VN - Ren'Py - Under the Same Roof [v.2.0 beta] [Dark Passion]

Not too much to judge off yet, and the writing needs some editing, but it's great so far for the just-fap-don't-think genre. A bit of suspending your disbelief and it's a great (albeit common) corruption story. I don't usually come to f95zone for Shakespeare, I come for this.

Version 1.0 reviewed

Potential spoilers

The story of a young couple engaged to be wed who move from England to Australia. To save money they decide to move into a home shared by other strangers.

The owner of the large home is a sexist old man who immediately belittles the woman by spewing his macho beliefs to her. Unbelievably, the young woman still agrees to stay.

The very first evening the young woman gets groped by another man in the community kitchen who pleads to her that she reminded him of his ex-girlfriend. Unbelievably, she believes him and let's it slide. Fortunately, the story ends here.

Pros:

1- The MC has a certain appeal about her.

Cons:

1- Assuming it is a machine translation it is very difficult to read. The story is also rather ridiculous, making it laugh out loud bad.

2- The dev, for some unknown reason, repeats dialogue on successive screens, forcing you to re-read the same lines twice. Why? This is completely unnecessary and just frustrates the reader.

3- Fairly average renders.

Final Thoughts-

It looks like it will be a cuckhold/ corruption story, but it's so bad that it's not really worth the bother. At least not this version.

If it's the devs first attempt at creating a VN he should seek help with the story and find a good person to proof read everything.

Good luck.