I've been on this site and I've seen and played a lot of game. Of those I've played, VN are rarely my favorite. It usually just boils down to me turning on skip dialog and skipping most of the text because either it's too difficult to read, the story is boring/uninteresting, or the characters are so dumb that it hurts me to read it. This game though, I don't know why, but I actually took it slow and read through it. It's nothing too special but it was simple and relatable (how characters act that is.) My only complaints right now is that the English isn't all correct and the body's of some of the women are off putting (mainly just the mom's tits being WAY to big (you have it at like 15, dial it back to like 11 or 10), and the older sisters waist (just a tiiiiiiny bit wider)). Lastly, as others pointed out, I don't mind having some options like traps and futas in the game, but if there is a way to make it optional then I believe there would be less worry.
Overall, the game seems to have great potential and I look forwards to future updates. Keep up the good work 5/5
TL/DR: Relatable characters, simple story, body proportions are off, English has some work, great visual style and demo shows lots of potential.