I gave this a quick look this morning. Honestly, there's not much to say, the writing is so disjointed it's incredible. There's no flow, the 'story' just jumps from scene to scene. Some of the writing problems could probably be due to translation, but not all.
The MC's model was apparently changed between versions, but the old model still appears in some renders.
Some of the renders aren't bad, that's probably the only saving grace.
In short, the basic premise seems like it has some potential, but it needs a major rework to reach that potential.
The MC's model was apparently changed between versions, but the old model still appears in some renders.
Some of the renders aren't bad, that's probably the only saving grace.
In short, the basic premise seems like it has some potential, but it needs a major rework to reach that potential.