VN - Ren'Py - Why Am I Here [Ep.1 Ch.2] [Zobbiored]

A few original ideas in the plot, but altogether too disjointed. The 'Engrish' seems to have been put through a second-rate automatic translator that didn't involve basic corrections of spelling or grammar.
Graphics are okay.
(Observation here: an engaging plot and good writing can largely compensate for inferior graphics, but exquisite graphics [which these aren't] cannot save an inferior plot and poor scripting.)
There is hope for the future, but I'm rating on the present. If this mess is still kicking in another year I may revisit it. Until then, it'll stay deleted.

Very good story . Why am I here . A game is about a guy who don't know why is he here . He faces lots of problems while discovering why is he here . He is living with her best friend who lost his parents . One day he find mysterious cat who is injured . He will take a cat his home . Then started taking care of him . But cat becomes girl . He will shocked . How a cat become girl .Then a mysterious girl told her story to him .
He decided that he will take care of him . But one day some mysterious person breaks his house and try to take a mysterious girl . A game comes with magic, mystery, superpower,action . All i say game story is very nice