Jhonthedon420
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Played through a little short to make a good review but liking what I see so far.
Here is to hoping the project continues on this path.
Good Luck VenomSuperSayan!!! Hope you get your dev tag soon!!!
Loving the concept and characters. Congrats on a successful prologue! If you'd like, I'd be happy to proofread the game for you. The dialogue is pretty good for an ESL speaker. Wouldn't take much for me to clean up the spelling, grammar, and give it a more native/natural feel. Feel free to message me if you're interested!
Thanks for your hard work, and best of luck going forward!
Thanks for your hard work, and best of luck going forward!
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Thanks for your kind words, your interest in my work, and your will to fix some grammar mistakes. About writing stuff, I think I was better after feedback from a beloved user, "Less is more".
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Ah, it's a porn game, I'm sure they will be fine.
So, I guess it's safe to summon Avaron1974 here, because D is totally will be avoidable in the future, right?
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Looks Good. But honestly, I would prefer if there would be no Male action in it at all nor MFF Threesomes for this Game. So you could stick the Money you make for this Project on more Lesbian Scenes.
Also make Hollys Husband a Cheater during their second Honeymoon. Holly needs to catch him and then divorce him so she can turn to her sister and daughter completely.
Avaron1974 this could be for you I think.
Also make Hollys Husband a Cheater during their second Honeymoon. Holly needs to catch him and then divorce him so she can turn to her sister and daughter completely.
Avaron1974 this could be for you I think.
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Will this be lesbian only? Please say yes 
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D is avoidable, Word of Mouth will be like Naughty Lyanna in this regard.
YesWill this be lesbian only? Please say yes
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All I can say without spoilers, my future plans for Holly's Honeymoon are so good that I'm seriously thinking of making a spin-off just for her.
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Any word on when the subscribestar account will be out of review so we can support you?
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Thanks for your interest in supporting me. Nothing from the Subscribestar team, I'll poke them in the next few days.
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Anyway, the link to Discord was added in the OP, I probably have to develop a fanbase to get approved on SubscribeStar faster.
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Also, Itch.io link was added in the OP.
This started out promising, but then the crime boss appeared. Organised crime isn't very interesting in the first place, and it's been done to death already.