VN Ren'Py Vulgar Reverie [v0.16 P1] [Saxonado Studios]

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nidezrel said:
Just for the sake of discussion, do you really not understand those people's perspective? Her exact lines:

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am "B-Brandon, stop...!"
am "W-We can't...!"
am "...I-I'm a married woman...!"
am "I-I can't do this to my husba-"
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If her looking pained and telling him to stop while she tries to hold him back doesn't mean "stop", then what does? This sounds like saying "no means yes", which people nowadays know better than to think that. Until she notices her husband and decides to turn it into a play, the scene looks indistinguishable from an assault scene.

Despite her being the supposed mafia princess, she hasn't really exercised that at all since the Geist situation. She's been more and more submissive, and has done nothing to talk back when they insult her or her husband. Not allowing disrespect is one of the key traits of mafioso types, and she just has not acted like that at all. And as for being physically dangerous, she hasn't exercised that either. Plus, Brandon is jacked. He could 100% overpower her if he wanted. I think the mafia princess angle is cool, but it feels largely forgotten in the story.
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You don't know what acting is (or Ammy is really that good at acting she even made you believe lol)
 
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nidezrel said:
What acting? She only started acting when she saw that the MC arrived. Before that it wasn't acting. The shift in demeanor is extremely clear.
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She is acting. She followed brandon to the locker room. Brandon literally says she could get away at any moment, but isnt. And she is saying stuff like "I cant do that to my husband". She is acting like a cheating wife. Its the typical cheating wife scenario overcome with lust that gives in to the hot trainers advances. She was just waiting for the mc to show up. She didnt turn the situation when the mc arrived, it was all acting. At the end Brandon gives his number to her to do stuff when the mc is not at home. Brandon thinks she is just a cheater.
 
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Terry Zimmerman said:
She is acting. She followed brandon to the locker room. Brandon literally says she could get away at any moment, but isnt. And she is saying stuff like "I cant do that to my husband". She is acting like a cheating wife. Its the typical cheating wife scenario overcome with lust that gives in to the hot trainers advances. She was just waiting for the mc to show up. She didnt turn the situation when the mc arrived, it was all acting. At the end Brandon gives his number to her to do stuff when the mc is not at home. Brandon thinks she is just a cheater.
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Right, she's been acting in the sense that she's been deceiving him all along, doing these flirty suggestive things that make him think she really is cheating, and hiding the fact that the husband was there today to see it all play out. But the bit wasn't meant to evolve into more than that until the husband arrived, and that's why she's reacting like that. She was just trying to get him in the right place and stall for time, and then she was gonna turn on the proper cheating wife act, but she underestimated how her signals were being received, and he came on much stronger than she intended, making for a bit of an tense situation, that looks kinda scary from the perspective of the MC who had no idea what she was up to. That's how it reads like to me.

Perhaps discussion about this scene has run its course. Hard to say much more with the limited information we have, and without seeing her POV of the events. I admit, since we heard Saxy's input on the intent of the scene, I feel like I understand the story less. Now I don't think I understand Amelia's motivations as well anymore, and it's less clear to me what's going on in her head. We'll have to see how the story plays out.
 
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nidezrel said:
Right, she's been acting in the sense that she's been deceiving him all along, doing these flirty suggestive things that make him think she really is cheating, and hiding the fact that the husband was there today to see it all play out. But the bit wasn't meant to evolve into more than that until the husband arrived. She was just trying to get him in the right place and stall for time, and then she was gonna turn on the proper cheating wife act. But she underestimated how her signals were being received, and he came on much stronger than she intended, making for a bit of an tense situation, that looks kinda scary from the perspective of the MC who had no idea what she was up to. That's how it reads like to me.

Perhaps discussion about this scene has run its course. Hard to say much more with the limited information we have, and without seeing her POV of the events. I admit, since we heard Saxy's input on the intent of the scene, I feel like I understand the story less. Now I don't think I understand Amelia's motivations as well anymore, and it's less clear to me what's going on in her head. We'll have to see how the story plays out.
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Amelia expected MC to be watching her all the time in the gym. So when she went to locker room with Brandon she assumed MC would follow shortly after. But he missed it and that threw a curveball to her plans. Now she was in pickle, does she just keep stalling, hoping he arrives or do something with Brandon and give MC the details later. But he did arrive so she could proceed as she had planned.

That's the point of Saxy's input. Amelia wanted MC to see her suck off Brandon. If MC didn't arrive she probably would have done something milder.
 
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turmio said:
Amelia expected MC to be watching her all the time in the gym. So when she went to locker room with Brandon she assumed MC would follow shortly after. But he missed it and that threw a curveball to her plans. Now she was in pickle, does she just keep stalling, hoping he arrives or do something with Brandon and give MC the details later. But he did arrive so she could proceed as she had planned.

That's the point of Saxy's input. Amelia wanted MC to see her suck off Brandon. If MC didn't arrive she probably would have done something milder.
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Don't wear down your keyboard on that moron's behalf. If someone has the reading comprehension of an overcooked spaghetti noodle, it's not worth it. Let them seethe about "oh it's netorare because so and so...". We all know that line of reason is fucking bullshit. This game describes what it is on the first page: a NETORASE game. Honestly I wish these fucking trolls would just get banned, they ruin these threads by just creating toxicity. Let's collectively ignore them.
 
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nidezrel said:
Right, she's been acting in the sense that she's been deceiving him all along, doing these flirty suggestive things that make him think she really is cheating, and hiding the fact that the husband was there today to see it all play out. But the bit wasn't meant to evolve into more than that until the husband arrived, and that's why she's reacting like that. She was just trying to get him in the right place and stall for time, and then she was gonna turn on the proper cheating wife act, but she underestimated how her signals were being received, and he came on much stronger than she intended, making for a bit of an tense situation, that looks kinda scary from the perspective of the MC who had no idea what she was up to. That's how it reads like to me.

Perhaps discussion about this scene has run its course. Hard to say much more with the limited information we have, and without seeing her POV of the events. I admit, since we heard Saxy's input on the intent of the scene, I feel like I understand the story less. Now I don't think I understand Amelia's motivations as well anymore, and it's less clear to me what's going on in her head. We'll have to see how the story plays out.
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HappyCrab said:
Don't wear down your keyboard on that moron's behalf. If someone has the reading comprehension of an overcooked spaghetti noodle, it's not worth it. Let them seethe about "oh it's netorare because so and so...". We all know that line of reason is fucking bullshit. This game describes what it is on the first page: a NETORASE game. Honestly I wish these fucking trolls would just get banned, they ruin these threads by just creating toxicity. Let's collectively ignore them.
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Yeah i am hopeful sax does more stuff with the trainer. we need more bbc content and I am kind of tired of this half ass criticism on this thread. If its not for you thats okay. Leave a review if you aren't a big fan of the content or you know move on.

I am happy with the game its proobably the best NTS game on the site even with at little content as we have
 
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deviousstorm said:
Yeah i am hopeful sax does more stuff with the trainer. we need more bbc content and I am kind of tired of this half ass criticism on this thread. If its not for you thats okay. Leave a review if you aren't a big fan of the content or you know move on.

I am happy with the game its proobably the best NTS game on the site even with at little content as we have
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And one of the few in this genre who doesn't use ai to make the art. I think that is worth appreciating. That, and Saxo and Karman being such a small team, makes me wish more people subscribed to their patreon.
 
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I said nothing about NTR.

I get that some of you don't relate to this feedback about the latest update, and that's fine, but to dismiss it as hysterical and just calling people morons is helping no one. If anyone is typing here, it's because they like the game and want it to be better. No one is saying "game bad, please change it". I'm only human so sometimes I misunderstand things or don't express myself as well as I could, but I've been trying my best to give constructive feedback. You don't improve by sticking your head in the sand and ignoring feedback.
 
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My general thoughts on the game still stands this update was ass and what should of actually happened is in the fan art thread change my mind

The game is good I won't lie it's pretty good for a NTS game at the end of the day it's another upper quality NTS game I enjoy it I won't lie but it's the direction of the game I don't like I feel it's it's low on content compared to before,story feels rushed don't have that suspenseful feeling like before

I'm hoping next update we get a little more quality even if it takes more time as I said I'd rather have a quality update over quantity Patreon might take a hit but over time it would recover once eyes see the quality

This is just my opinion good NTS game just doo doo ass direction goodnight gents
 
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I totally agree. Like a I said before, the 0.11 update is good.
It's funny how everybody is complaining about there is no sex in 0.11 and wasn't complained when 0.10 was released, because that update it was pure "nothing happened". The only good thing was MC starting to read Amelia's diary, nothing more, the story doesn't progress very much (nothing happen between Brandon and Amelia) and even the start of that update was boring when MC was alone, and nothing happen when Amelia arrives home.
I don't understand these discussions in this forum.
 
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