World [v0.1]
Plot structure (story/events/writing): This is a confusing story; it's original in that certain things just happen out of nowhere. The story progresses along decently, IMO. The tags are correct for what you see in the game. There are minor grammatical errors.
Graphics—Standard DAZ. The scenes are very well crafted. The models are believable, and the women have semi-normal proportions. The animation is decent.
Gameplay— It's Ren'Py. It plays fine. The start screen looks cool. The saves are a pain to use. I've never seen save slots like this; you have 12 slots, but if you hover over a certain area, you can get more. I didn't like it. There are no issues with playability or performance. I'm not sure if there is music; I didn't come across any. There is a decent amount of content for a [v0.1]. (Opinions may vary.)
Final words— The game has potential, but you're thrown into a mess of confusing story and conversations. The game feels like it was hastly written.
The logic is off. Like out of nowhere, the MC becomes a Surfing Marvel character.
More exposition is needed.
The color choice for the MC's little soldier is odd, probably for shock value.
IMO, the PR vibe in the thread is definitely not a plus for the game.
2 stars mainly for the confusing story; will up the score if the game improves.
Plot structure (story/events/writing): This is a confusing story; it's original in that certain things just happen out of nowhere. The story progresses along decently, IMO. The tags are correct for what you see in the game. There are minor grammatical errors.
Graphics—Standard DAZ. The scenes are very well crafted. The models are believable, and the women have semi-normal proportions. The animation is decent.
Gameplay— It's Ren'Py. It plays fine. The start screen looks cool. The saves are a pain to use. I've never seen save slots like this; you have 12 slots, but if you hover over a certain area, you can get more. I didn't like it. There are no issues with playability or performance. I'm not sure if there is music; I didn't come across any. There is a decent amount of content for a [v0.1]. (Opinions may vary.)
Final words— The game has potential, but you're thrown into a mess of confusing story and conversations. The game feels like it was hastly written.
The logic is off. Like out of nowhere, the MC becomes a Surfing Marvel character.
The color choice for the MC's little soldier is odd, probably for shock value.
IMO, the PR vibe in the thread is definitely not a plus for the game.
2 stars mainly for the confusing story; will up the score if the game improves.