V.EP1
imagine a paint by numbers format applied to VN creation. this is it.
art is not great to look at. even normal HS seen-it-once-seen-it-all looks better. one guy looks very weird.
writing is written by checklist. basic is the nicest way to describe it for me.
if shakespeare is at one end of the spectrum then this is meandering just above picture book for kids.
reads like it was done by the numbers and there is not much of a plot delivered. certainly nothing to hook people in.
i would say it could improve but with no real story to drive it and with the direction it looks to be heading, this will probably be one most will work the skip button to get to the goods.
i hit no renpy errors (see? i can be positive too)
forgettable is my first impression
imagine a paint by numbers format applied to VN creation. this is it.
art is not great to look at. even normal HS seen-it-once-seen-it-all looks better. one guy looks very weird.
writing is written by checklist. basic is the nicest way to describe it for me.
if shakespeare is at one end of the spectrum then this is meandering just above picture book for kids.
reads like it was done by the numbers and there is not much of a plot delivered. certainly nothing to hook people in.
i would say it could improve but with no real story to drive it and with the direction it looks to be heading, this will probably be one most will work the skip button to get to the goods.
i hit no renpy errors (see? i can be positive too)
forgettable is my first impression