, and its kinda sexy sometimes tbh, esp the "smaller" titties cos those are somewhat in line with reality
- sex animations are nice, i liked seeing the fluids and stuff, and the writing during sex scenes is erotic
- music is great. i especially love the school theme, its catchy as fuck
- choices are also legit, the two paths are fleshed out in their own right, like the corruption path feels like mc is your typical fucked in the head horny sociopath whereas the love path is more wholesome and feel-good

The writing is actually really good. Some minor spelling errors, but way better than most of the other games on here. Great work!

Animation and art is pretty awesome too. Wished it was voiced though..

Best writing I've seen for a VN on this site. The protag is a breath of fresh air compared to most games, actually feels like a person instead of the personification of lust like most protags lately have been like. The models are top-notch as well, in an original style.

Been hooked as soon as I started playing, a fine feat considering I'm usually one of those degenerates that skip through to the fun parts.

This game is very good, and I'll come to that after I adress the main issue about the why I removed one star from what I thought of the game.

Why only 3 stars when I think it should be 4? The "petite" girls are not very sexy in the story, when you have so much beautiful and sexy girls.

Now the good:
- most girls are very beautiful. Big sister, mom, (girl)friend, crush, bully girl... they are all beautiful. Of course in an AVN it's expected, but not every AVN succeeds at having all girls diverse and yet beautiful.
- you can play for romance and corruption with each girl. I didn't play both, and choose one for each in my only playthgourh, but each path I choose for every girl felt very well crafted.
- the sexy/horny dialogues of girl is quite arousing : the writer is very good to make the player feel the hotness in the scenes.

The best game of all time on this website and probably among all the VN like i've played. Just too good, story, art, characters, the flow, everything is over a 10. Stephanie carries it hard for me specially. The only "bad" point i'd say is the MC's little sister but you can turn it off in the settings so it's still a W anyways

just finished this game and wow its fantastic. the writing is so good i felt like i was reading fifty shades of grey and the pacing is great too. the animations are the best especially sex scenes so looking forward to more and the story is good too. it feels like a guy getting another try at life and trying to doing it right picking up girls and saving them from the future selves very wholesome.

The models look good, but the writing isn't my cup of tea. The game focuses on the corruption type of story which I'm not a big fan of but I gave it a try cause of the high ratings. The UI is good and has a gallery available, but the characters can look strange throughout the game. They feel very static versus other games that have came out lately

this game owns. It is funny and filthy. The facial expressions are tremendous, the animations are excellent, the plot is interesting, the writing is good (once the translation issues are corrected).

Like others, I do have one big complaint. The female bodies are just too much. Breasts the size of Volkswagen Beetles on every adult female. Breasts the size of basketballs on young teens. Thighs as big around as redwood trees on every single female, even the ones who are supposed to be thin. Girls saying "He makes me feel so small" when they are quite literally twice the weight of the MC. It really hurts the sexiness factor for me. Plus, I understand that the cartoonishly huge dick of the MC is necessary to the plot, but he only weighs about 30 kilos otherwise. Couldn't he grow a little bit bigger?

Put it this way. I can't even imagine how incredibly hot the corruption scenes with Stephanie could have been if she actually was thinner, smaller, and weaker than the MC, and seemed more vulnerable.

But I'm not taking away a star for that. The game is really good and the developer is entitled to make the bodies the way he wants to make them even if it's a design choice that I really don't like.

This is a surprisingly good story. The concept seems bland and overused, but what makes this shine is the great characterization and the personable writing. The scenarios aren't just some porny fantasy but feel real and grounded. The emotional depth of the characters is surprisingly great.

In terms of writing, this deserves 5 stars easily.

The art is competent. Especially the faces and expressions are among the best you'll see here.

So why only 4 stars?

Because I am so tired of the anatomy of women in games like this and in this game it borders on caricature. The mother and teacher would probably fall over, trying to stand straight given their Size Triple H breasts. It's laughable to the point that the teacher is basically only breasts from the chin down. I know you guys have... preferences, but this is ridiculous and it actually deters from the quality of the story. Let's not start about the size of the MC's dick. Are you overcompensating?

Either way, all this makes a competent story feel juvenile and childish. And given its quality otherwise, this is especially sad.

So, uh what is the point of having Emily as a LI? It is obvious that it shouldn't be happening with all of the skipping content scenes when interacting with her.
My recommendation is the either remove her as a LI, or make her older.

It feels like the MC was transported back to his middle school years instead of him actually being 18. The whole thing comes off as weird and creepy overall.
The renders are good, and the characters have depth, but the whole thing with Emily is off putting to say the least. If she was fixed, this VN would actually be pretty good.
Good luck to BaiBai with this project. Unless the Emily issues are addressed I will be hard passing on this VN for future updates.