I had high expectations after reading the disclaimers about storytelling, slow burn, and meaningful character progression. But in reality, the MC is all over the place. He’s presented as reliable and understanding, yet his thoughts are constantly judgmental and lustful—like a hormone-driven teenager rather than a 23-year-old former martial arts instructor turned janitor. His behavior feels delusional and inconsistent with how the story tries to portray him.
Then there are the logical inconsistencies.
Many choices don’t matter. For example, rejecting the Goblin Princess is specifically said to leave her heartbroken, yet she acts like nothing happened. If the MC is meant to be decent, why doesn’t he at least give a proper response? If choices don’t impact the story, at least let characters acknowledge them instead of skipping to the next scene.
The so-called "slow burn" is nonexistent. You meet several girls, exchange a few lines, and they immediately throw themselves at you. And the MC isn’t just awkward—he's downright creepy, going after every girl and manipulating non-humans into lewd situations simply because they don’t understand human society. If this is supposed to be a decent guy, then why does he act like a sleazy manipulator? He’s not framed as an anti-hero or villain, but his actions say otherwise.
It’s not all bad—the worldbuilding, background story, and character personalities have potential. But events shouldn’t happen out of nowhere, and characters need to react to the MC’s actions logically.
Dropping my rating to 2 stars. Objectively, this just isn’t good writing for a VN.
Then there are the logical inconsistencies.
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Many choices don’t matter. For example, rejecting the Goblin Princess is specifically said to leave her heartbroken, yet she acts like nothing happened. If the MC is meant to be decent, why doesn’t he at least give a proper response? If choices don’t impact the story, at least let characters acknowledge them instead of skipping to the next scene.
The so-called "slow burn" is nonexistent. You meet several girls, exchange a few lines, and they immediately throw themselves at you. And the MC isn’t just awkward—he's downright creepy, going after every girl and manipulating non-humans into lewd situations simply because they don’t understand human society. If this is supposed to be a decent guy, then why does he act like a sleazy manipulator? He’s not framed as an anti-hero or villain, but his actions say otherwise.
It’s not all bad—the worldbuilding, background story, and character personalities have potential. But events shouldn’t happen out of nowhere, and characters need to react to the MC’s actions logically.
Dropping my rating to 2 stars. Objectively, this just isn’t good writing for a VN.