I am a grammar weirdo. There is a difference between typos (which this game contains) and whatever the fuck is going on with most of the English-as-a-second-language-refusing-to-hire-a-translator situations you see on this site.
This game is top notch in any language. It's actually a great example of what's wrong with games like Milfy Day for me. I'm willing to tolerate a decent amount of spelling and grammar shenanigans in the name of a good story that's communicated comprehensibly and thoughtfully.
In fact, this game features superior communication in English than the vast majority of games written by native English speakers. Compare this game to a popular game like Tales from the Unending Void. TFTUV is a very popular game on this site and for good reason. It's clearly well-conceived and well-executed. But it kinda bores me, to be honest.
By comparison to Twisted Memories, TFTUV takes itself just a little too seriously to be consistently funny, and it isn't thought-provoking enough to be worth the number of hours it takes to play. Just my opinion, obviously, but TFTUV takes few risks and doesn't ask all that much from its audience. And btw, TFTUV is one of the best games on the site. So this is very high praise, in my mind.
None of this is meant to denigrate other games. They all have their audiences. But I've been struggling to distill down what the heck it is that I like so much about a game like TM, and the easiest way to explain it is by comparisons.
BaiBai's game is better. It's funny when it wants to be, thoughtful when it wants to be, and isn't afraid of making the audience uncomfortable. I have no idea what BaiBai's writing process is, but the MC feels shockingly human and compelling within the absurd Hentai-World we've all agreed to inhabit by playing an H-game.
It's one of the best games on the site.