VN What type of VNs would you guys like to see?

[EvasionYT]

Heya! I'm not one to post on forums like these, but I come with a serious question after making a purchase of a 3080ti, enabling me to begin using Daz studio. I've gotten the hang of it pretty quickly, but now I want to make some VNs. Honestly I have no idea what to make, I take inspirations highly from games like Rick and Morty ported by Night Mirror, DMD, Summertime Saga, and a lot more. Most of the times I play VNs I don't really pay attention to story, but I come asking what you guys would like to see.

(To site moderators)

This is my first post, so I'm not sure if I'm posting this in the right spot or with the right tags

 

[Deleted member 229118]

Insert standerd: Make what you want comment.

Now we got that out of the way.
There are a great many possible story options.

So let me spitball a few:

Harem girl: You are a lesbian harem girl corrupted and/or enslaved by your male master.
Your not really into dicks but he owns you so you can not say no.
The game is about trying to get it on with your fellow female harem/slave members and trying to avoid the masters attention.

Retirement: It is the year 2085.
Humans general become a 100 so retirement age is raised to 80.
You are an grandpa working as resaercher for a perfum company.
Always trying to outdo the competation.
By accident you create a drug that makes people very agreeable(as in they believe all but the most extreem things you say)
Your a year out from retirement.
How many woman can you corrupt to be your post retirement harem.

Household of terror:
You are an evil person.
The eldest son of a family who already raped his mother and sisters into obediance.
The only person you fear is your father who is a police officer.
The idea is that you need to keep the woman in your household afraid enough to obey you but no so scared they kill you in fear or devolpe enough courag to inform the police.
You also need to avoid your father catching you in the act.
Because if he does your a dead man.
It is really important to drive home just how scared the mc is of his father.
To the point that even if he could kill him he would be to scared to try.
The entire game is ment to invoke a feeling of constant dread.
Dread for both your victems and your players.

Corrupting the father.
You where a hard working father earning a good income a the local steel factory.
Unfortantly you had an accident that shattered your spine.
Your back makes it so you need to sleep a lot.
Your wife is afraid to sleep with you out of fear you get hurt.
And while your sick pay is enough to pay the bills she is considering to take a job(Something you encourage or disencourage) so they can have the luxeries your job used to let them afford.
Bored out of your mind and having a hyno fetish you manage to convince your wife to let you hypofuck her.
It works way better then expected and you want to see how far you can push it.
This is where the game truly start.
The main character becomes more and more corrupt and start seeing his daughters as future fucktoys.
It shoud be a slow corrupting.
At first your goal is to make your wife stop being afraid to have sex with you.
Yet as you can make her do more and more things she normaly never would you start to consider things like:
I really want her to walk around the house naked but the kids would never approve.
But what if i hypnotized them into thinking it is not a big deal.
Over time the main character stop justifying his increasing exploitation of his own family and harem to be.
The game is balanced between hypontizing your family and having to take care of the main characters health.
With there being a time limted of one year so you dont need to have births but can still impragnate them.
In short the idea is turning a hard working father into mr corrupter after losing his job and going bored out of his mind.
The story is about the corruption of the main character.
Not his victems.
So he shoud start out as the perfect amarican dad.
Hardworking, loyal, social.
Then have everything taking from him and twist him into becoming the corrupter.

 

[Klauw1988]

I want to see VN's with a more realistic and good story. Many adult VN's that I have played felt very dull. Many characters do things without consequences, feels unrealistic, emotionless and very dull.

Acting Lesson is for example a VN that I would like to. It's not only about "sex" but also daily struggles, problems and choices you need to make. Just like real life. Something everyone can relate on.

I find story and character development more important then straight up hardcore sex scene's that feels empty and emotionless. Feels like many writers just want to focus on sex scene's or certain fetishes. I also want to have a good story and character development.

I would also love to see more violence, politics, society issue's and many other things in adult VN's. I would love to see for example a adult Cyberpunk 2077 kinda style VN.

 

[Deleted member 229118]

Something i came up with while shopping.

Since it is your first visual novel keep it small and simple:
A story i once read was about a rapist observing his victem looking for the perfect time to ambush and rape her.

You could create a simple story about a one night rape.
Lets call it:
Find fuck forget:
The player observe a single mother and her 3 daughters and needs to(the player not the character) learn there schedual.
Desiding a victem and look when she is along.
The focus is on replay value.
You can only have 1 victem per playthrough.
I am sure you can find an excuees.
Something like: To risky, to many things can go wrong if i try to take them all at the same time and sticking around to long means risking police investigation.
People not responding to phones draws a lot of attention.

So you create a visual novel where the victems repeat the same action week after week.
Like carminal the youngest daughter has baley lessions every monday from 19:00 to 23:00.
Mira the second youngest always visits a friend on monday from 19:00 to 22:00.
And mora the mother plays bridge(A card game) with her club every monday from 18:00 to 21:00.
This leave's korra alone at home every monday from 19:00 to 21:00.
So the player decide to break in.
How does he break in?
Lockpicking?
Shatttered glass?
Ring the doorbel and force your way in?
All of these are valid and it is mostly a players choice.
During the rape time moves in real time.
Meaning the player has 2 real life hours to rape and get out of there or be arrested/killed.

With most of the gameplay part of the game is desided how you would rape your victem?
Forced impregnations?
Titty twisting?
How cruel will you be?
How much attention do you pay to your serounding.
Avoid making to much noise or you will get caught.
The very idea is a focus on risk vs reward.
You simply can not get everyone.
You have to pick a target, Pick a time and plot your home invasion to manage the risk of getting caught vs the reward of inflicing suffering.
And you shoud give the players a lot of options.
Temp them to ignore the time tikking away until the suddenly recieve smashed lamp on there head because they didnt notice the rest comming home.

 

[Fzeren]

Make sure to keep your first game small in scope. If you get too ambitious, you'll end up spreading yourself too thin. Focus on just one thing, and what you need in order to make that thing work.

Once you've decided on what you want the game to be about, you could play some other games which go for a similar thing. Try to figure out what parts work or don't work, and why they work, or don't work.

Acting Lesson is for example a VN that I would like to. It's not only about "sex" but also daily struggles, problems and choices you need to make. Just like real life. Something everyone can relate on.

Nah, fuck that. A game where it takes two minutes to pee, where you have to go through the pain of constantly making sure you're in a calorie surplus, ontop of having to deal with the stress and anxiety of more significant issues? Why would I need a game for that? I already get enough of it from life.

Do you know what I don't have? A regular influx of muscular tomboys who want to rape me. This is where porn comes in. Or atleast it would, if they would start producing the right kind...

 

[Klauw1988]

Make sure to keep your first game small in scope. If you get too ambitious, you'll end up spreading yourself too thin. Focus on just one thing, and what you need in order to make that thing work.

Once you've decided on what you want the game to be about, you could play some other games which go for a similar thing. Try to figure out what parts work or don't work, and why they work, or don't work.

Nah, fuck that. A game where it takes two minutes to pee, where you have to go through the pain of constantly making sure you're in a calorie surplus, ontop of having to deal with the stress and anxiety of more significant issues? Why would I need a game for that? I already get enough of it from life.

Do you know what I don't have? A regular influx of muscular tomboys who want to rape me. This is where porn comes in. Or atleast it would, if they would start producing the right kind...

Well, it's everyone else taste I quess. Many novels just feel empty and emotionless, because the whole story around it, is just dull and blunt. This is also the reason why I can't connect to many characters in many novels.

 

[HarveyD]

As Fzeren said, keep it small. Think of the most basic idea you can and then make that. Get feedback and then make something slightly larger, rinse and repeat.

 

[Robwood]

I, also, agree that you should keep it small. I'm probably in the minority here, but I'd love to see a VN about a daughter who's romantically attracted to her dad and sees sex as an expression of her love. Her age is whatever you're comfortable with--13, 18, whatever. The game would be about her coming to terms with her feelings and seducing him. The sex scenes would be loving and passionate--maybe he teaches her a little or provides guidance here and there while she, in turn, tells him where all of her erogenous spots are. With each embrace they fall more and more in love.

You could probably throw in a subplot that adds drama, but that's not my taste. The story focusing on their forbidden relationship would be more than enough to sate me.