HTML - Virus-99 [Ch.2] [Greamjoe]

Overall it has good bones, I do like this style of story. Dialogue and progression is good, I'm looking forward to where it goes in the future.

However, I do have my gripes:

The progression can be really esoteric sometimes. If it's not a new option, events are often not marked and you either stumble upon them or consult the built-in guide to the next event. It's fine because there's an in-built guide, but still.

The Angry Ryan path is really grindy. I understand that there's a desire to stretch it out and get a feeling of progression, but that progression should come from content, not having to click through everything 50 times. I recommend editing the values through a Twine editor.

Also, small note, in the Angry Ryan section, I got confused when I asked Hannah to distract Ryan and he was still in the basement. The distraction is only for cutting the bars.

The game is really interesting. The visual quality is great, the story is not mainstream, and the struggle seems real. I miss the "change name" feature, but that will probably change since the game is in the early stages. I highly recommend it. Good luck, and keep up the good work!

It's one of the better HTML games lately. It's a good idea. Giving you both sides of the protagonists. Definitely will keep an eye on this one.

A couple of things that I hope to see:
First of all I liked the Ryan angry side of the story, more content and lots of anal content, I love the clips you chose, definitely you can find ending to the events thats occurring, like when he attacks the girl and we see the anal then scene is just gone and you continue playing. Instead, we can see afterwards of it and easing out of the scene, and then continuing.

And second, I would also love to see same, if not more amount of anal content on the Hannah gameplay where you try to keep everyone happy.

This could be a good, rich game if you improve what you have done already. Deserves a good review.

Best HTML game in a while. Fresh ideas well executed. The media used were thoughtfully selected and some I've never seen before. I hope this creator continues, and it seems like they are dedicated to fleshing out the unique branches of this game.