Thank you for the feedback!Very nice so far. I like the asides showing Ali's personality. It took until partway through for me to realize I could click on red text.The prologue's the right length, and with three more chapters you should be able to build anticipation without drawing things out too much.
Question! I originally had a mini "tutorial" at the beginning of the game. "You can click this." "Post it notes are Ali's immediate thoughts." "Notebook entries are reflections of her future self." But it felt so dry. Like I was playing Final Fantasy 7 again and just trying to click through the level up tutorial.
Do you think it would benefit the game for me to add something quick in there? Maybe just "hey, you can click these"?
Nevermind. I figured how I want to do it. Thanks for you input. It helped me figure it out.
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