VN Ren'Py Where the Heart Is [S1 v2024-09-06 BETA] [CheekyGimp]

[acewinz]

It's the interesting thing about Lily, that the MC and her can have (secretly) declared relationship status (boyfriend and girlfriend), yet she seems to have no problem with hearing Katie declare her feelings for the MC, to hear that she and him have been having sex, and then to give in/succumb to Debbie's feelings for her (even if she still prefers the MC over Debbie). I honestly think that, if Lily were to find out the MC has been with Debbie, she wouldn't care and in fact could be quite thrilled. I think she might like the idea of being in this kind of relationship because not only does she get to be with the MC, but she also gets to do it with her best friends.

I would like to see, if/when this happens again, if there was a bit more action with Katie and Lily. They didn't do anything with each other here and I suppose, given that they both hadn't thought about doing anything with another girl before this that's quite understandable, and it seems like it was Debbie's role to "corrupt" them into enjoying it and (hopefully) wanting more, so maybe they'll get a bit more involved next time. In fact, it could be nice if there was a little something in the next episode, when the MC gets back to the beach house after visiting Wanda and the girls are awake and having breakfast, that as they talk about it, Debbie points out that Katie and Lily are the only ones who didn't kiss each other and that they should do it now, which they will.

Haha.

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[felicemastronzo]

It's the interesting thing about Lily, that the MC and her can have (secretly) declared relationship status (boyfriend and girlfriend), yet she seems to have no problem with hearing Katie declare her feelings for the MC, to hear that she and him have been having sex, and then to give in/succumb to Debbie's feelings for her (even if she still prefers the MC over Debbie). I honestly think that, if Lily were to find out the MC has been with Debbie, she wouldn't care and in fact could be quite thrilled. I think she might like the idea of being in this kind of relationship because not only does she get to be with the MC, but she also gets to do it with her best friends.

I would like to see, if/when this happens again, if there was a bit more action with Katie and Lily. They didn't do anything with each other here and I suppose, given that they both hadn't thought about doing anything with another girl before this that's quite understandable, and it seems like it was Debbie's role to "corrupt" them into enjoying it and (hopefully) wanting more, so maybe they'll get a bit more involved next time. In fact, it could be nice if there was a little something in the next episode, when the MC gets back to the beach house after visiting Wanda and the girls are awake and having breakfast, that as they talk about it, Debbie points out that Katie and Lily are the only ones who didn't kiss each other and that they should do it now, which they will.

Lily could still ignore the depth of the relationship between Katie and MC, after all Katie is not very open even with her two friends about her feelings, I think she would hardly forgive MC once she clears up with Katie.

instead as for Debbie, Lily does what MC tells her to do, if MC advises her to experiment she experiments, but does not seem to change the idea about her sexual orientation.

by the way, when Debbie says she thought about MC while kissing Lily I became a 13 year old girl on her first crush

 

[ename144]

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[acewinz]

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[cakeny]

You phrased it poorly then.

Also, you're making the assumption that plot relevant info, which so far hasn't been tied to any LI (iirc) when it comes to the MC learning about it, is tied to specific LIs.



Again, I doubt plot-relevant info, such as who "Dizzy" is, is or will be tied to romancing specific people.

Aye, plot information will likely be forced on us like it was with Jenna.

 

[cakeny]

After this episode, I don't particularly trust Bella anymore. It really felt like she was trying to turn the MC against Elaine and she was playing up the whole lovey-dovey, girlfriend thing (if you're on that path with her) a bit too much. Elaine's reasons for thinking Bella should move out are quite understandable; she feels like she's a burden to Bella and holding her back from her own life, so she thinks that Bella moving out would be good for her to get her own independent life back again. But Bella just went straight to conspiracy town and thinks this is some tactic to get rid of her as part of her wanting the inheritance.

Also, I kind of agree on your point about the relationships, because it does feel that by limiting the relationships you have in the game, it limits the content of the game, and not just in terms of sexual content, but in terms of character development, relationship development (the non-sexual aspects), and general character/plot exposition.

Did you ever trust her? She has been trying to throw Elaine under the bus since shortly after she is first introduced in game.

 

[felicemastronzo]

I would like some advice from those who carry out more routes

Is starting from the 12th chapter a good idea?

it seems to me that previously we are always around the presentations, and that from that point the story begins to take off.

or risk of missing important passages with certain characters?

for now I would like to carry on separately:
Lily
Debbie
Lily + Debbie
Katie
Monica

 

[Holy Bacchus]

Haha.

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Can't I believe I forgot about that.

So yeah, that's something, but I still stand by wanting to see a bit more of these two getting it on in another foursome or even threesome scene.

Lily could still ignore the depth of the relationship between Katie and MC, after all Katie is not very open even with her two friends about her feelings, I think she would hardly forgive MC once she clears up with Katie.

instead as for Debbie, Lily does what MC tells her to do, if MC advises her to experiment she experiments, but does not seem to change the idea about her sexual orientation.

by the way, when Debbie says she thought about MC while kissing Lily I became a 13 year old girl on her first crush

Lily can be still be straight because she prefers the MC, but doesn't mean she can't enjoy having fun with her girl friends, especially Debbie. With the MC, it's love for Lily, with Debbie and Katie, it's fun and probably not much more than that, but doesn't mean she wouldn't want to do it again, and again, and again.

Debbie's in love with Lily and probably still hopes she can get Lily to fall in love with her, but she seems happy knowing that Lily has at least accepted she has these feelings and that Lily is OK with doing these intimate things with her. Debbie also seems very happy to have the MC as well if you've gone down that route and she did a good job getting Katie's sapphic motor revving.

As for Katie, she'd probably not be best pleased to find out right now that he was having sex with Debbie and Lily before this, but perhaps this night has changed her a little bit. I honestly hope she doesn't go back to being the totally possessive Katie she was before because I think that it would be good character growth for her if she becomes comfortable seeing the MC be intimate with Debbie and Lily because it turns her on and she likes sharing him with her friends. So maybe by making her more and more comfortable as time goes on, it might make her less inclined to rip his head off if she finds out about him & Lily and him & Debbie later on.

 

[felicemastronzo]

Can't I believe I forgot about that.

So yeah, that's something, but I still stand by wanting to see a bit more of these two getting it on in another foursome or even threesome scene.



Lily can be still be straight because she prefers the MC, but doesn't mean she can't enjoy having fun with her girl friends, especially Debbie. With the MC, it's love for Lily, with Debbie and Katie, it's fun and probably not much more than that, but doesn't mean she wouldn't want to do it again, and again, and again.

Debbie's in love with Lily and probably still hopes she can get Lily to fall in love with her, but she seems happy knowing that Lily has at least accepted she has these feelings and that Lily is OK with doing these intimate things with her. Debbie also seems very happy to have the MC as well if you've gone down that route and she did a good job getting Katie's sapphic motor revving.

As for Katie, she'd probably not be best pleased to find out right now that he was having sex with Debbie and Lily before this, but perhaps this night has changed her a little bit. I honestly hope she doesn't go back to being the totally possessive Katie she was before because I think that it would be good character growth for her if she becomes comfortable seeing the MC be intimate with Debbie and Lily because it turns her on and she likes sharing him with her friends. So maybe by making her more and more comfortable as time goes on, it might make her less inclined to rip his head off if she finds out about him & Lily and him & Debbie later on.

Katie strikes me as a girl whose dominant trait is jealousy, and I don't mind that. she is ready to fight for MC, but I don't think she accepts anything less than 100% of MC's loyalty

I don't think she would like an encore .. she always gives me the idea of who keeps giving you rope waiting for you to hang yourself.

 

[Holy Bacchus]

Katie strikes me as a girl whose dominant trait is jealousy, and I don't mind that. she is ready to fight for MC, but I don't think she accepts anything less than 100% of MC's loyalty

I don't think she would like an encore .. she always gives me the idea of who keeps giving you rope waiting for you to hang yourself.

I think Katie deserves more character growth than that. To have her go through that experience and then to have her come out the other side like, "Well, that was fun, but it's never happening again and if you ever so much as compliment them, [MC], I'll cut your balls off", would just keep Katie standing in place, never moving, never changing, and I think that would be poor character development for her.

The least we could get from her after this is an acknowledgement and acceptance that she enjoyed it, a lot more than she ever thought she would, and that she's open to doing it again. She can even be fine with them kissing him from now on, but only when they're together as a group, and over time perhaps she can change further to be OK with a poly/mini-harem relationship involving all of them. Another foursome or even threesome with her and Debbie or her and Lily would go a long way towards that.

 

[voyeurkind]

There are women who identify as lesbian that are happily married/committed to men, as well as women who consider themselves hetero-normative that have relationships with other women.

Love can override sexual identity, at least in some situations.

 

[Macinnes]

Katie strikes me as a girl whose dominant trait is jealousy, and I don't mind that. she is ready to fight for MC, but I don't think she accepts anything less than 100% of MC's loyalty

I don't think she would like an encore .. she always gives me the idea of who keeps giving you rope waiting for you to hang yourself.

Actually Katie's dominant trait is abandonment which fuels her jealousy. She admits this early on to the M/C about her fear of abandonment. She told him that every man she looked up to in her life left. Her dad left, the M/C left, etc so she pushes back to keep from getting too close. This is also the source of her abrasiveness which can be fun at first but quickly gets annoying. IMO it makes her too much of a tomboy and less of a lady. That juxtaposition is also what makes her endearing as a character. The times she is vulnerable and fluttering her big brown eyes at you like a little girl melts you in that moment but then she has ruin it with her mouth. She's classier than Wanda but shares the same potty mouth defect.

 

[Macinnes]

Oh my I had forgotten about Theresa. I found it amusing that as I read her lines of dialogue I cannot help but hear her in an American Southern Drawl. She could actually have any accent but for some reason that is how I picture her. Just another example of the colorful characters in this game.

 

[bobbyzzz]

God I want to have a baby with Monica! She didn't get much attention in the last chapter so hopefully we will see more of her

 

[felicemastronzo]

Actually Katie's dominant trait is abandonment which fuels her jealousy. She admits this early on to the M/C about her fear of abandonment. She told him that every man she looked up to in her life left. Her dad left, the M/C left, etc so she pushes back to keep from getting too close. This is also the source of her abrasiveness which can be fun at first but quickly gets annoying. IMO it makes her too much of a tomboy and less of a lady. That juxtaposition is also what makes her endearing as a character. The times she is vulnerable and fluttering her big brown eyes at you like a little girl melts you in that moment but then she has ruin it with her mouth. She's classier than Wanda but shares the same potty mouth defect.

in jealousy there is always the fear of being alone

I probably explained myself badly, when I said it's her dominant trait, I meant it's the most obvious, not the most important

 

[Bachamp]

So.. ETA of episode 20 ?

 

[Dragon59]

That's quite a multiverse harem. The Harem Between the Worlds.

 

[Macinnes]

Wow exciting update! Nice cliffhanger with the attorney. I mean who shot J.R. right? The 4-way at the beach house was one of the hottest I've seen in a VN. I had to piss off Bella to do it, but it turned out worth it. I could be happy with a Katie/Lily/Debbie ending except for losing the inheritance because of Katie. I mean in RL with $15.8 mil the M/C could have his choice of arm candy/harems like Hef and maybe Katie would still speak to him after 10 years. I'm keen to see what's gonna happen with Katie given the hints dropped about her gaining weight and having weird cravings recently after a few M/C creampies. So now I have a basic total cheating game except for Jolina (I friend with benefits zoned her) I think I'll go back and fast forward through a couple saves with exclusive LI tracks. BTW Until this update I ignored Wanda, but I like where the Dev took her. The insight into her childhood appeals to the psychologist in me. I'm interested to see how she would develop beyond a Dom/Sub relationship (which I don't really care for although in Wanda's case it was amusing for a time).

 

[cakeny]

Wow exciting update! Nice cliffhanger with the attorney. I mean who shot J.R. right? The 4-way at the beach house was one of the hottest I've seen in a VN. I had to piss off Bella to do it, but it turned out worth it. I could be happy with a Katie/Lily/Debbie ending except for losing the inheritance because of Katie. I mean in RL with $15.8 mil the M/C could have his choice of arm candy/harems like Hef and maybe Katie would still speak to him after 10 years. I'm keen to see what's gonna happen with Katie given the hints dropped about her gaining weight and having weird cravings recently after a few M/C creampies. So now I have a basic total cheating game except for Jolina (I friend with benefits zoned her) I think I'll go back and fast forward through a couple saves with exclusive LI tracks. BTW Until this update I ignored Wanda, but I like where the Dev took her. The insight into her childhood appeals to the psychologist in me. I'm interested to see how she would develop beyond a Dom/Sub relationship (which I don't really care for although in Wanda's case it was amusing for a time).

Now you're making me wanna replay the update with a Katie path to see what you're talking about.

 

[Ariostebaldo]

How to succeed on Elaine guilt path? Overall, do the MC need to be angry with her or do he need to be friendly?