I like the game for the most part. Nothing to write home about at the moment, but very promising.
Conceptually, it's pretty good, like yes, it's just another harem game, but that's not necessarily a bad thing. What it has over most others is the character variety. While yes, the roles are basic and have been done in pretty much every harem game e.g. family/landlady's family, teachers, neighbors, etc. this is one of very few games where you can also have sexual interactions with femboys/twinks and futanari as well as women, which is again pretty unique and I'm all for it. Letting people choose if they want those types of scenes might be an option, but not every game is for everyone, so I personally don't think it's a big deal.
Character design, while not mind-blowing, is pretty alright, and I really like the different clothing the characters wear, albeit sometimes unrealisticly slutty, but it's a porn game, so who cares.
Animations are also fine, could be better, could be worse. I feel like for some of them, there needs to be more build-up/transitions. Like characters starting to deepthroat you immediately, or going from clothes on, talking to each other, to having everything off, humping like rabbits, feels kinda off sometimes. Not that big of a deal, just something to improve on.
One thing I do think needs work is the writing. Even if you assume everyone is hypersexual with 0 inhibitions in this world, it still feels weird for them to be completely alright with seeing or being seen naked by people, but then be like "Thank god they didn't see me jerk off". Like, not only is the lack of inhibitions very unrealistic, which it's a porn game, so whatever, but also the lack of inhibitions doesn't feel consistent.
And probably my biggest problem is that sometimes the sentences just sound wrong, like people don't talk like that. And I get it, the dev is probably not a native speaker, and when that's the case, I usually just look past that, but sometimes it's just too uncanny to ignore. The best example is when characters refer to each other by their relationship status, like "Hey, roommate, how are you doing?", especially when you give the option to change relationships (friend to sister for example). Just make them refer to each other by names and by relationship status only if thinking about the other, like "What am I thinking, he's my brother for God's sake." or if referring to the relationship specifically, like "Stop that, I am your teacher!"
Also, back to being able to choose relationships, you should either not be able to change relationships or the story should work with at least with the idea of the character being related in some way, since, as hinted at in the game itself, that's what most people want that option for. And also having the base relationship being Landlord 1 and Landlord 2 is very unnatural, like why would you put the numbers in there and also why are they named landlord it should landlady.
And if the dev is actually reading this and I'm not just an old man screaming at clouds, I wanted to say sorry if the comment sounded a bit harsh. I just really think the game has potential and I would love seeing it flourish.
