VN - Ren'Py - Wild Cats [v0.2 Public] [LopaPhi]

This game is just awesome, I got really hooked on it and the story is great, even though the MC can be a bit EMO sometimes, it's kinda understandable in a way, by what he went through. The game has a very good theme, who doesn't like volleyball girls? Speaking of them, the girls looks are stunning, the relationship build-up is well-paced and everything seems to fit perfectly. It is exactly what I've been looking for in a game and I strongly believe that this is a 5 stars game, so by my standards, it's a most than well deserved rating.

And of course, Volleyball girls.

Against the background of a trivial story about the relationship between a teacher and female students (athletes), an interesting story about the relationship between a woman and a man is revealed. The different levels of relationships create an exciting game that you want to watch develop. A good game.

While I do think this story has potential, the dialogue is its biggest weakness... it’s just so awkward and unconvincing.

The MC himself isn’t the main issue. In fact the author makes it clear that he’s actively trying to change, and his backstory provides enough context to make his behavior feel somewhat believable.

The real problem lies with the LI's. Their behavior often comes across as entitled and irrational, yet the narrative insists that the protagonist is the one in the wrong. The author seems determined to frame our protagonist as the sole deviant, but the interactions don’t support that. Instead, it just feels frustrating because some of the girls are just as much in the wrong as the MC, making the dynamic feel forced rather than organic.

This weakens not only the character interactions but the writing as a whole. And this isn't a one time thing - it's something that I felt numerous times throughout the exchanges between the protagonist and multiple LI's. Instead of feeling like natural, realistic communication, the dialogue ends up feeling frustrating.

I genuinely hope the author improves because there’s potential here, but as it stands, the execution falls flat.

10/10

One of the best story telling Adult Visual Game in which you will surely be captivated by not just the story as a whole but also be intrigued by its individual characters. Where as the story goes on, you cant wait to find more and delve deep to each individual characters in the game.

Aside from having a very good story, it also have likable and well design characters in which rightfully fits each personality of the individuals they represent/Portray.

And so far, the scenes are likable and it does not feel forced at all which gives the game a much more smoother and better story telling progress.

All in all, if your looking for games with fascinating characters and interesting story. This is definitely a Game you MUST TRY.

It's an interesting game with a captivating premise and beautiful renders. Sadly, it's only version 0.2, so there isn't much content yet. However, you can play it without hesitation—it's quite good!!!

Good character writing? An interesting plot? Well integrated NSFW scenes that are written as more than just porn? Volleyball girls? An actually interesting MC with a personality not in the shape of a sentient penis? A good variety of love interests without going overboard to where half the cast doesn't get any development because there's just too much work?
Be still my beating heart.

Recommended.

A game that is off to an extremely good start. I love the characters and story. I do see some issues with the proof reading but all something that can be fixed.

Beautiful renders and an intriguing story, a 10/10 for me at the moment.

Review as of version 0.2:
Writing 4/5:
The writing in the game is good. It’s not going to blow you away or anything, but the bar for VN writing is low and this is one of the better written games on this site. There are a few typos and capitalization errors here and there, but nothing major or immersion-breaking.
Art 4/5:
Renders look solid, girls are cute, animations are decently smooth. Overall, some of the best I’ve seen come out of Honey Select. Some things can look a little janky and times, and the girls’ fingers are all weird and wrinkly for some reason, but overall, the game looks good.
Story 2/5:
This is the major issue I have with the game. Most of the time, the story is actually enjoyable and intriguing. But there are some parts that just really piss me off to play – and they are not the parts that the dev intended to be upsetting.
The MC can be a massive simp sometimes. It’s only in a few scenes and its totally bearable. The bigger problem I have with the game, is that it feels like the game is telling you that being a simp is the correct course of action – like its morally wrong to be mean to a girl that is being mean to you.
So, the game starts out by warning you that the MC is a no-good-very-bad-man in the beginning, but that he progresses into a better person over time. But what actually happens is he’ll make a snarky comment sometimes, usually to someone that is actively being an asshole to him, but then immediately backpedal and apologize for it. And the game acts like this is him being terrible. This can be mildly annoying sometimes, and absolutely infuriating other times (Zoe and Fiona’s storyline).
There is exactly one time in the game when the MC is actually a terrible person (start of Eve’s story), and it kind of just comes out of nowhere and feels wildly out of character considering he doesn’t act like that before or after. The idea of the MC being a shitty person who slowly gets better over time is totally fine…but that isn’t what happens. During the first in-game-day, he’s a bit snarky a few times and very shitty exactly once. By day two, he’s being nice to all the girls. At that point, why try to include this redemption arc when it just feels forced and barely-existent?
Girls 3/5:
Some of girls are actually very solid, but some of them just kind of suck.
Eve – good. Her storyline feels kind of weird just because, as mentioned earlier, the MC blew up at her and started screaming at her and almost hit her for…teasing him a bit?? And then suddenly treats her entirely differently the next day? It’s whatever though, I enjoyed playing through her scenes after the beginning.
Zoe – fine. I don’t actually dislike Zoe as a character. I think she’s totally fine. What I do dislike with a passion, is every scene Zoe has been in so far. Their first meeting involves the Zoe being a bit of an ass to the MC, while making snap-judgements about him and the other girls of the team, without really knowing what she’s talking about. The MC responds by being a bit of an ass to her, and making snap-judgments about her without really knowing what he’s talking about. The game acts like he did a terrible thing, and he spends the next several scenes groveling for her forgiveness. More than anything, this is what made me want to drop the game.
Fiona – terrible. I will make every story decision possible to fuck this girl over in any way I possibly can. Why would you have a girl physically assault the MC and expect people to want anything to do with her later on? Why would the MC, who was ready to hit Eve for teasing him like two scenes ago, just sit there and take it instead of hitting her back? Why is the MC ready to make amends with her as if nothing happened??
Lexi – bad. This is more of a personal thing, but I have no interest in the school slut trope. I guess some people out there will be into that. At least you can reject girls, so you’re not forced to romance her. I actually think she’s totally fine as a character. Just not crazy about her as a love interest.
Desiree – good. Haven’t seen much of her, but what I have seen is very sweet. Can’t wait for her to be more fleshed out as a character.
Saki – good. She’s by far the most three-dimensional feeling character at the moment. Her most recent scenes were actually pretty touching.
Overall, the game is okay. It would be good if I wasn’t fighting the urge to quit playing for 1/3 of the scenes.

Writing this while finishing chapter 2

Technical part is nice: UI, renders, music choice are good.

Main problem is the text - it's obvious that guy don't have a lot of experience in writing believable character, at least right now, I see only archetypes. Also, there are enough moments where characters start inappropriately and early on pouring out their souls when they don't even really know each other: Saki, Fiona as examples.

Well, and enough people have already written before me about the impossible protagonist at the beginning. That's not even the problem. I don't see anything wrong with such a move. It is clear that the author wants to indicate in this way the initial state of the hero and that we then in the course of the story see his changes, that's how any work with character development works. It's just that it's all spelled out in a very clumsy and obvious way: he starts to humiliate himself in front of the principal at the beginning of the game, as if he wants to hear compliments in return, then after a couple of game days he'll just whine a bit, and then he'll quickly correct himself and become a normal and aware guy.

And here I want to give credit to the author. Perhaps in comparison with other VNs from this site, where characters usually do anything only to get laid, I'm comparing this novel to something less degenerate, although there are enough clichés like standard archetypes, broken protagonist, who is not understood by the world and fights against unfair circumstances, you know.

Not without some BUTs, but I'm enjoying the story, looking forward to the updates

Glad I found this gem in the making, still in the early stages but the quality is topnotch.

Pros:
Dialogue is believable and smooth
Characters are unique and fleshed out (growth can be observed throughout the story)
Characters models are gorgeous and each have their unique striking features/characteristic
Plot is interesting and there's hook after hook, keeps me engaged to say the least

Cons:
Gotta wait for the next update

4.5*

Some spelling mistakes in the latest chapter, but is otherwise pretty polished. Well written overall, characters have unique voices. There aren't really any choices so far, as picking the "wrong" choice will end the game.


Lot of content for a game that is 6 months old. Will keep an eye on this one

Blew my expectations away. Nice writing, nice setting, nice characters and really good renders. Impressed, would play again (and will, honestly).
First game ive felt compelled to give 5 stars on here.

[Reviewed v.0.2 Public]

Strong start to a sports-themed game. The production value is high with beautiful girls, renders and animations using the Honey Select 2 engine. The story has a lot of familiar themes but introduces some fresh twists and dynamics.

Premise: MC, a famous but disgraced former college volleyball star, transfers to a new university looking for a fresh start after an unexpected scholarship offer from the dean -- on the condition of coaching the disastrous women's volleyball team.

The Good ()

• Gorgeous Honey Select 2 models
• A diversity of emerging love interests with different personalities, ages and body types
• Well-crafted cinematography and visual storytelling
• Mostly-believable relationship building between MC and LIs
• The sports content is (mostly) well-executed
• The MC is (mostly) easy to root for, though some decision-making and elements of the character's background is frustrating

The Not-So-Good ()

• Not a ton of H-scenes yet
• Game encourages MC to pursue multiple LIs but given the team dynamic, this may result in a very messy outcome for MC
• Your mileage may vary with the volleyball content

Overall, this is a well-paced, believable story in the early stages. Worth checking out and I will be following its development.

renders looks good. story and characters are interesting. each one is uniquely developed, with their own motivations, flaws, and arcs. the dialogue feels natural, avoiding the typical corny pitfalls, and instead delivering interactions that are sharp, engaging, and authentic. the mc is a breath of fresh air in the genre. far from relying on luck or plot armor, is smart, resourceful, and charming. makes me wanna follow mc's journey until the end.

So, i am a volleyball player and a sucker for college drama stories, so i picked up this game to play as soon as i saw it, and let me tell you, it surpassed my expectations.

The story is really well written, i was kinda pissed with the MC, but his growth made me enjoy it even more, as a "coming of age" story, and made him realistic in a way. Also, none of the characters is perfect, everyone is struggling with something, so they are really "saving" each other. I was really invested and loved every second of it.

The sex is not shoved down our throats every time, it's more like a relationship building thing, which makes the times it happens more enjoyable and believable.

I'm really looking forward to next updates, keep up the good work.

Well, kind of an honor to be the 69th review of this game I guess

As of Chapter 2

Normally I have a ground rule of not playing an AVN unless it has at least one vaginal sex scene, so I've not made up my mind to play Wild Cats even though I have put it on my wishlist for quite some time. When I finally decided to try it out today, however, this game just completely exceeded my expectations.

One thing I absolutely ADORE this game is how the story flows so smoothly, which really comes down to the skillfully written dialogue and an engaging main story. You can really tell the dev has a clear idea of what he sets out to tell a story when you're 10 minutes into the game, and the experience just gets better and better. Good sex scenes aren't common but they're still easier to find, but a well-structured and interesting story? So far not that many from my encounter. So this alone already deserves 5 stars for me.

Another thing, which is closely related to the aforementioned point I've made, is the characters. They feel ALIVE, simply. Often times I feel like I'm actually dealing with actual persons instead of stale Honey Select renders, because they are so lively and unique. Every LI has her own unique trait, characteristics, and even quirks that make each one of them lovable in her own way. Even one of the LIs who looks like a succubus incarnate and a party animal, a trait that I'm usually not a fan of, is depicted as passionate, genuine, and funny as hell, who gradually becomes one of my Top 3 LIs. Also, there's MC. I understand some people's impatience or displeasure with him especially at the start since his character isn't really the most attractive you usually find in AVN MCs. However, I have a soft spot for him because his history hits a bit too close to home as I had been in a similar mindset for the past two years because of a major setback (thankfully I'm in a much better place now with a lot of people's support). Therefore, seeing his journey from self-deprecation to self-respect and respect toward others really makes me feel so empathetic toward this character, which in a way does help me get more immersed in the story.

Right now there are only two chapters, so whether this game will become the next big thing or fumble tragically still remains to be seen, yet if the dev manages to maintain the same vitality in future updates, I'm quite sure this game will go down as one of the best AVNs ever made, as one of my favorite directors the late David Lynch said, "I'm seeing the future, and it's looking very bright!"

As of Chapter 2.

Pretty good game, only two updates so far, but very long with a nice build up of the characters. Probably it should step up the pace in the next one or two updates because I could see not doing it would not be good for some people (not my case).

I like all the characters with pretty defined personalities so there can be a favorite for everyone.

Good luck to the developer for the future.

I really enjoyed this game. The protagonist feels like an actual character for once, with real problems that aren't just window dressing to make him seem edgy or badass. Similarly, the girls are all endearing and sweet without being same-y or devoid of depth.

5/5 game
Recommended to all, especially those who wants good story, and those who want high quality graphics, honestly the sex scene is great too.

This game checks out a lot of boxes.

Pros: This game is beautifully written, and the hook and the stakes. This game is a package and was a blast to play.

Cons: The start might be tough and hard to swallow.
Pass that and you're playing one of the best game around in the making.

Great game with a interesting story and characters.
I like how each character have diferent personality and how the mc its just not a perverted but someone who trying to do right choices.
Once you start playing, you get so immersed that you dont want to reach the end of chapter.