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Adhdclassic

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I love this line" Can the husband overcome his jealousy for the sake of love." Then I see this, Sorry whatever negative emotion he has it is valid no need to get over it. :LOL: Also she's not wearing wedding ring. Love to see how you turn this to NTS.
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Skykid

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>My name is X i am 32
>...
>we've been happily married for 15 years.

Bruh. someone should go back to math class.
Mc was 17, i knew and know 17 years old people that did dumb stuff at that age.
And maybe they got a vegas weeding?
 

redoubt27

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I love this line" Can the husband overcome his jealousy for the sake of love." Then I see this, Sorry whatever negative emotion he has it is valid no need to get over it. :LOL: Also she's not wearing wedding ring. Love to see how you turn this to NTS.
Right? I couldn't stop laughing...:ROFLMAO:
Jealousy? It's called righteous anger, and it's very valid.
Love? What love? She has none...

The only NTS to be salvaged from this is if the reader chooses to be a willing cuck, which is fine if that's someone's thing, just not my kind of NT(R)S, not with this kind of "wife"...
She had several opportunities to "come clean", but she didn't.
It's over. She's for the streets now...:ROFLMAO:
 
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ffive

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I suggest changing the color of the character names. For example, the gray color of the wife's name doesn't fit at all. Maybe match the hair color or at least the gender... for example, male names are blue and shades like cyan, ultramarin, baby blue, navy blue..., and female names are pink and shades of pink...
I generally agree, but matching the hair color...

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Well, there may be some wee bit problems with that. :whistle::coffee:
 
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Adhdclassic

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Dev got a question about the Gape pic. Was that pic taken when he asked or before. Tears throwing me off don't know if those are tears cause my husband is definitely going to know I got plowed or tears of I just got plowed.
 

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Dev got a question about the Gape pic. Was that pic taken when he asked or before. Tears throwing me off don't know if those are tears cause my husband is definitely going to know I got plowed or tears of I just got plowed.
After, and she dont realy care as long than she have the black dick anyway.

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Funny how the overview talk about jealousy when she's just a cheating whore with no love for her husband from the start, and never understood why these kind of game bother with the "romance" tag, it's just another story with a cuck husband married to a whore without much imagination .
 
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After, and she dont realy care as long than she have the black dick anyway.

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Funny how the overview talk about jealousy when she's just a cheating whore with no love for her husband from the start, and never understood why these kind of game bother with the "romance" tag, it's just another story with a cuck husband married to a whore without much imagination .
found this scene interesting she is talking to the guy but the dialog I have says the husband has her phone. So how is she texting. So when she left the house haha in a fucking sheet she went to dudes house.
 

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Right? I couldn't stop laughing...:ROFLMAO:
Jealousy? It's called righteous anger, and it's very valid.
Love? What love? She has none...

The only NTS to be salvaged from this is if the reader chooses to be a willing cuck, which is fine if that's someone's thing, just not my kind of NT(R)S, not with this kind of "wife"...
She had several opportunities to "come clean", but she didn't.
It's over. She's for the streets now...:ROFLMAO:
Yes, there's no way to make a believable NTS path because the so-called "wife" already broke the three fundamental bases of relationship (trust, communication, and intimacy) in Chapter 2, unless the conception of NTS for the Dev is a useless simp husband that accepted to be an obedient cuck like a good puppy. Divorce and moving on is the good ending in this game.
 
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LUISIL

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Well...I like it anyways,but...
I don't know about this new way of telling the story, is...excessively poetic? I dont' know how to say it.
I also think there is too few renders (Beautiful nontheless) and too much black screens. Someone said "Fuckfest" Not Yet to me.
Keep with your idea cause you've Improved and I wanna draw conclusions when it is finished.Hope the 3rd Chapter won't take so long.
So: I like it anyways, fapping I mean...clapping here;)

PS: what I like: Her POV. I just wanna the husband suffers don't care how much. I want her POV...Please
 
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