Powerful, independent women being gradually transformed into submissive, mindless sex slaves—this is Tjord at his finest.
The third installment of the
The Fall series is also the most unique. First, the shift in point of view from the male antagonist to one of the subjected women offers a refreshing change. Second, the absence of a central villain and the departure from the usual sci-fi tropes—such as machines, injections, and nano machines—to a more "archaic" one. To me, this demonstrates Tjord’s growth as an author, stepping outside his comfort zone to explore new ways of creating a corruption and mind-control story.
I also believe that this change of structure paid off well. First, it felt like a breath of fresh air. While I don’t mind the typical "machine -> machine -> corrupted" sequence, this shift in scenario piqued my curiosity and kept me more engaged with the story. Second, focusing the plot around a tracking mission rather than a political coup or crew manipulation, as seen in previous entries, simplified the narrative. This, in turn, gave Tjord more space to explore the world-building and provide context for the events unfolding parallel to the main storyline.
I was particularly a fan of the smaller cast of characters this time around. It gave Tjord more room to flesh out the transformations and explore the relationships between the women in detail. The more nuanced visual cues in their transformations were another highlight. . With fewer characters, it was possible (or at least easier) to have more sprites detailing each step of the body modifications, rather than relying solely on a "before and after corruption" sprite. If future entries in the series are planned, I’d love for this approach to continue.
And, of course, the transformations themselves were incredibly hot—not just the final results, but the process too. This time, Tjord added more detail about how the transformations negatively impacted the mission. (Who would’ve thought that suddenly needing to carry two massive "blobs of fat" measuring over 120 cm of chest would make a soldier less athletic?) This was a notable improvement over earlier entries, where the changes often went unnoticed by other characters. As for the final transformations—well, they delivered exactly what one would hope for in a good bimbofication story
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Initially, I thought this would be the last installment of the series, but I believe there’s still room to further explore
The Fall universe. For me, this sentiment comes from the lack of Neo-Terran presence in this entry. While I understand Tjord likely chose this to change the focus away from a specific evil character, I’d love to see how the events of the previous installments have impacted the intergalactic power balance. So far, the Alliance has lost two of its major squads and an entire strategic solar system. Surely, these losses have hindered them significantly. A final installment showcasing a grand Neo-Terran victory and the aftermath—where their male dominant ideology reshapes the galaxy—could be nice to see!
As always, I’m deeply thankful to Tjord for creating quality, compelling, and
finished novels—something that’s becoming increasingly rare on this site. I’m eagerly looking forward to whatever he produces next
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