VN - Ren'Py - Completed - World of Witchcraft [v1.0] [Mystic Sin Creations]

Rather than feeling like a complete game, this project comes across more as the introduction or prologue to what could eventually become a full experience. It is extremely short, and just when you start to get immersed, it suddenly ends. That being said, I find it quite fascinating as a proof of concept, especially if the goal was to experiment with tools and demonstrate what can be achieved with them. From that perspective, it is already a success.

The strongest aspect is the atmosphere. It manages to create a dark, eerie, and unsettling environment that immediately sets the tone and keeps the player on edge. The oppressive mood is consistent throughout, and it feels intentional, which means the project succeeds in delivering exactly what it aims to. The visual quality is also noteworthy: the imagery is sharp and effective, contributing significantly to the immersion.

The main downside, of course, is its brevity. Just when the player is ready to dive deeper, the experience abruptly concludes. That can be frustrating, but it also shows the potential this project has if it were expanded into something larger.

In summary, while it feels more like a teaser than a full game, it demonstrates solid creative direction and technical ability. It definitely leaves the player curious and wanting to see more.

single H scene with two imperceptible puzzles that can basically only be skipped. the scene itself was ok at best as far as non-con scenes go, but a bit too necrophile for my taste. yes, both puzzles are skippable tho on the second one i had to wait a few minutes for the skip button to appear.

This is in no way completed, even as a "One and Done". It's more like an unfinished proof of concept than a demo or anything else.

I totally concur with N0madS0uL's review. The artwork is really the only thing this abortion has going for it right now.

I hope the dev redoes this. The game has great potential, especially if the dev ditches the mini games or reworks them into something playable.

Ladies and gentleman, DO NOT PLAY THIS GAME. I liked the cgi but i cant stand this stupid unnecessary mini games. In the first fucking minute of the game i am trying to connect every fucking orb its not even like 4 or 5 its more than a dozen and its annoying af. I somehow managed to pass that (its kinda hard when you are thinking with your lower brain). First sex scene and boom when the guy starts to fuck the girl game asks you to do some right up left down shit like gta san andreas car mission. BITCH i am trying to masturbate!!! didint even camed to this stupid cockblack game LIKE I SAID IN THE FIRST SENTENCE DO NOT EVEN THINK OF PLAYING THIS ANNOYING SHIT.

VERSION: v.1.0
SUMMARY: Something that could have been good but is far from it, almost a waste of time to review it...
RATINGS: (out of 5):

NOTE: The following categories and scoring method are my own criteria and may require more context. Additionally, scoring is based on the state, and what is in the current version and not what may or may not be.

1. Model Visuals........................... : ⭐⭐⭐⭐
2. General Visuals......................... : ⭐⭐⭐⭐
3. Animation Quality....................... : ⭐
4. Character (Persona)..................... : ⭐
5. Story Quality & Pacing.................. : ⭐
6. Writing Quality & Dialogue.............. : ⭐⭐
7. UI & Game-play Mechanics................ : ⭐
8. Playtime & General Quality.............. : ⭐
9. Sounds & Music...........................: ⭐⭐⭐⭐
10. H-Content & Fetishes.................... : ⭐⭐⭐

Average: X of 50 possible points giving a X% rating i.e. X stars.

PROS:

1. Visually its not bad, the renders are good but grainy and that is a bit disappointing.
2. Models are actually pretty good looking, apart from the male ones, but I think that was deliberate.
3. Music, ambient and lewd sounds are not bad at all. Lewds are limited though, can use some attention.
4. Interesting concept, though thats it. Nothing more.
5. Kinks and lewd are not bad actually, but they more ideas than visuals really. But there is potential if these are any indicator, not the execution of them though.

CONS:

1. Dialogue is bad, spelling and grammer are not good. Starts off OK then goes tits up.
2. Mini games are broke, the first puzzle doesnt work and neither really the key sequence puzzle as there is no timer for it.
3. Referring to above point about kinks, there are some but they not done well at all. e.g telling the witch to lick his asshole but it never happens visually.
4. No MC, no story, no idea what is really going on, apart from a warring nation taking on some witches and there is a confrontation.
5. Very short, almost no content really and what is there is a mess at best.

FINAL REMARKS, OPINIONS & SUGGESTIONS:

NOTE: The following remarks are my personal opinions and thoughts, which may provide more context and could be useful to the developer.

• I kinda HATE mini games anyway. They should be optional and they really only serve as distraction and time wasters for the story and VN progression.
• The kink ideas are good, but they so rushed and chaotic that its not good and can't be appreciated at all. Very little of what happens during that rape scene is really good.
• Regarding the rape scene, is that witch an LI? Do we get an MC later? Or is she the MC? Will the MC be able to choose who to screw? These are some critical questions that the player would like to know.
• The story is just dog shit bad with no planning and then the VN is so short, its done before it started and you can only say WTF from start to end.

TLDR:

This VN had/has some promise, but the dev will need to reboot this and get a solid plan to go from, provide decent quality all round and more details. Flesh the game out and everything in between. This is less than a half baked attempt and considering it actually has a potentially good premise and story, its disappointing to see it delivered in this state...tsk