The story is fun and good enough to have me invested and looking forward to the next update. I'm mainly invested in the seduction route because I'm more of a sucker for romance than corruption. The corruption route was about what you'd expect: some dialogue changes and a couple new scenes, the biggest change looks to be for Catherine's story so far, so if you just care about H-Scenes and story isn't really your thing, then the corruption route is probably the objectively better route to go since it has literally everything the seduction route has and more, with some new extra scenes thrown on top of it. For the story as a whole, pacing wise, I think some things could've been done better, like the whole Catherine arc was kind of annoying, where just as the MC was about to talk to her and progress, he got interrupted by someone coming in last second on two separate occasions. Also, some girls have WAY more focus and attention than others; mainly Stephanie. It's worth mentioning the 6th and final of the secondary girls, 12th overall, hasn't even been revealed yet. I think the game definitely could benefit from a significantly more even spread of focus around all the girls, and at most maybe a little extra focus on girls that it would realistically take more effort on the MC's part to get with, such as family members or the teacher.
The graphics and animations are decent if you're fine with Honeyselect stuff; they're not bad, but they're also not Eternum level or anything. If you've played a Honeyselect-based game before, you probably know what to expect as long as it wasn't one of the low-effort ones that somebody pushed out in under an hour. That's about all I can say on that subject.
I like most of the character designs and personalities; they're not anything new or unseen before, but coming up with a new and unique character is kind of a tall order in this day and age. I'm also kind of a sucker for blondes, which half of the "primary" girls are, so yeah. If there was any character that was kind of off to me, it would probably be the MC himself since it's kind of hard for me to believe that he'd be so socially adept and confident when a mere days ago he was still an obese old man with no friends whatsoever who died alone in his rundown apartment after jerking off to too much porn, but this is a porngame, so maybe I'm just nitpicking at that point.
As for H-Scenes, you can kind of refer back to where I touched on the graphics; they're Honeyselect ones, and they're not extremely high quality or anything, but they're also not low quality. As for the amount of them, there is a decent amount, but as I mentioned when I talked about pacing, while most of the girls do get some focus, only really one gets a huge amount of it, and out of the 6 primary girls and 6 secondary girls, only she has actual sex scenes; in fact, she has 3 of them. That's not to say the other girls have no scenes at all, although there are a few that don't, but the scenes the others do get are limited mostly to masturbation or kissing scenes and one BJ as of the current release. As mentioned before, it definitely could've benefitted from a more evenly spread setup, but at this point I think it's too late to really do anything about that.
A final topic I felt I should mention is grammar. There are a lot of spelling mistakes that I feel like could've been avoided with something as simple as some proofreaders or even just taking the time to go back and reread what was typed, as well as some weird minor things that lead me to believe English isn't the developer's first language, like the word "message" repeatedly being misspelled as the word "massage," but I guess what is just overall minor grammar mistakes are on the low end of complaints.
Anyways I hope the dev keeps it up because I did really enjoy reading through the game.
