[v 0.1.9.6]
I just wanted to point some things out but then i thought it's a review so here it goes.
For people that want a quick opinion: game is buggy, pace is really slow, much grind, it could be good once it's a bit more refined but as of now it really feel like betatesting.
So since it's a review in the end, i got to rate it. I really don't think it's in a state worthy of any rating as of now since it feel so early stage. So i'll be rating a star more than deserved in that regard.
Engine: 1/5 smtg happen when you launch the app, what's left is very unstable.
gameplay: 2/5 it's nice of the dev to try, it's not nice for us to try them. The VN aspect is solid though.
Renders: 5/5 top notch
Story: 3/5 the benefice of the doubt
Overall: 3/5 As of now, not really worth givin a try, i probably would like the game if it was not for the grind and the bugs.
Well well well, i'm about 3hours in and honestly it's been quite the hussle to get through.
Seems like the game is incompatible with HDR, uppon start, fullscreen deactivate it. Might be a issue on my end with my specific hardware but still.
I couldn't get to the end of the prologue, since i couldn't go to work during the morning, the event didn't pop outside of the house(the morning where Ava catch the MC before work). Had to start from chapter one.
What exactly is going on with all the stats and the hardmode? I honestly couldn't figure that out within the game. I had to make a thorough search on here to find some answer, still wondering what the hardmode does exactly...
I've overwrite my save by mistake after a random crash during a travel on the map, trying to get back to the game asap. Well, nice UI/UX, it's lvl 0 of design.
Constant bugs uppon saving during a scene. You'd like to explore some option of dialogue? Well u better have saved just before the scene started, otherwise you're gonna have every choice made at once for you on reload.
Now to the gameplay part like does the dev actualy play his own game?
Unskipable transition?
Actual time within the game so you're always on the clock? You have to constantly watch for the time, and when you know you don't have anything to do for the remaining hour, you just gotta stay put until the hour resolve...yeah you can skip it you'll say? Well it's bothersome. A game shouldn't be a bother. Just make the timeskip button so that it get you to the start of the next hour. Or just get rid of it all! i absolutely haven't seen any good use of this feature yet.
What about the grinding... it's a novel. Am here for the story. I don't wanna max out stats going over and over again the same scene. Fackin give us the story dude. It makes you look like you're hidding what am guessing is an absence of content behind it. And if there is something, a clue would be nice. Something to tell the player there's something to see in the end. I can get my agility up, i don't know what it's for.
Oh also... what's up with quick traveling in this game? When does the dev thought "EUREKA you can't go outside if you're not on the doorstep, you can't directly access a room if you're not on the right floor!" god please no. NOOOOOO.
Well, it's not all bad though, i enjoyed some of the scene, the renders are nice, the few animation i've seen are well made.Ava is really cute. Characters are a bit bland though, a lot of time is spent to make MC/wife relation credible, it does not really work. Nothing bad, but nothing standing out either. Some of the setup are quite... idk, not convincing? No build up at all for the ex wife despite her being the counterpoint of the wife and the symbol of the dark path. We should have at least as much build up for her relation than for the wife. As of now she's just unsufferable, i don't see any logical reason for the mc to do anything that she says. But well, i've only spent 3 hours on the game.
In conclusion, many things to improve, the first one would be the technicalities: you can't afford to crash often, not provide a working saving system, meanwhile having such a slow pace and this much grind. Like i wouldn't mind overwriting my save if it was not already so hard to simply get through the game with ctrl skip.
My best to the dev, good luck
