Nice start but needs some TLC.
The story's theme is certainly not original but the characters are attractive and the renders, sex animations and overall art design are impressive.
PROS:
1- Some very nice character renders. Big thumbs up here.
2- Really nice looking characters.
3- Attention to detail. The sets and locations look believable. They are not just empty spaces with a few pieces of furniture thrown around for effect.
4- Various branching story options and love interests. As of this version there are two. Where these options eventually lead , it's too soon to say as the game is early on in development. But there are some nice possibilities here.
5- Sex animations are really nice. Although they could be sped up a little. The kissing animation was excellent.
CONS:
1- The writing is inconsistent and doesn't always make sense. Unsure if this is a translation of a different language, but it needs quite a bit of work.
2- Some story options are odd. The shower scene comes to mind. It's confusing and the dialogue doesn't really make sense for what we see on screen. A "should I peek" shower scene somehow leads to a full blown conversation with a nude woman. It felt awkward.
3- The stereotypical dumb ass friend appears early on in the game but then vanishes. Humor in games, especially in a school setting, is always welcome. Would like to see more of it.
4- The game title is awkward. I'd come up with something new.
5- The MC's penis textures seem to change mid game. One version looked very nice, the other version looks like a baguette.
6- In one scene that focused on making an appointment on time the clock hands never move, creating a wtf moment. I realize it is an asset issue, but the dev should have chosen another way around it.
Final thoughts:
The game shows promise if the dialogue is fixed and the story actually develops into something worthwhile. It certainly looks good from a visual perspective. The dev has talent. But the biggest pitfall in most AVN's is the writing, and that's where this game struggles..
The story's theme is certainly not original but the characters are attractive and the renders, sex animations and overall art design are impressive.
PROS:
1- Some very nice character renders. Big thumbs up here.
2- Really nice looking characters.
3- Attention to detail. The sets and locations look believable. They are not just empty spaces with a few pieces of furniture thrown around for effect.
4- Various branching story options and love interests. As of this version there are two. Where these options eventually lead , it's too soon to say as the game is early on in development. But there are some nice possibilities here.
5- Sex animations are really nice. Although they could be sped up a little. The kissing animation was excellent.
CONS:
1- The writing is inconsistent and doesn't always make sense. Unsure if this is a translation of a different language, but it needs quite a bit of work.
2- Some story options are odd. The shower scene comes to mind. It's confusing and the dialogue doesn't really make sense for what we see on screen. A "should I peek" shower scene somehow leads to a full blown conversation with a nude woman. It felt awkward.
3- The stereotypical dumb ass friend appears early on in the game but then vanishes. Humor in games, especially in a school setting, is always welcome. Would like to see more of it.
4- The game title is awkward. I'd come up with something new.
5- The MC's penis textures seem to change mid game. One version looked very nice, the other version looks like a baguette.
6- In one scene that focused on making an appointment on time the clock hands never move, creating a wtf moment. I realize it is an asset issue, but the dev should have chosen another way around it.
Final thoughts:
The game shows promise if the dialogue is fixed and the story actually develops into something worthwhile. It certainly looks good from a visual perspective. The dev has talent. But the biggest pitfall in most AVN's is the writing, and that's where this game struggles..