VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - Witch Spell [v3.0] [Wyteman]

  1. 1.00 star(s)

    zephrates

    I gave this a quick look this morning. Honestly, there's not much to say, the writing is so disjointed it's incredible. There's no flow, the 'story' just jumps from scene to scene. Some of the writing problems could probably be due to translation, but not all.
    The MC's model was apparently changed between versions, but the old model still appears in some renders.
    Some of the renders aren't bad, that's probably the only saving grace.
    In short, the basic premise seems like it has some potential, but it needs a major rework to reach that potential.
  2. 1.00 star(s)

    Buddawg

    Lower end game.
    Writing errors galore. Sentence structure failures. Missing capital letters.
    3x1m stories so far.

    This is probably the laziest attempt at a game Ive encountered in years.
    There is absolutely no pride in the work what so ever.

    The story is about 4 sentences, then two sentences for sex.. thats it.
    And every sentence has an error in it.

    Picture quality is low to low-mid tier.
    Animation is low end.

    This reeks of a weekend hackjob for cashgrab.