Which character deserves more focus?

[noping123]

I'm working on writing the next installments of my game, and I've run into a few points where I could devote some time to one of the side characters. I'll note - I already have the stories for these characters mostly written, it's just a matter of deciding where those get their shine - and which ones are sort of glossed over (I don't really wanna say glossed over, because they'll still be told either way, but I guess there won't be as much focus on some?) and which ones get some meat, so to speak.

Because I have nothing better to do (Seriously. I've been drinking, and my PC is rendering, so I don't have much else to do for a few hrs until I pass out!) I decided to see what other people thought.

Because it'd be dumb not to, here's my current game:

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and f95 (dirty pirates).

For the characters in question, I just did a few 30 second renders, and gave them an expression/pose that tries to match their personality. I won't do any write-up or explanation of them. While I'd say that normally matters, these are side characters that - so far - haven't had too much screen-time in-game.

Spoiler: Anna

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Spoiler: Felicity

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Spoiler: Grace

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Spoiler: Jenn

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Spoiler: Paisley

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Oh. One last note - all of them are single - EXCEPT Paisley. She's not. Feel free to vote, tell me to fuck off (please don't!), or just join me in another drink!

 

[Nadekai]

Why did I think this was HH post.

 

[noping123]

Why did I think this was HH post.

I have no idea!

 

[soprano31]

First to say,that it is a very good game,
with good renders,and some really beautiful girls !!

Which brings me to the main question of the day,
who deserves the spotlight,
and who remains in the dark.

1.If i met Anna like this,
with her distant face and appearance,
i wouldn't go for it,
maybe she can gradually come out of her shell,
and good for a real relationship,
but as i say,much too strict and distant...

2.Grace looks too depressed and pale,
good for a boring life together with slobber sweaters and pants,
and lazy on the couch together...

3.But if i were to meet Paisley,
at first she acts a bit distant,
but then she looks so friendly and cute,
i would immediately go for her(even though she has a boyfriend,
you can see that she looks at you with a secret smile,
that she immediately wants to cheat on him !!)
NTR does not come into the game,
not even from the player's side ?

4.Felicia looks too bossy and dominant...

5.But oh baby,
if i have to choose a free girl,
give me immediately the cutest exuberant looking ebony girl,
her eyes radiate fiery passion,
she has the most beautiful ,round,
juiciest divine breasts.
and the way she looks at you,winks,
you immediately know that you can experience the wildest exhausting nights and experiences with her,
oh yes,give me the tastiest,most delicious black chocolate Jenn

p.s:I don't know how much your PC still has to render,
but cheers in the meantime,
alcohol is always included !!

 

[noping123]

Wow. How much did I drink? I don't really remember writing this....

Seems people like Jenn more than the rest. I will note, she is most definitely Latina.