I'd like to first start off with the good.
1) The renders are really really good.
2) There is some variety in the girls. My gawd Dana is scrumptious, really love the thickness. Thank you for throwing in some bigger girls without being obese.
3) The animations are well done.
4) The story/writing is both a positive and a negative. The positive here is that the English is decent and the author tries to be witty and funny, succeeding at moments (which is better than most).
Some negatives:
1) I get this is a slow burner, but ultimately I'm here for the erotica and sex. Unfortunately, there isn't much sexual content yet and the pacing is way off that you have to go through a lot of reading before getting to anything sexually exciting.
2) When sex happens, it just happens. It's like you get a choice, Do you want to have sex? It's very abrupt and there is very little build up, anticipation, or erotica that slowly turns the heat up with each new render. It's more like an on/off switch.
3) I really appreciate the milfs in this however, all the LIs have the faces of 25 year old cosmetic models. It's just too artificial. Especially with age, there needs to be more blemishes, lines, and not so 'tight' bodies. It just breaks immersion. It's probably too late to do anything about it now, but it would be an improvement in future endeavors.
Over all this is a 3 star game. Good quality, it just misses on pacing, the anticipation of erotica, and build up for the sexual scenes. I do hope that the game improves and the dev improves their craft. Some games start off very clunky and after halfway through the dev gets a lot more experience and vastly improves all of those things during the second half of the game.