I'm confused. This is not exactly what was announced for the second chapter or is it? If so, it seems far too rushed. I don't want to spoil here but last time we didn't even have penetration, and now... And the choices are without consequences.
I mean: you give us three very important choices how we react to her cheating, and it has exactly NO influence on the story, we get the same content. The time feels off, is it days, is it months? Judging by the escalation it has to be months, by this speed there is little left, next update gangbang, that's it. Also it's not clear why the elaborate setup with the computers or the colleague bringing USB sticks or the communication with David if this is not used to get more infos, more pics, more videos more live stream of her actions at the office. All we get are a few pics and he has access to her phone anyway. And we get nothing about her perspective.
Don't get me wrong - there is great potential with the visuals and she is gorgeous, but at the moment it doesn't feel like a story in any way, but just glimpses and a series of rather unconnected pin ups, which are hotter than the story itself.
