VN - Ren'Py - Unnatural Instinct [v0.8] [Merizmare]

I love the game, its very easy going and nice buildup. I don't like very complicated games with tons of story branches, (I'm playing VN not baldur's gate). This one has a nice story, lots of teasing along the way, advancing the sexual tension between MC and his family.

The story is repeated and incredibly dull but it's worse here With her bad characters such as

the mother work maybe like A prostitute with a girlfriend experience perhaps but Without sex just to have a good time
Just say all and you won't be wrong
And With its few and short updates, it is not worth the time
And the worst is The MC he Lack of Intelligence Spineless and submissive to everyone and have no sense of social relations He does not bear his responsibilities Everyone here does not take their responsibilities

I must say I'm not a fan of long internal monologue. And there is an abundance of it here.

MC is your typical run of the mill dude that is lusting after the taboo. The only difference is that he has no spine.

The ladies are all lovely, so this kept it from being lower on the rating scale.

I'm not sure about the story. I'm not even sure if there is one to be honest.

Summery

I'm not sure where this is going. I'm not sure if there is a story at all. Writing is good, but the amount of inner monologue is boring.
The MC was studying at another school for a year, and has finally come back home.
Why was he doing that?
I'm just not able to recommend this VN. I'm going to have to pass on this one.

This game is filled with predators, and has one of the most weak-willed, thirsty, simping MC that I've ever seen.
There's no real narrative, no story or character arcs. Everybody just does whatever they want, without concern or consideration for anyone else.
I don't like corruption AVNs, and this game feels a lot like one. The women manipulate and use the MC for their own pleasure. Of course, the MC is entirely oblivious to this, and just goes along with everything because of his erection. There's no agency here.

It's difficult to try and objectively rate this title. Over the course of the game, I started to dislike most love interests, and the MC. What makes the rating harder, is that the game's description is unclear about what it is or what kind of players it's for. If it's intended and designed as a kinetic porn story, then I'd say the dev is doing an okay job. If the game is supposed to have deeper themes or character development, then so far, it's failing at doing that.

Visually, the game is appealing but far from perfect. Scenes can look bland or empty, though this improves in the later chapters.
The same goes for the sexual encounters. Animation has improved over the course of the game, though I'd like the dev to put a little more effort into actually showing the climax. This part is usually skipped, where an animation of a sex act finishes, and the scene immediately moves to the aftermath (cuddling, talking, ...)

There are a few times the dev really outdoes himself. The police car during the flashback scene was hilarious, as was the Kelly/Charlie introduction.

It’s not a Visual Novel but a Kinetic Novel, be warned, there is no choice to make, you get to date/fuck girls even if you don’t like them. Claire-the-slut is the best example, she proclaims herself (no question asked) to be your girlfriend after just a quick BJ in the restroom and after knowing her for only a couple hours. I mean, what if I, the player, don’t like sluts??

On the plus side the girls are all beautiful, but you can’t escape the typical cliché of the slut, the ice queen, the bitch, the shy and the bookworm. Animations are good, just good. As for the story, well it’s pretty basic and classic: no father, a hot mother with huuuge breasts, and 2 sisters, the bitchy and the cutie. All three are of course love interests, no choice again. Then you have the university and a conveniently female-only classroom with a hot MILF as the teacher. That’s it, you sleep, you eat, you go to school, and you repeat the next day, no hidden mystery or drama, just the boring life of a student.

All in all, this kinetic novel is rather average, hot girls everywhere but a bland story and NO choice to make.

Good quality animation, a fairly normal plot which means things don't get sidetracked by witches or mafia or weird bullcrap, and the scripting generally works well though there are a few ill chosen words here and there.
Overall a great start and a fun game to play. I hope that we see more from these creators. There is some nice innovation ehre and I like that we didn't have to deal with the family family holding back for too long. i get the appeal of building tension but sometimes it feels withholding! Good game Merizmare

As of 0.5 the content feels really good.
I was choosing between 4 and 5 stars and ended up choosing 5 because so far there was nothing that really bothered me, as in a real problem in the game.
The lack of input in some actions, or reactions does detract a bit of the experience in the game, but it is nothing major.

Story is good/ok, the kinda you expect for this kind of game.
Art as in images and animations are good/great.
Amount of content is decent for how far we're in.
I don't remember right now if there were major problems with the translation/text, I think it didn't have anything worth noting.

Overall, it was a great experience that definitely made want to keep track of the game in the future.
And since it delivers a good experience in almost every aspect I can think of, as 0.5 to me this is an excellent game.

The animations in this game are outstanding. I especially liked the way the characters moved and interacted with each other. They felt so fluid and natural, it was like watching a real-life movie. The characters themselves were also very unique and well-developed. I felt like I really got to know them and care about them throughout the game. I especially enjoyed the relationships between the characters. They felt very genuine and believable. I'm really looking forward to seeing how these relationships develop further in the future.

It's graphically very pleasing as the renders are top quality and the animations are smooth and loop very well. The plot is such a refreshing one for an incest focused AVN in which finally we don't have a scumbag MC who is the and brother who will stop at nothing to fuck all his family members. We actually have a morally conscious MC and most of the times it's the girls of the family taking the first sexual advance. So plotwise I find it very much tolerable than most. Since the game is still fairly early in development with a limited amount of content I will refrain from reviewing further in this aspect.

• There's room for improvement when it comes to English.
• Animations are great, but there's also room for improvement. Adding additional content to lewd scenes could improve the game overall.
• Models and renders are great, clothes and outfits are on point.
• We've all seen this story before, but it doesn't take away from the game

Overall, pretty good so far and I see a lot of potential.

In my opinion, the reviews on this game are a little too harsh. It's true it's packed with cliches and there's really no natural build-up to the relationships in this game, but the models are above average-looking (especially the little sister) and it's legitimately funny in places. I enjoyed my playthrough -- and if you go into the game with an open mind, you might, too. Solid four stars.

EDIT: I saw that some people are complaining about the English in this game. In my opinion, it's not perfect, but it's far from the worst I've ever seen. It's a bit of a distraction, but not enough to diminish my enjoyment of the game.

This game is very, very good. It has a lot of Family naughtiness even though it doesn't have the incest tag. It probably will soon. The Futa/Trans character is optional but is still cute a fuck and if I swung that way, I definitely would. The dialog is funny and the characters are very interesting and enjoyable. The Animations are well done and the sex scenes are smoking hot.

the story is not bad and the renders are pretty decent as well the only thing keeping this from being 5 stars would be the MC Attitude being to much of a AH . other wise keep it up great work looking forward to more

If Chatgpt made a game it would be this. The human interaction is just all wrong. It's like Pepperoni Hug Spot commercial, this game is just like that. Like you've heard of uncanny valley, this is uncanny valley the game. There is no consistency, it's all just nonsensical gobbledygook.

Relationships in this go from 0-60 instantly, there is no buildup, it just goes there and even chatgpt the mc is confused by this. Now if there was some world building, even a bullshit macguffin, to explain away why everyone just throws themselves at the plank of wood that is the mc, that could help, maybe. As it stands this game is a hollow kinetic novel with a few pretty pictures and not much else to offer.

Pros: some of the models look nice-ish; animations are smooth

Cons: everything else

Not awful looking VN though I'm not crazy with how a couple of the models look. Mom has VERY oversized boobs which is a turn off and Charlie with the pierced nipples which is also a turn off for me.

That brings us to one of the bigger drawbacks for me. Thus far we aren't given a choice of which girls to pursue and which not to. I would have liked the choice to avoid Charlie. I guess the Dev wanted an excuse to have the cliche bitchy older sister.

Mom's personality is okay as is little sister who is adorable. The MC has a very effeminate looking face that was a bit surprising.

The writing has some typos through out though not really enough to make if difficult to read,

With a little clean up and given choices on the girls this could be pretty good.

This is incredibly dull. MC comes home after studies and everyone is immediately interested in him. It's a boilerplate incest "story" with no real conflict or driving force. There's also basically no choices. I came across 4 or 5 in the entirety of version 0.4, and the most significant one was choosing whether the younger sister cliche gets in the shower with MC or is caught by MC masturbating to the sight of him in the shower. The difference is a handful of renders before the story slots right back into the track it was always on. Outside those brief and inconsequential choices is just long stretches of mediocre to poor dialog of women throwing themselves at MC for no reason.

V0.3.1

The visuals are the reason you downloaded this, and with respect to this you won't be let down. Ashley is downright fucking adorable. Head to toe. I'm pretty sure I've seen her face elsewhere, but I don't care. It's an adorable character model. Her breasts are small enough that you really do feel like she's younger, but where she really shines is in the way dev decided to make her hips, ass, and legs. She has thicc thighs for a girl presumably still a teen, and she almost has this pigeon-toe thing going on where her knees point inward and it all just makes her look more youthful despite her obviously matured curves. Great balance, and I can't enough of her.

Obviously MC's ma is hot. I'm surprised there's such little content with her up to this point; you get a lot of "click here for alt image with alt outfit/no outfit" and , but it would be nice if there were more between them.

The other girls are pretty cookie-cutter in terms of appeal. This isn't bad. After all, if they're hot models with good renders and good lighting who cares, right? They just don't have any unique characteristics.

The story is OK, though I do get awfully tired of the "MC returns home after a long time away" narrative. It's just boring. I say if you're going to do this particular taboo you don't really need MC to have gone away in order to be missed upon return. You can just pick a random point in his current life to start telling the story, even if introducing some new changes to his life. Tl;dr - don't pick this one up for the story, you won't be wowed.

The dialog is pretty bad in many places, and with it being ESL I try not to judge too harshly. Still, there are things that even if you're not a native English speaking individual, you'd have seen in movies or TV shows, heard in music. Examples like "ye" where I assume "yeah" or "yes" are meant is just weird. It's not so cringy that I can't play, but yet another in the pile I wish dev would work with a good translator on. Also - and I think this may be unintentional - when MC's sis refers to the idea of him being gay vs "normal", this is pretty offensive. Gay people aren't abnormal, and straight people aren't normal. I say this as a straight person. Should probs fix that choice of words, dev.

Dev needs to include dialog box opacity setting. This should be in EVERY game in Ren'py. I hate having to hit H when I want to see what's obscured from view. Dev note: "text seed" is misspelled; should be "Text Speed".

Overall, 3 stars for me. SUPER average storyline with no unique arcs or qualities whatsoever, and mostly uninteresting dialog means the player is most heavily focused on the visuals. Were it not for these being so impressive, I'd say to pass on this one altogether. We'll see what future updates bring.

v0.3.1
Still early into the game to make a more "elaborated" review, but at the moment I like what I've played; hot scenes, sometimes funny, I like the story so far, love the faces animations (I always love the work on this aspect in games). The only thing that I don't like too much are the mature model's faces, the Mom looks just like any other teen.

First look of the game and you can tell there's some quality put into it, graphics are very good and characters are really well made, there's one animation so far if I haven't missed some and it's damn good. Plus there's a transgender character so you just know the game is gonna be interesting. I look forward to this game

One thing that I don't understand though is the button to hide the UI when you can press H

To tell the truth, this game just released Initial Release when I think it is another game use picture defrauding players of money .
But 0.3 did surprise me and gave me the idea to write a review.
There are two reasons for this: First, the author is committed to making the game without stopping halfway. Second, the game is starting to have decent content, and the author is starting to have a creative specialty.
Initial Release felt like a fan work to me, and now I feel like it's recognizable, or at least memorized, which is great.
I just want author to finish this game,don't give up halfway. The picture is very good, there will be more people like in the future.