Ren'Py Whispers of Desire [v0.30] [Mr_Fable]

[Eleanorduval]

I think Neil is an excellent villain. He’s not the cruel type who wants to destroy a marriage or anything like that.

Totally disagree on 1st part,u forgot that him and dr Eva are brainwashing the couple.U forgot they pushing the couple to be in open relationship.Do you know that open relationship is risky and can even lead to divorce? So don’t tell me it’s will not ruin their marriage.

the 2nd part I totally about Neil I the kind of man using his power.I wouldn’t call him cute,Erik and James look better.He only have influence.

 

[Grumpybum]

Contrary to you I respect this thread and don't bring up other games and accuse them of things people here can't judge and can't discuss here. Check your language accusing other people of being rapists because they have a different reading of a situation. Completely nuts and overblown.

Guy asked for the name of a game, I gave it without making accusations simple and unoffensive...

Also never accused anyone of being a rapist.

 

[Estius]

I think Neil is an excellent villain. He’s not the cruel type who wants to destroy a marriage or anything like that — he’s just the kind of guy who goes after what he wants, even if his object of desire already belongs to someone else. And aesthetically he’s also cool, he’s not some old man or overweight. He’s the stereotype of the typical handsome and rich guy who gets whatever he wants. For me, since I prefer more realistic stories, it feels very plausible to have someone like him getting everything he wants, because real life is full of Neils out there

I won't deny he's a well written character. Although, to say he a stereotypical rich guy is a huge reach. He's close to being a total psychopath. Narcissistic, manipulative, blackmailer trying to push the couple apart. I'd love to see a character like him in a game centered around a mafia story. I guess I'm just comparing this VN to all the latest AI NTS stories that have come out in the past year or so, where the couple explores and pushes each other's boundaries being the main thrill and focus of the story. His whole storyline takes the focus off of that and emphasises a threat to their marriage pretty much throughout the whole story so far. Then again, it's very early in the VN so, I'm definitely not writing it off as bad or anything because all the characters so far have been written very well.

 

[Eleanorduval]

I won't deny he's a well written character. Although, to say he a sterotypical rich guy is a huge reach. He's close to being a total psychopath. Narcissistic, manipulative, blackmailer trying to push the couple apart. I'd love to see a character like him in a game centered around a mafia story. I guess I'm just comparing this VN to all the latest AI NTS stories that have come out in the past year or so, where the couple explores and pushes each other's boundaries being the main thrill and focus of the story. His whole storyline takes the focus off of that and emphasises a threat to their marriage pretty much throughout the whole story so far. Then again, it's very early in the VN so, I'm definitely not writing it off as bad or anything because all the characters so far have been written very well.

I agree u seem u are reading my mind lol being boss doesn’t mean he is rich.

 

[Pr0GamerJohnny]

I think Neil is well-written, but I think his model needs to look like more of a ladykiller and less like a goober

tbh I think it's mostly the hair.

 

[Eleanorduval]

I think Neil is well-written, but I think his model needs to look more dangerous and less like a goober

The other guy said Neil look handsome…I think he mistaken between Alex and Neil

 

[Pr0GamerJohnny]

The other guy said Neil look handsome…I think he mistaken between Alex and Neil

It's no joke, Alex is probably the best looking male in the game ignoring all else and just going by face/hair.

 

[Eleanorduval]

It's no joke, Alex is probably the best looking male in the game ignoring all else and just going by face/hair.

How care about male when u have a bunch of hot mermaids.I don’t Joshy can resist to their song.Abigail,Emma…even Amy look good.

 

[Pr0GamerJohnny]

who the heck is amy?

 

[mymy1228]

who the heck is amy?

the assisant at the photo shoot

 

[Eleanorduval]

who the heck is amy?

the assistant of Vincent the photographer lol the one who showed Sarah the dress,that she will wear for the photoshoot.

 

[dylan93]

how do i get sarah to cheat, in the last scene theres an option not to show alex the last photos but its null, how do i select it

 

[Mr Fable]

how do i get sarah to cheat, in the last scene theres an option not to show alex the last photos but its null, how do i select it

The last option is to not send them to Neil. Not Alex. That option is inactive because you have a high Neil relationship points. To not send them to Alex, Sarah has to go alone and during the 4th outfit texting you select Alex doesn't need to knoq. For this your Alex-Sarah relationship score has to be less than 47 i think

 

[dylan93]

The last option is to not send them to Neil. Not Alex. That option is inactive because you have a high Neil relationship points. To not send them to Alex, Sarah has to go alone and during the 4th outfit texting you select Alex doesn't need to knoq. For this your Alex-Sarah relationship score has to be less than 47 i think

Good stuff, I'm trying to get Sarah to cheat on Alex

 

[Xill]

I think something that would be nice and that would feel natural is if during the evening when they can have dinner, if they have enough "sharing" points and a good relationship, they can talk about each bull - or a girl that Alex fucks in his case - about which one they like, what they like about them, their opinions on which person is good for their partner and so on. Basically which guy Alex likes Sarah to have sex with and which girl Sarah likes for Alex to fuck, and why.

Like for example:
Alex could say that it's so hot when Eric ravishes Sara with his big black cock.
Or that it's pretty hot that Sarah gets pounded by Neil and they both get benefits in the company. (assuming the latter part happens)

And Sarah could say she finds it hot when Alex is fucking their neighbour Jessica while her husband is watching them.

And so on...

This could also be a way of raising points during the sandbox part since I remember the dev saying he would add ways to do that.

 

[Joshy92]

I think something that would be nice and that would feel natural is if during the evening when they can have dinner, if they have enough "sharing" points and a good relationship, they can talk about each bull - or a girl that Alex fucks in his case - about which one they like, what they like about them, their opinions on which person is good for their partner and so on. Basically which guy Alex likes Sarah to have sex with and which girl Sarah likes for Alex to fuck, and why.

Like for example:
Alex could say that it's so hot when Eric ravishes Sara with his big black cock.
Or that it's pretty hot that Sarah gets pounded by Neil and they both get benefits in the company. (assuming the latter part happens)

And Sarah could say she finds it hot when Alex is fucking their neighbour Jessica while her husband is watching them.

And so on...

This could also be a way of raising points during the sandbox part since I remember the dev saying he would add ways to do that.

I agree completely. Sharing is so much hotter when it's talked about before or after it happens.

 

[fbass]

I think something that would be nice and that would feel natural is if during the evening when they can have dinner, if they have enough "sharing" points and a good relationship, they can talk about each bull - or a girl that Alex fucks in his case - about which one they like, what they like about them, their opinions on which person is good for their partner and so on. Basically which guy Alex likes Sarah to have sex with and which girl Sarah likes for Alex to fuck, and why.

Like for example:
Alex could say that it's so hot when Eric ravishes Sara with his big black cock.
Or that it's pretty hot that Sarah gets pounded by Neil and they both get benefits in the company. (assuming the latter part happens)

And Sarah could say she finds it hot when Alex is fucking their neighbour Jessica while her husband is watching them.

And so on...

This could also be a way of raising points during the sandbox part since I remember the dev saying he would add ways to do that.

I agree completely. Sharing is so much hotter when it's talked about before or after it happens.

I can't stand it when they don't. It ruins the game for me when they treat it as if nothing happened.

 

[Xill]

I can't stand it when they don't. It ruins the game for me when they treat it as if nothing happened.

Yeah, hate it when that happens. I get that its there for the tension too when it would much better if they talked about it.

BTW I saw a reply before but now it's deleted. The idea is that this would happen during the free roam, so if you're on a "cuck" path, you simply wouldn't get said options I mentioned.

 

[Joshy92]

I can't wait for Sarah to cuck me. We are going to go shopping and pick an outfit for the big event.

And of course I'll hold her hand and worship my Queen as another guy creampies her

I'm going to make it such a beautiful and romantic evening where our bond gets even stronger.

 

[SomeOldFart]

I can't wait for Sarah to cuck me. We are going to go shopping and pick an outfit for the big event.

And of course I'll hold her hand and worship my Queen as another guy creampies her

I'm going to make it such a beautiful and romantic evening where our bond gets even stronger.