Ren'Py - Completed - Wild Adventures [v100] [itswhatits]

Not the worst game I've played. It's got like 10 minutes of playtime, the sex scenes are enough and the models look great. Sucks that it needs another version to actually complete the story. The plot also seems weird for this type of game, and the dev really needs to work on his grammar and proof-reading.

I haven't reviewed any games in a while, I accidentally came across this game and this intrigued me. After playing the game I realised a few key positive sides to the game. Which are..

• Main NPC being a character of players choice
• Being compact and decent
• Having a simple premise
• Clearly having a simple development process
• Less grinding
• MC being a young guy (personal preference.. haha)

Although that's pretty much everything players expect from a game I also saw a few turnoffs. Which are..

• The achievements being too easy
  • There should be (at least) a bit of conflict between characters, whether it's an internal moral conflict (like the main NPC wanting to do it with MC but not going for it because that's bad/wrong.. this would feel like traditional trope but it is used so much because it works) or a conflict caused by a third party (refer to the game True Bond , they handle the idea fairly well with the adult male in that game).
• Progression is too fast
  • Although I appreciate there being a lesser grind, I think the player being able to get a hand job right after the main NPC arrives at their place takes the player away from immersion.
  • There should be a little teasing (since the dev already got great character models, it is better to show them off as a bit of foreshadowing with full/half clothes on ) at least for a few days , within the games time.
• The events (although it is hard to do so) should be made realistically.
  • When the main NPC goes on to jerk off the MC she should have and show the player a reason for that.
  • This also circles back to the fast progression thing I mentioned earlier.

Either way, I understand this game was made for fun and purely for the players here to get their loads off , but I think the improvements I mentioned can be easily implemented. But since this is completed now I hope the dev goes on to add the said advancements in their future projects. Hope to see the dev's other work soon. And I would love to help this dev with the story in any way possible if they are interested. This was a fun game.