VN Ren'Py Vulgar Reverie [v0.16 P1] [Saxonado Studios]

[Nex]

The update was great with the build up, the interactions between MC and Amelia and the scenes. The bathroom scene especially was just perfect and unlike some people I have paid attention so I didn't have any doubts during that scene. Honestly I don't get why people even after this update think Amelia will just fly off on her own when she wants to give MC show and she wants MC to see everything. For her enjoyment it's important that MC watches her be dirty and her to see the effect she has on him. Her just going around fucking people without MC's involvement would be totally pointless for their dynamic.

Though I have to say it was disappointing that after all that build up we couldn't see her reaction when Brandon penetrated her because of the angle. They could have used mirror on the Wall during the scene so we would have been able to see her face.

Primarily because of the MC's own dialogue as well as dialogue about hiding nudes/texts from the MC. The MC mentioned during the first event that Amelia was ready to fool around but was stalling. Now in the bathroom, of course it's revealed she knew, but in the MC's head he was very excited about the idea of her doing something that she wanted to do for her own pleasure. There is just a very obvious growing trend in these interactions.

Also, she already fucked someone without the MC present but recorded it for him later. I expect something similar will happen during Brandon's next home visit.

 

[MixQQ]

Updating the game wasn't exactly to my taste. I think my husband needs more control over what is happening.
I think there should be more controlled sex scenes like there were in Moonripple Lake. I think it's sexier when the MC says how much a wife can do. It's boring as hell when THE MC IS JUST WATCHING AND HAS NO CONTROL.

MC should join the party for awesome MMF/DP scene

 

[Suntar]

And once more a reclaiming scene is teased, even specifically stated to happen right after Brandon leaves, only to not be included. Doubtful they'll be in the mood after Ammie's confession, so it most likely won't happen. At this point I don't think Saxxie has any intention of ever including a reclaiming scene, just keeps milking the few hopeful guys that are sticking around for it

 

[FMarshallboy]

So do the previous saves work now or do I have to play again?

 

[kristo0086]

MC should join the party for awesome MMF/DP scene

You can think of a lot of things without necessarily having a threesome. My opinion is that the standard Japanese NTS as in the sakura atelier games is very boring, the MC doesn't do shit, but only watches or worse, the wife just tells how she fucked a bull. I don't want an ouroboros. I want more VARIETY IN THE SEX SCENES.

 

[kristo0086]

And once more a reclaiming scene is teased, even specifically stated to happen right after Brandon leaves, only to not be included. Doubtful they'll be in the mood after Ammie's confession, so it most likely won't happen. At this point I don't think Saxxie has any intention of ever including a reclaiming scene, just keeps milking the few hopeful guys that are sticking around for it

The main problem is that we had to add these scenes. History repeats itself as with the game my futa family. It 's just that the developer needs to lower the tension and give an emotional release .

 

[Suntar]

The main problem is that we had to add these scenes. History repeats itself as with the game my futa family. It 's just that the developer needs to lower the tension and give an emotional release .

I don't quite understand your point. What do you mean with having to include those scenes being the real problem? Can you elaborate?

 

[Nex]

I don't quite understand your point. What do you mean with having to include those scenes being the real problem? Can you elaborate?

I believe, the scenes would become repetitious. Where as just having the dialogue between them serves as a way to relieve any tension/doubt without necessarily showing the reclamation every time. After all, we just had a reclamation scene last update. Personally, I think you only need one after major events or turning points.

 

[kristo0086]

I don't quite understand your point. What do you mean with having to include those scenes being the real problem? Can you elaborate?

I mean, it was necessary to give the players an emotional release at the end and smooth out the corners in this update.

 

[norybrg]

Shadows of Desire, My New GF and this one in the same day? damn

 

[cryfane]

And once more a reclaiming scene is teased, even specifically stated to happen right after Brandon leaves, only to not be included. Doubtful they'll be in the mood after Ammie's confession, so it most likely won't happen. At this point I don't think Saxxie has any intention of ever including a reclaiming scene, just keeps milking the few hopeful guys that are sticking around for it

That's what I'm hoping for, enough of reclaiming scenes fr, they served their purpose at the beginning of the story: the fantasy/cuck talks before the actual sharing scenes started, to put on boundaries and, at the very start, to be a way, with higher chance of success, for the husband to tell Amelia about his fantasies.

At this point any more reclaiming scenes is just boring and a waste of Karman's skills, as they're very limited per update.

Ofc the lack of sexual intercourse between the husband and Amelia would be something weird if you wanna make the story looks a bit more realistic (they wouldn't really stop having sex unless their relationship became a full on cuck experience, which doesn't really feel right with the writing so far), but having scenes to represent that is (imo) a non-optimal way of delivering the updates. I like how the story feels believable and wouldn't want it to lose this aspect, but we gotta adress that we have a limited amount of art per update and try to make the best use of it.

What makes updates exciting and good is the innovating elements, the surprising scenes, things that none of us, except Saxx, could anticipate, basically: different stuff. So, to keep the realistic elements yet without diminishing the actual excitement each update could have (with scenes focused on the sharing/ntr elements and not the normal hubby/wifey sex) we should be fine with just text lines to represent the husband-wife shenanigans like (very poor writen example) "and they had the best sex of their life that night" and then fast forward to developing the plot again, no need to show their sex if you can save up the artist's skills for a better use later with an actual new, different, exciting scene.

Ofc great scenes could come out using just the husband and Amelia and I would enjoy seeing something like that, if well written and portrayed and not just another reclaiming detour, but I'll leave that for Saxx's creativity to shine. Tho you all can understand what I meant before without having to state the above... right?

Forgot to include this: amazing update 9.8/10 (I saw a comment before about how good it would've been to have been able to see amalia's expression at the bathroom scene, that would've been 10/10 update if had been done, I even thought of a way that seems reasonable: Amelia pushing the bath curtains just enough when she came and putting her head inside the bath tube with the rest remaining unseen)

 

[Suntar]

That's what I'm hoping for, enough of reclaiming scenes fr, they served their purpose at the beginning of the story: the fantasy/cuck talks before the actual sharing scenes started, to put on boundaries and, at the very start, to be way, with higher chance of success, for the husband to tell Amelia about his fantasies.

At this point any more reclaiming scenes is just boring and a waste of Karman's skills, as they're very limited per update.

Ofc the lack of sexual intercourse between the husband and Amelia would be something weird if you wanna make the story looks a bit more realistic (they wouldn't really stop having sex unless their relationship became a full on cuck experience, which doesn't really feel right with the writing so far), but having scenes to represent that is (imo) a non-optimal way of delivering the updates. I like how the story feels believable and wouldn't want it to lose this aspect, but we gotta adress that we have a limited amount of art per update and try to make the best use of it.

What makes updates exciting and good is the innovating elements, the surprising scenes, things that none of us, except Saxx, could anticipate, basically: different stuff. So, to keep the realistic elements yet without diminishing the actual excitement each update could have (with scenes focused on the sharing/ntr elements and not the normal hubby/wifey sex) we should be fine with just text lines to represent the husband-wife shenanigans like (very poor writen example) "and they had the best sex of their life that night" and then fast forward to developing the plot again, no need to show their sex if you can save up the artist's skills for a better use later with an actual new, different, exciting scene.

Ofc great scenes could come out using just the husband and Amelia and I would enoy seeing something like that, if well written and portrayed and not just another reclaiming detour, but I'll leave that for Saxx's creativity to shine. Tho you all can understand what I meant before without having to state the above... right?

Forgot to include this: amazing update 9.8/10 (I saw a comment before about how good it would've been to have been able to see amalia's expression at the bathroom scene, that would've been 10/10 update if had been done, I even thought of a way that seems reasonable: Amelia pushing the bath curtains just enough when she came and putting her head inside the bath tube with the rest remaining unseen)

I'd be with you if not half the dialogue between MC and Ammie was about reclaiming.
No, last update wasn't a reclaiming scene, it was a build-up scene for this update. Reclaiming would be them fucking immediately after Ammie is done with her bull.
The blowjob on vacation is the only instance where this happens. No sex between the couple after a NTS scene yet.

At least some lines of text confirming they actually had sex should at least be included though, but not even that happens. It just feels like deliberate spite for people who enjoy those things

 

[cryfane]

I'd be with you if not half the dialogue between MC and Ammie was about reclaiming.
No, last update wasn't a reclaiming scene, it was a build-up scene for this update. Reclaiming would be them fucking immediately after Ammie is done with her bull.
The blowjob on vacation is the only instance where this happens. No sex between the couple after a NTS scene yet.

At least some lines of text confirming they actually had sex should at least be included though, but not even that happens. It just feels like deliberate spite for people who enjoy those things

You're completely right for the actual meaning of the word "reclaiming" but I'm pretty sure you get what I meant without needing to be extra criterious about the word usage~

But in case you didn't: I just wanted to share my opinion that I wouldn't like 0.14 to be like 0.12 again, enough of that, let's move the story forward.

Next time I'll use the right term "assertive scenes between husband and wife" to not create any more confusion, despite my clear examples on the first line

 

[LksLight]

Is this it? I mean... It wasn't bad, but... All that hype for... this? Very mid update. Mid banter, mid teasing, bellow average sex scenes that were EXTREMELY short, in fact, shorter than the teasing scenes from the earlier updates.

The writing for those scenes was very poor, to say the least. Felt like a "well, let's get this out of the way so that we can move on" kinda scene.

People saying "Saxy is cooking!" probably can't even go to the gym without creaming their underpants, because seriously... Even though we finally got the long awaited sex scene with the coach, there was nothing hot about it. Actually, I think this is the worse I've seen the pacing and text for any update, so far.

It felt like watching someone rip apart the concept of "show, don't tell". Because we are told multiple times Ammie is getting fucked hard, intensely and losing her mind from pleasure... But we don't actually see that happening, because the author doesn't show us, he only tells us it's happening. And then you press enter a couple of times and the sex scene is over, without even giving you enough time to get a hard-on. Lmao.

You're telling me the jacked personal trainer who just so happens to present himself as a fuckboy could only mannage that? 2 positions in bed for what seemed like a couple of minutes, then a slightly longer and somehwat "spicier" (hair grabbing and spanking) scene in the bathroom with only silhouetes?

Again, there was no kissing, no breast sucking, no foreplay, nothing interesting going on. Straight to the bedroom, then straight to sex (very lame sex, at that), pump a couple of times, aaaaaand done! What an absolute shitshow of a sex scene.

And what the fuck is up with the dialogue? "ahhmm", "uhhmmmf", "aaargh", "fuck!"... We grade schoolers now? The fucking AI NTR games being spammed on this site have better dialogue for the sex scenes. For shame!

Great art tho. Karman is the one actually cooking.

I've come to the conclusion that Saxonado can't write sex scenes. The one with the coworker seems to have been a fluke.

 

[Xill]

So I just played the update and I hadn't played since the gym update.

First, there's two sex scenes with the MC back to back, so can someone tell me what are people complaining about?

Secondly, during the entire sex scene with Brandon, regardless of which choice you pick Amelia acknowledges the MC's presence and teases him multiple times. Even during the bathroom part, she knows he is there and is saying things that involve him. So again, can someone tell me why are people complaining about NTR when this couldn't be more lovey dovey if they tried?

 

[Suntar]

So I just played the update and I hadn't played since the gym update.

First, there's two sex scenes with the MC back to back, so can someone tell me what are people complaining about?

Secondly, during the entire sex scene with Brandon, regardless of which choice you pick Amelia acknowledges the MC's presence and teases him multiple times. Even during the bathroom part, she knows he is there and is saying things that involve him. So again, can someone tell me why are people complaining about NTR when this couldn't be more lovey dovey if they tried?

First: Because those scenes were pretty detached from the NTS-scenes. They were too alike the scenes between them before Ammie ever started fooling around. Also, we don't need foreplay only scenes anymore, especially not between the main couple.

Second: Reading comprehension is hard, especially while fapping. Add to that the number of people that start skipping the moment no lewd cg is on screen and voila, they misunderstand.

 

[Xill]

First: Because those scenes were pretty detached from the NTS-scenes. They were too alike the scenes between them before Ammie ever started fooling around. Also, we don't need foreplay only scenes anymore, especially not between the main couple.

But people are complaining that there aren't many scenes between them, that's why I'm asking.

 

[FMarshallboy]

I wouldn't complain so much about the update, if only I could load my damn previous save game.

 

[Zulfiqar]

Good update but wow this thread, is there seriously complaining about the ntr getting too hard? The only issue with this update is that the NTR should have been HARDER. She should have climaxed multiple times during the second and third sex scene after she got warmed up and stretched out. All that would lead up to her literally passing out and having to be carried by the bull to their bed.

Would have perfectly fit the MC's anxiety attack inner monolgues, he would have had to stare at her unconscious body, truly satisfied for the first time in her life as he's too cowardly to wake her up and disturb her rest. Then her waking up and being amused/affectionate would have been a nice resolution with a proper aftercare/reclaim scene to reaffirm that this is loving relationship. But yall too fragile for that so we missed out on kino smdh

 

[wmrxd]

But people are complaining that there aren't many scenes between them, that's why I'm asking.

Most people complaining was because they wanted a scene between MC and Ammie at the end, not just a handjob but a real recovery scene, etc. They even talk about it right at the end of the update, so maybe it will happen in the next update. I just don't know if they won't skip it and go straight to the Mafi part, which for me would be a huge mistake, especially with everything MC said after what happened and still sending Brandon away for them to do this. An MC recovery scene would be really hot. I personally think that a full MC recovery scene with her would be really hot.