VN - Ren'Py - War of Mine [Ep.0.2 v1.0.0] [Orange Unicorn]

  1. 5.00 star(s)

    Wicks99

    How do you make reading a visual novel feel like watching a movie? Do it like War on Mine: Ghost. Although a short prelude to an upcoming game (~1 to 1.5 hours), this introduction has whet my appetite for the main chapters... Can't wait to see what else Orange Unicorn has in stall for us.

    Story
    As Ghost is very short, it's hard to summarize without spoiling. I would say this is a political intrigue + action + sci-fi game with heavy world building. Do not be deceived by the first 10 minutes of chirpy slice of life moments, things get very heavy after a while.

    Ghost is presented in a unique format - not only are there multiple perspectives and cut scenes like film, the overall pacing, dialogue and style of presentation resembles more movie than visual novel. I also like the use of "info panels" at strategic junctures during game play that expand on the lore and trivia, beats the typical info dump through dialogue.

    Game Mechanic
    100% kinetic novel with no choices, like watching a film.

    Background / Character Renders
    I think it's either done with VAM or Blender, they look too gorgeous to be Daz3D. The backgrounds are either built from scratch or heavily customized, I see no stock assets seen in other games.

    Character models are top notch - Sylena and Eliza are beautiful Asians done up realistically i.e. not the typical Asian stereotypes (thin eyes, heavy makeup, slut looks) that Americans seem to like. Aisha looks convincing enough as a Middle Eastern beauty while the male models like Dean and Ramos are attractive enough.

    Character Development
    Despite a short run, the developers managed to jam in a bit of backstory for Sylena and Dean to give them some character heft. From what I can tell of the main game teasers at the end, the actual MC will be someone different and main LI will likely be Eliza who appears at the end.

    Having said that, hopefully we will still see some of the characters introduced in this prelude. It would be a shame if characters like Sylena, Dean and Aki have no appearance in the future after the build up here.

    Sex Scenes
    There are no sex scenes suitable for fapping here, the closest you will get is a very short but crucial rape scene for plot purposes.

    BGM and Sound Effects
    BGM is as expected, very movie like and complements the story well. There are some sound effects like shots, electric zaps, crowd screaming etc. as well.

    Conclusion
    Ghost has certainly made a strong impression as an introduction and the story is a high potential one with many possibilities. The game is also unique in the sense that it plays out like a movie script i.e. one can almost envision how it can be shot as a film following the game.

    However, part of me is skeptical whether the project can conclude - the rate at which new content is coming out coupled with the fact that the developer is involved in another game concurrently makes a weak case. I hope my fears are unfounded, but players will need to be realistic on the pace of development.
    Likes: Cresil-
  2. 4.00 star(s)

    Jaango

    War of mine [Ep.0.2 v1.0.0]

    It's a kinetic novel so far but I enjoyed the story. And I'm glad dev switched it to male protagonist game in the end. From the start game focus on a female protagonist. About the rape well it's unavailable it's happening to a side character. She's not a LI, later she kills herself. Don't worry about the main female protagonist she's safe ( I'm not spoiling you guys about it). I enjoyed the story and world building. But game is shorter. Hope in future male protagonist will date female main protagonist.

    Overall i enjoyed this one. Keep up the good work dev looking forward to next updates
  3. 2.00 star(s)

    7_lJzWy3XxoEyow7

    WOM-Episode_0.2-Ghost-1.0.0-pc

    Impressive! - How dev is able to accompany great visuals with a total horseshit plot. The writing fits the plot, simple and boring, wannabe epic.
    The visuals work great with the sound effects! The shock moments feel awfully made up and unrealistic - juvinile theatralic.
    Dev should absolutely hire some skilled writers so his technical skill dont go to waste.

    Graphics: 5/5
    Plot: 1/5
    Writin: 1/5
    Lewd: 0/5
  4. 3.00 star(s)

    N0madS0uL

    VERSION: EP. 0.2. V1.0.0
    SUMMARY: Good looking VN with decent intrigue and interesting world but the plot is poorly executed.
    RATINGS: (out of 5): PARTIAL REVIEW!
    1. Models: 4
    2. Animations: 4
    3. General Visuals: 4
    4. Characters: 3
    5. Story: 4
    6. Writing: 4
    7. Pacing: 3
    8. Content (amount): 2
    9. UI & Sounds: 4
    10. Fetish & kinks: X
    Average: X of 50 possible points giving a X% rating i.e. X stars.

    PROS:
    1. Models are really nice looking
    2. General world and aesthetic is pretty decent.
    3. Animations are nicely done and its clear a lot of effort has been made.
    4. Music is good and general sounds are decent.
    5. Writing is not bad, structured well and reads fine.
    6. Voiced dialogue is a nice touch and is pretty well done, but (see cons)
    CONS:
    1. No sexual content which is strange considering its an adult VN and the tags...
    2. Speaking of tags, what else can we expect from this game developer?
    3. Too little content for initial release i.e. EP1&2 are not nearly enough
    4. Voice acting, talking volume is terrible, I had to turn my volume to max to hear the "ghost" speak during EP1 cut-scene, this needs attention.
    5. Story and plot structure at this point feels like a mixed bag of cats and I feel that developer could and should have spent more time easing players into whatever the hell they were trying to do.
    6. Added to above, it makes little sense that a military genius would attack a peaceful nation to lure out an elite operative, then beg for mercy 2min into the confrontation with said operative and get himself killed...its flimsy story telling and annoys me to no end when you couple what is clearly been a lot of effort on so many other fronts to such a poor plot point.
    FINAL THOUGHTS & SUGGESTIONS:
    • Strong oriental feel to it in terms of its art work. I personally lean more toward western style however, which does not try to make all their characters look li this is just my preference and does not diminish or make the game any less impressive.
    • The game does feel a bit confusing in what is happening, why its happening and how these things are related to each other. So far it feels jarring and what is a bit frustrating is that IMO the game should have set the stage better with its initial release to provide players with context. In a nutshell, im not fond of how the game transitions from one area to another, its not seamless and often leaves questions, though these may be answered later, this review is based on what is here.
    • Adding to above, without the context, lore, political knowledge the player will have a hard time following, necessitating that the player replay most likely the entire game to recap on what is already a complex plot. This is compounded by "long'ish" times between meaningful updates and content that drive the overall plot.
    • Overall I think its a decent game, but lacks some components that would have given it the holistic and more complete package. Currently there is just too little content and what is there is not delivered well enough. EP1 and 2 are together too short to provide the player with a decent start and compelling reason to keep playing despite all the other aspects of the game that are done rather well.
    • As such I can only recommend keeping an eye on this game and hoping there is much more to it, but I am not holding my breath. I suggest the developer provide much more content to tie up the initial and provide the player with a better story experience to set the stage for the game, as it is now you are doing yourself and your game a disservice IMO.
  5. 2.00 star(s)

    HG

    Note to myself:

    No sex content on a sex focused platform shows a lack of decorum. No teasing either, no chemistry. Very lengthy intro.

    Not recommended in the current state (Beginning 2025) . Wait for at least 1 year to reengage in its content.
  6. 5.00 star(s)

    NoMansMind

    some serious world building going on here!
    so much so, that one could easily fill a series of books with it.
    the "Kinetic Novel" part is of course the elephant in the room. let me just say, that everything has to play out exactly the way it did for dramatic impact.
    think of SF-Game of Thrones. (goes for sex to - not much yet)
    very story focused. characters are shady or ambiguous.

    all in all, pretty exceptional and unique, really
  7. 5.00 star(s)

    asdoufa

    This is a really nice start.
    Great renders, interesting story and nicely done.
    I would only add the "auto" button and give the option of automatically move forward.
    I'll be following this one closely.
    Good job!
  8. 5.00 star(s)

    Tian Wuxie

    The renders are mind blowing, the plot is potential. Rooting for this one and hope it got acknowledge soon, as it deserves. It would be great if you guys keep putting efforts in character development.
  9. 5.00 star(s)

    dl1002kmc

    It was very impressive. Especially the song part is really the best. I think it will be my best song. It's really the best. I need a sound source!! It was short, but it was really awesome. I hope the next version comes out soon. I support you. Thank you.