For a trial, this game shows good promise. The writing isn't quite that and is marred by a few english mistakes in general, as well as the flow and structure of some sentences not being quite as fluid as they could be, but as usual we can chalk this up to both a fledgling writer as well as it not being his primary language, which I'm fairly sure are both true.
This is not a huge detriment however as the game doesn't really take itself fully seriously and the corruption/blackmail happens really fast; sometimes, a bit too fast for my liking (red hair chick), but for the wife, it seems fair and acceptable within the realm of H stories stupidity.
The drawings are fine IMO and good/average 2D art is always a boon in my opinion as it's more refreshing than the sludge of Koikatu/Honey Select you see and makes the game stand out more.
I removed one star mostly due to the battle system in this RPGM - Since storywise everyone is supposed to be so strong, and they are, the battles are more of a formality. Despite this, mobs still take two hits to kill, which makes some battles and particularly the entire pillar section of this trial version quite annoying.
Lastly, something that I must praise the game quite highly for, is that in the memory room there is a layout for each act of the game. This means that the story in general seems to be fairly structured for the developer which is a great help and makes me believe that this game won't get abandoned/dropped/remade/scratched, and helps a lot on making you feel like it's worth playing it through even if it's just a trial.
Good shit, Darthz.