Ren'Py Abandoned Vagrant [Prologue Fixed] [Crows & Ravens]

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Overview:
Story evolves around David, and the people that are closest to him. They all have their own personalities with character strengths and weaknesses. David finds himself in a new city without his old friends. He seeks to leave behind a dark past, and make a new start. But if everything was so simple we would not have a story to tell. How will David go about spending his senior year in highschool. Will danger catch up with him, or maybe those around him? Will he be able to solve a mystery from his past and uncover the terrible truth....?​


Updated: 30 April 2018
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Censorship: None
Version: Prologue Fixed
OS: Windows - Mac
Language: English
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Harry Joker

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Very unprofessional processing.

105 wav files in the games = 1.3 GB

used wav in the game = 56 files = 764 MB -> 47 files = 536 MB wav files for shit

convert wav more than 1MB (32 files from 56) to mp3 - 764 MB -> 64 MB

total sound files size after postprocessing = 71 MB

1.3 GB minus 71 MB -> 1.229 GB for shit
 

BigCrow

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Thanks guys for the constructive criticism. You are right about the music files, they are too big. This is my first game, never worked with an audio program and it was simpler to create files in wav format. With that being said I am working to replace all the files, then I intend to put up an update, probably tommorow. PixelRepublic, I also changed the background color in menu boxes, now it is easier to see. freedom.call dark past concerns the murder of MCs mother, and the possible return of the serial killer. If you guys have any feedback to share I would appreciate it, it helps me make a better VN. Thank you.
 

BigCrow

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It has 600 renders, and a little under 1GB of picture files, regarding h scenes there are a couple. This was intentional as I want to establish characters first, as well as the dynamic of their relationship before I get to hardcore stuff. If people are looking for porn they can simply google their favorite fetish. Maybe it just isn't a game for some. There are a lot of released games where they are going at it in the first 5 minutes. Also those games are about 200-300 Mb..maybe.
 
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rory68

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Looks interesting.A lot of renders for first release,nice models and I feel that you love music!But as mented above sound makes your game very big.If you can make it less heavy and add some animations I think it has great potential.Nice first try BigCrow, keep improving!!
 
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what a disappointment....all those tags without the content. i wasted 2gb of my mega for this and it doesn't have any content that its tagged with.

anal - none
BDSM - none other than a mention and a guy grabs a girls throat
corruption - horny teenager gets a curious scene, hardly corruption
domination - none except the same throat grab
group sex - none. scene with another guy watching interactions between a couple is not group, its voyeurism, and no I don't mean the guy spying
not even sure if there was any kind of romance and even swinging is just a mention in dialogue but goes no further than voyeur.


the OP has an overview for telling us what may be...if its not in it don't tag it.
any positives I may have found were lost amongst my wasted download as I save the allowance for those that DO have the content
 

BigCrow

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No first release game contained all of the sexual themes it intends to show. A lot of stuff shows as story progresses in upcoming chapters. I dont remember any of big titles doing that, do you? Dont remember any triple fisting in first release of Dreams of Desire or Big Brother, or most titles I know for that matter. I would encourage you to keep your allowance.....now, and when there is more content. Buy yourself a slurpee. This title wasnt made for you in mind.
 
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