VN - Ren'Py - Unbreakable Love [v0.1] [Unbreakable Love]

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I really liked this first preview of the story, it’s got a lot of potential. I’m excited to see how the NTS develops. The art is great, and the FMC is super sexy. As a very personal opinion, I did feel like the way the FMC accepted and started fulfilling the MC’s fetish was a bit rushed, but I guess that’s still better than the MC taking several updates to finally confess his fetish.
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Review based on version 0.1
For now, it's a 5 out of 5, but the real challenge lies in the game's future. I will update my review with every update; I hope I won't have to lower the score

• I liked the first update and the wife's behavior. This update showed that behind all the teasing, the wife's focus was actually entirely on the MC.
• This initial focus on proving and demonstrating the wife's love, affection, and focus on the MC at the start of the game is very valuable. It makes the sharing scenes later on much more intense because we feel more attached to the wife.
• The next thing I really liked was the wife's lack of interest in the Chad, calling him an arrogant asshole. Don't get me wrong, I'm a fan of this game's tags, but when the wife doesn't like the Bull, the sexual scenes... that contrast can be very hot. It could even turn into hate-fucking. They can get closer later, but this current contrast has the potential to create very intense sexual scenes.
• The inclusion of a choice system and two different paths was a great decision, in my opinion. Half the people are fans of sharing, and half are fans of cuckolding. I never understood why some devs only put one path in their games, because you don't need completely different scenes for the two paths. It's enough for one path to have certain dialogue and continuations of scenes that the other doesn't. For example, in the sharing path, the MC stops the sex scene from continuing, but in the cuckolding path scene, we see the continuation, which is like one or two animations or a few more art pieces.
• The art, animation, and writing were also good.

Suggestions:

• Adding a phone system to the game could be an interesting idea and add depth to the gameplay. Plus, we'd have the potential to receive hot shots via SMS.
• Adding a Wife POV could also be an interesting idea to add depth. Also, if we don't have the Wife POV, we might miss out on very hot scenes where we (the MC) aren't present. You could make this POV optional.
• Please add music and sound so the game comes alive and the sense of immersion increases.
• It would be a good idea for the wife to actually have a job (I mean, not just having it mentioned, but actually going to work). If the wife's role in the game is just staying home and having sex with different men, she might eventually become a boring and shallow character. But giving her a job, especially a good one, could elevate her character and appeal. Jobs like a teacher, doctor, or nurse could be good ideas.

Extremely promising, on par with others in the genre. Really really really liked the artstyle and also being netorase is a plus. Looking forward to what this becomes!!! I'd encourage the dev to communicate openly because this seems like a good game to be invested in