Version 0.7
Man, there's a lot that can be said here. I'll start with: this is an epic slow burn.
I'm editing my review, because I once wrote that the writing was riddled with errors. That is no longer the case. You'll find the most recent content has a lot more typos than the early stuff, but I want to focus on something else.
The dev...truly has a way with words. Much of it almost reads like poetry, and often evokes a strong mental image. The vocabulary, expressions, and turns of phrase he uses...I've never read anything quite like it. It is hard to describe, but he constantly comes up with these ways of describing things that I just love.
The dev also definitely understands how to build eroticism, and if you're here for the incest, good news: you're in for a treat. Guess what, your mother and sisters actually think the idea of having sex with you is insane! Whaaat, imagine thaaat. At the same time, there's that sense of attraction and growing inevitability that makes the story engaging and fun. It's being handled super well so far for my taste.
With Emily, the younger sister...your mileage will vary. But there's a setting to turn off H-scenes with her specifically. While we're on the subject, I wish our young body was a little older and more grown up.
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Now, there is one aspect of the story I gotta criticize, because I just...find it so over-the-top:
So there's this girl you had a crush on your whole life, who wound up with this guy named Aden. Because of that, you feel pent-up jealousy towards Aden.
One day, you catch Aden cheating! The dirty fucking rotten cheater, man, you fucking hate his cheating guts, how the fuck did the girl of your dreams wind up marrying this fucking awful scum of a cheating human being.
Except what he cheated on wasn't her, it was a math exam. And the MC, knowing this, is so hung up on it.
He goes on a lot of internal monologues over how his crush doesn't deserve to be with a cheating scumbag like Aden. I get that the dev wanted to give us the moral high ground in some capacity, and chose something relatively innocuous, but I really don't think MC needs to fucking hate Aden in order for Catherine's plotline to work.
At one point the MC seemed to acknowledge that it was just his jealousy talking, but...based on things he says later, it's clear he doesn't believe that.
I was a straight-A geek in high school. One time, someone stole my homework and photocopied it to hand in as their own, which pissed me off. But even I don't hate cheaters nearly as much as this dude does.
Moving on.
Speaking of cheating, if you're looking for netori content, well, it's possible that Catherine might cheat on that scummy cheating motherfucker Aden with us, but she also might break up with him first. My netori mind hopes it's the former, but we'll see.
And there's your teacher, who's married. She's also the best, which is saying something.
Finally, almost all of the characters are hot as fuck, as long as you can handle that ludicrous (awesome) bust size. YMMV.
The animations and facial expressions in general are on point during steamier scenes.
All in all, if you like the character design, incest, and slow burn stories, this is a strong recommend.