[R>Proofreader] We need a good English proofreader.

Deleted member 1927702

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As you have already guessed from the title, I need a good English proofreader.
I don't earn much, so I won't be able to pay.
I would like to find a good man who would like my games, preference people who are native English speakers.

The method of communication is preferably in Discord : #1494

 

Deleted member 609064

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Beautiful images.

It wouldn't hurt to reveal the titles of the games, to explain the themes or fetishes. Proofreading is hard and difficult work only made easier if the proofreader really likes the story.
 

Deleted member 1927702

Welcome to my world.
Game Developer
Jan 8, 2020
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262
Beautiful images.

It wouldn't hurt to reveal the titles of the games, to explain the themes or fetishes. Proofreading is hard and difficult work only made easier if the proofreader really likes the story.
My games: Mysterious Stones, Horizons of the Future.
Horizons of the Future. It's my current game I'm working on, and I could use some English proofreading.;)

Genre: 3DCG, Visual novel, Voyeurism, Big tits, Big ass, Handjob, Oral sex, Vaginal sex, Anal sex, Lesbian, MILF, Paranormal,Fantastic.



The action of this game begins in 2222, in the city of Neon.

The technology of the time is far advanced, cyborgs and humans have become one social society.

A female scientist named Leila Star grew up without parents, her father disappeared when she was 10 years old, and she has never seen her mother. Leila was raised by a cyborg named Lona.

Leila decides to send the cyborg Lona back in time to find her parents and find out why they abandoned her.

And in our time...

In this game, you will play the role of a private detective, a young guy who has just arrived from his small town to the big city.

He hopes that in the big city he will find more work in his vocation, as he thinks.

After all, the work of a private detective, he chose because he loves adventure and solving mysteries.

And he did not make a mistake with the choice, because the adventure is guaranteed!



:sneaky: :)
 

AsuitedBoy

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Jan 3, 2021
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willing to work for free, just need experience, let me know if u still need a proof reader
 

Deleted member 609064

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willing to work for free, just need experience, let me know if u still need a proof reader
Please take this as a constructive suggestion.

If you want to be a proofreader, you should try to write in complete sentences, without abbreviations or slang. Convey that you're capable of formal writing, and people will assume you can write informally as needed. If you write casually, many folks will assume that you aren't able to handle stuff at a high level.

"I am willing to work for free to gain experience. Please let me know if you are still looking for a proofreader. Thanks!"
 

AsuitedBoy

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Jan 3, 2021
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Please take this as a constructive suggestion.

If you want to be a proofreader, you should try to write in complete sentences, without abbreviations or slang. Convey that you're capable of formal writing, and people will assume you can write informally as needed. If you write casually, many folks will assume that you aren't able to handle stuff at a high level.

"I am willing to work for free to gain experience. Please let me know if you are still looking for a proofreader. Thanks!"
thee wilt beest very much excit'ment at parties.
 

samluun

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thee wilt beest very much excit'ment at parties.
They actually have a point. if u talk liek this, no1 is gunna think ur good at the thing u say ur gud at.
It's hard to be an English proofreader if you struggle with English.
Mocking someone for trying to give you positive criticism only makes you look like a dick.

You don't need Shakespearean English, just the regular kind.
 

AsuitedBoy

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Jan 3, 2021
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They actually have a point. if u talk liek this, no1 is gunna think ur good at the thing u say ur gud at.
It's hard to be an English proofreader if you struggle with English.
Mocking someone for trying to give you positive criticism only makes you look like a dick.

You don't need Shakespearean English, just the regular kind.
do you mean the kind with "no1 / gunna / ur / gud " ?