VN - Ren'Py - Completed - Unwanted Movie [Final] [DigitalJPlayground]

Played the final version:
-short, around 30mins of game play
-the mom is good looking but not great
-the sex scenes are ok
-the story and dialogues are subpar/basic
It's ok for a quick play through and it's good that it goes to the sex scenes rather quickly since the story/setup is very basic.

Congratulations to the (junior) dev for finishing the game and delivering it completed.

Overall quality: 2 stars, plus one star for encouragement for a presumably junior dev who has a promising future (imho).

i loved it, please make more, i need more! hope you make it to more as an hobby because you naled it! spot on for my taste and an well earned 5 star!! ps: even tho you dont like big games, you can try, and do other projekts if you get bored.

This is a very nice short story, it gets straight to the point without having to spend hours tediously reading it because the story drags on like chewing gum.
The fact that it is a kinetic story is not a bad thing.

Another advantage is that it is a complete story, no long wait for the developer to release a new update or even abandon the unfinished work.

The characters are very well chosen and the story is well told in its brevity.
I would like to see more of the (step)mother and the (step)son in the future.
The rendered images are also pleasing, only a few good animations are still missing, but that could change in the future.

I give it a full 5 stars and I am already looking forward to the next short story!

Technical implementation:

• [star] That's first game I have ever seen where you have to animate scenes by yourself - you have to click to display following images in scene sequence!!!
• [star] Empty dialogues - on the same image - that you have to click to progress!

Whining:

• [star] Suspiciously many reviews with a perfect score.
• Invisible glasses with levitating frame parts.
• IMVHO Anomaly_v001_Looping.mp3 doesn't perfectly fits the game.

That would be a nice short game, with cheesy dialogues, good and original(?) models for a quick play to take a breath, but it's poorly and annoyingly implemented :|

Yeah it was a short VN, but some of my favorite content on this site are short VN's. This is one of them, short and sweet. I really enjoyed it and I can't wait to see more from this guy. My advice for this guy is to keep making smaller content like this, (probably a tad bit longer) with short stories so a game doesn't overwhelm you and then run off into a direction you didn't want it to so it ends up getting abdandoned. This way you're consistent and pull in a solid audience. Keep up the good work and I look forward to more content.

It's short there is one scene and that's it. Plot is about mom and son forced into do a porno. If you want to try a short game you can try it. Renders are okay. You can categorise this one into short and sweet but not that sweet. it doesn't have that much of story plot. It's a basic plot

+ VN
+ Completed
+ Pretty mom

- No big plot
- it's short ( I knew this one is short but due game size i thought this gonna have more content than this)
- kinetic

It is a decent scene. It is just that though, a scene.

The animation is a bit lackluster which in my opinion matters for this game as it is such a large part of the total.
Ah, I suppose game implies it does more. It's a short kinetic novel.

I gave a 3 due to the amount of content and quality of that content. 3/5 for a 5 minute story is not bad.

One of my stars was lost due to the game being nearly a full gig in size for what is given. Probably should compress this to make it match the actual time spent, in my opinion.

tldr if you want something with substance, pass. If you want something longer than 5 - 30 minutes, pass. If you don't want to do 800-900mb download for a scene, pass.
If any of those dont dissuade you, sure. Its a nice little scene.

This is a game with more attractive MILFs than any game I've seen here recently.
The woman who explains things to you at the beginning is really hot, and Anna is also really hot.
Clara in particular made my cock get hot the moment I saw her.
I love NTR. If there was a game where the MC and his rivals compete for these gorgeous women, I might faint with joy. Of course, that's just my greed and wishful thinking.
But “DigitalJPlayground” probably has plans of his own. And no matter what genre of game comes out, I think it will be very well received. Then that new game will be the best game in the F95ZONE in 2024.

A great little scene, I like the idea of just doing hot one-off scenes. The writing and concept are good. If the dev has success, maybe they can try a larger plot but to be honest, i like the idea of small scenes instead of huge sprawling games with five million characters but zero characterization. This game has more development of their characters than lots of much bigger games. Keep it up!

Graphics - perfectly drawn models of people. But there are no animated scenes.In 2024, they are simply mandatory.

The story is interesting and funny in places, it was nice to read the dialogues.

I'd rather call it a comic book than a game. Just pictures and text. There is no choice, you just click next next and that's it. There is no animation. People like to participate in the process, to make a choice to fight with their conscience, because each player puts himself in the place of the main character.

I think if you try harder, you'll have a great future. It can be seen that your hands are not growing out of your ass . So I wish you good luck.

So I would give you one, but to promote future talents I will give you 5 stars.

review for final version.

short as fuck, but do love me some short and to the point games tho.
pretty hot incest.
good lookin models, plot did it's purpose of makin the nutting happen.
4/5 would nut again.

Good little game, nice art and dialogue is good too. I only had 2 gripes with it. I found it a little annoying how the images paused, the dev used "pause" instead of "$ renpy.pause(2)" which ( I personally ) think makes the images flow smoother. Also no anims

A short and sweet kinetic novel that tells the story it sets out to tell and leaves you satisfied yet wanting more.

I don't see devs putting out short stories like this very often but this kind of makes me wish I did.