VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - Vengeance [Ch.3] [Nikois]

Great rendering and story. The characters are portrayed very well. Everyone likes the fat buttocks and breasts. Looking forward to mother’s appearance and the plot story. This is what I want. Haha I can understand the delay due to certain things. Because of the virus, many things can't go as planned. Looking forward to the next update, thank you Nikos ☺☺☺

First of all i dont realy understand why, so low rates on this VN.
Seriously the story is 9/10
renders are 10/10
maybe the characters need some more depth 7/10
but overall i will say that has so much potencial !!!
ill give it a 5 star "trust fund" for the future.
Nice job [Nikois] keep it up and youll get there.

I liked the plot so far along with its decent disposal of H content. I personally liked the use of the author's imagination to imbibe a real life crime into a fictional scenario, all the while driving the message that trafficking of all life is a crime that must be collectively fought.
In order to understand the plot deeper, perhaps we need to replace the extraterrestrial life form with humans and see the difference. When it comes to doing dark things, we humans are no different.

This thing is an abomination, renderwise, those are top notch however the developer does something deeply sickening in this over the top story, at one point human trafficking is mentioned and the chapter ends with the player being informed about ways to help people who fell victim of the crime... however soon afterwards the MC has sex with a sex worker, with the player being fresh out of the awareness talk, there's no choice to say no! Afterwards we're shown the girl hanging herself. What was the whole point of that whole sextrafficking demounce if we're forced to partake in that ? That's not entertaining

[v2.1]
Well, the only words that come in my mind that can describe this game is "a rollercoaster of emotions".

This game gets dark pretty quickly, however as stated in the initial disclaimer, things are planned to get better as the story progresses.
I love this kind of approach, where any hope seems to be lost yet, in the end, everything turns into a good ending.

The other thing worth noting is that this is not a regular h-game, as it aspires to carry some sort of social awareness, especially regarding IRL human enslavement and trafficking.
This is undoubtedly an admirable proposition and I liked it, but as most of the reviews show, this is not easily being accepted by an adult gaming community, which is a shame in my opinion.

Talking about the game itself, renders are great and models are too; they're not original though (same assets used in other games, lightly modified).
Story is really good and interesting, definitely makes you wonder how it will end and what is gonna happen in future episodes. Very original and engaging. I loved the dialogues as well (not too long and with a little bit of humor at times).

CGs: 9/10
Story: 9/10
Sex: 9/10 (there's little content but very well made)

Recommended basically for anyone who is not into rape or can stand very dark thematics and scenes.

lack of choices, topics are used more for their shock value rather than anything else, models are just rehashed bootleg copies from other far superior games and assets. If you decide to play this I would highly recommend turn off the sound and enabling skipping of unseen text and hold the skip button until you reach a desired scene., others wise your going to cramp up your wrist in between pointless plot talk and pointless back and forth between main protagonist and (insert female).

[Review version Ch.2 Windows]

Suppose you are watching the Game of Thrones pilot.

Before going off with Cersei, Jamie gives her a long lecture about what she wants to do with him being wrong and that she should reconsider her life choices. At the end of all that, he'll say "Ok, how about a quick BJ."

Bran is about to be pushed out of the window. Suddenly a black screen comes up filled with disclaimer text saying "pushing kids out of windows is wrong, people need to learn how to protect kids, they can be easily tricked, HBO is only showing this to be realistic etc."

If you think this would have made GOT better, then this game is for you. Renders are OK, but a bit on the dark side.

This is the dev's game and he can/should do as he likes. However, if you think it weird for a game to have constant "white knight lectures" (many of which are 4th wall breaking) interspersed with the MC having internal thought bubbles of "I want to fuck my aunt" and think that the player can come to his own judgement of what is on screen, then this game is a pass.

Here is the summary: The game has great renders and an intriguing plot-line. The UI is comfortable and animation is decent, it is something like 3 frames per second. However, this game has gore and talks about the realities of sex trafficking which is scary as shit.

Now more details: This game has shown it's potential with great UI choices, great renders and beautiful characters, but this game for its plot-line goes through the realities of Slavery, Trafficking and Kidnapping. These elements if used properly can very well help us invest into the well being of the protagonists but as of right now (Chapter 2) such things are not yet in sight.

What can be done to make it better: I do not mind a gruesome story coupled with great renders and sex, however if the objectives of this game is to make us invest into the characters which at the same time giving us visual pleasure, the author has to draw out the sexy parts of the game further while putting a bit more emphasis of such scenes. While at the same time keeping us on our toes by making us aware of the dangers our protagonists can face, this also entails that our characters do something that makes us root for them such as keeping their motivations in check.

In the end: I like what the author is going for however, for people who hate rape, gore, etc. This game is not for them.

On the other hand, if you are intrigued with what happens next or just love looking at good renders (ignoring the gore) this game is for you.

Wow, what an ugly story. Let me show you scenes of the rape and torture of women not because I like it, but because I want you to know that being a sex slave for a drug trafficking ring is not as glamorous as it sounds. This story represents the worst that these stories have to offer. Maybe his next project could be a historical piece. Women in a Nazi concentration camp. The VN version of a snuff film.

I am giving it two stars.
The sex scenes and renders are very good. It's even better with the unofficial incest patch.
However I am giving it two stars because of some of the author's choice.

While the story is interesting, it is a little rough at the starts, what is happening is a little hard to believe, and some of the dialogues choices seem clumsy. This gets better fast.

But what does not is that the author is regularly breaking the fourth wall.
Sometimes he does so with some goofy out of place gif trolling us for a wrong choice that instantly lead to a bad end.
Sometimes it's with way too serious stuff. Like a pop up in the middle of the action where the author's shares his view on kinaping women in real life and how he wants to do his part to teach us about it.
This is a sex game with rape elements, this is merely fantasy and boner fuel.
There is no place to plaster walls of text on kidnapped women and how to prevent and recognize it.

And finally the last straw for me, is the end of chapter 2 where a woman comits suicide on screen.
I am suposed to use this stuff to make it rain a thousand loads. Not to see stuff that kills my boner. The authors should decides what he is aiming for with his game because it's all over the place.

One moment you get a blowjob from your aunt, the next moment he is trying to teach you about kidnapping and showing us a dark scene, the very next moment you are at the beach fingering your aunt.
My boner doesn't understand what is happening and this is not good.

My Rating of [Chapter 2] is:

Pros:
+ Fantastic Renders
+ Fantastic Animation
+ Active Play
+ Beautiful Women
+ Long Game play
+ Fantastic Story

Cons:
- Nothing

Conclusion:

This is a Game thats one of a Kind.The graphics and animation are amazing,and also that the Dev brings up the Problem with Human Trafficking,that really is a problem in the World.
Started up slow,but now has Picked up Speed wich I like.
Game is just awesome...

Worth the Download

Review of Chapter 1 Final

After you saw the movie Taken for the first time, did you want to go all Liam Neeson and take on the sex traffickers of the world? Me too! It never occurred to do that by making a porn game.

I got confused when, halfway through the first chapter, this game took an M. Night Shyamalan twist and suddenly became someone's term paper on sex trafficking. I'm giving the game one star because it did not list its sources.

I know that sounds weird as shit, but that's the brew this game has on tap. You take 2 parts Taken, 2 parts Narcos, 1 part Signs, mix it with concentrated white knighting, and sprinkle awkward and juvenile dialogue throughout and I dare you to chug it. You'll need a chaser afterwards. Not Bud Light though. Even this swill tastes better than Bud Light.

I suppose there was a time after vaping a bunch of keef that I thought it would be a brilliant idea to take Cinemax and The Learning Channel and force them to fuck until something popped out that would educate me while I was busting a nut. But, instead, I just slept it off and then beat-off to a CNN townhall with Elizabeth Warren when I woke up. Eeeehhh, close enough! I figured...

Thank goodness this game came along! Now, I can have the awkward seduction of the MC's aunt, oops, I mean his mom's "best friend" interrupted to show me a dramatized depiction of a violent rape and sexual torture so I can understand the horror of sex trafficking. Jesus. And I thought Forensic Files was hard to jerk-off to...

I guess I should keep this review on topic by talking about the game. Stock elements are everywhere, renders are poor, the story is nonsensical, the tone is all over the place, the dialogue is embarrassing, and the white knighting will choke you.

Fortunately, we know we can trust the information and education that this game provides because it was researched... on the internet. *Boner deflates*

Not recommended

Great potential for this game no doubt about it.

Yes the renders are grainy (due to a hardware) and we've see the female model before but still the story is very intriguing for me and do have a side of mystery to it.

I am sure we will see a story that will start to really develop and some action apart from sexual awareness between MC and the hottie older women but some fighting too.

Keep going dev as I would like to see more.

This game shows good promise. I like the two women...especially the aunt and her body...and I like the basic concept of the story. However, because of the relatively poor translation it is difficult to really follow the discussions between the MC and aunt. Translation and dialogue could be much better. The missing images also were distracting.

Anyway, I look forward to the next rendition...I hope it makes more sense and includes all images.

I think it has lots of potential and I hope it can continue in the story format instead of going in direction of visiting locations and collecting money etc type game. Please keep it a game which follows a choice selection and avoid a game which leads to player just visiting same locations for grinding.

In short Please keep it in the current format as the Intro and not go in the direction of Milf City etc.