Hi, I really liked your game, mainly because it's a game in which the protagonist is a lesbian, or something close to that and the interactions so far are homoaffective. And in a hypersexual universe being just a lesbian is gratifying.
I've downloaded your game before, and I've really enjoyed the existing content, and I'm sure if you release more, I'll follow your releases. One advice is to use "" for dialogs like:
"What a hellish day!" Joanna said.
"I'd like to see Grandma today," exclaimed Catarina, "I know she misses us".
I know how dashes work, and I know the quotes follow the same logic, nothing against the old "Catarina: What a hot day!", but this tends to work more for the theatre rather than the text you're looking for.
Sorry if this sounds rude or aggressive, I'd just like some constructive criticism.